~ Neon Night Street

~ Neon Night Street

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~ Neon Night Street, Elisa Laura, SciFi, Dreams, Fantasy, Neon, Blue, You and Me, Us, The World, Elysion

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~ Neon Night Street

 

 

Dark waves, colored curls,

Dancing music, light waves

Flashy lampposts, and - you and me

 

Hinged doors, glass walls,

Neon windows, manipulated

Food, and - you and me

 

Dancing bubbles, foolish people

Tormented drunk mutants

All by themselves, so too, - you and I

 

But you and me,

In the dead of this night,

Could both deeply see the Neon lightning

 

Between dreamland and reality

On each other's skin, where we dreamed

All so blue, in Neon, Night street

 

Electrocuted...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2014


Author's Note

Enjoy - xx - :)

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All the wilds of the nightlife are painted here beautifully. The excitement, the sounds and the colors. All infused together and ripping apart while in the middle moves your love and you. Together, in unison, experiencing it all. Or maybe this scene is merely experiencing you and your love.

The blending mix here is awesome. I loved the executing final word and the music..of course. xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Your reviews make me so happy! esp. after a busy day ;) you know what I mean lol xoxo
Thank y.. read more



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All the wilds of the nightlife are painted here beautifully. The excitement, the sounds and the colors. All infused together and ripping apart while in the middle moves your love and you. Together, in unison, experiencing it all. Or maybe this scene is merely experiencing you and your love.

The blending mix here is awesome. I loved the executing final word and the music..of course. xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Your reviews make me so happy! esp. after a busy day ;) you know what I mean lol xoxo
Thank y.. read more
A dreamscape worthy of a surrealist equivalent to euphoria...
Well done young lady! ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

If there would be one, who would get it, it would be you Dream Weaver... thank you my buddy for your.. read more
Dream Weaver

10 Years Ago

Always my pleasure E. L. :) x

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much again buddy -x- :)
Fantastic! I love how this sort o feels like a riding a bike up and dow a hillside. Lots of ups and downs in terms of the visuals and emotions envoked, really enjoyed it!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for peeking in on this electric dream I had lately.... :) your words are always tr.. read more
I get the feeling of peace, serenity and passion between two people in the midst of chaos. That the connection can overpower anything and everything surrounding the two. I really loved this and think the title was very cool.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I love your interpretation... :) It was a dream, I had, and you really help me an.. read more
Oh your words are so eloquent and heart warming, you are leaving the hopeless romantic in me breathless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend, your words mean the world always! :)
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome hon, reading your art is always a pleasure.

10 Years Ago

I feel so happy you like my work. Thank you Dale :) once again.
what a happy way to die...electrocuted with a lover...under the neon lights...and flashy lampposts...

this poem is electric...i like the playing on the phrasing "you and me" and then switching to "you and i"

nicely done my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you dearly Jacob, for being here my friend.... :) your thoughts, are always valued here.
WOW!... such an Electric vibe.... it has a stirring effect...
The music is enchanting, as well...
I felt a hypnotic wave of energy coursing through every line, this piece certainly comes alive...
An intoxicating write, Sis.. NICE!~xoxoxo~;)


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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

And a WOW to your reply here love, fantastic.... I am so so happy you entered this realm of a dream .. read more
Elisa, my friend - I always enjoy the fantastic journey into your vivid world!! And it's clear, from the way you describe it, that you share the experiences of this world with another, or with several others.

There are many cryptic elements to this, which is another thing I enjoy very much. For example, I particularly love the "Hinged doors, glass walls/Neon windows, manipulated/Food, and - you and me." It's as if you're walking through a hallucinatory world with a lover, or a friend, and only the two of you understand it.

It reminds me of the film "Enter the Void" by Gaspar Noe, in which a young man is murdered and his soul enters another dimension in the afterlife. I'm certain that there is more to the universe than what we currently see in front of us, and you have described a part of that.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Eric, my dear friend, just another superb review from you, I can't thank you enough lately for the g.. read more
Eric Pudalov

10 Years Ago

I would love to hear about the dream one day (when you have some free time)! I haven't been on Skyp.. read more

10 Years Ago

We will talk about that soon... and other things, also our work that still needs to be done he he..... read more
A wonderful sense of controlled free-fall into electric night. Excellent!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Aaah buddy thank you for saying so...................... yay! you get me! :)
A very nice journey in your words.
"But you and me,
In the dead of this night,
Could both deeply see the Neon lightning"
Neon lights, good company and time. A good place to land. The strong description took me to good place and visions. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you my beautiful friend... :) your words are a treasure always.

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Tags: ~ Neon Night Street, Elisa Laura, SciFi, Dreams, Fantasy, Neon, Blue, You and Me, Us, The World, Elysion

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