~ Appassionata

~ Appassionata

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~ Appassionata, Elisa Laura, Surreal, Love, Happiness, You & Me, Dancing, Music, Heartstrings, Romance... Dark Romance, Supernova, Connection, Stars, Sun, Moon...

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Appassionata

 

Where my thoughts, tingled yours,

In our sky, the clouds in hue;

Of dark fashioned happiness,

 

An embrace of your deepest

Inner feelings, saluted mine,

 

Two hearts

             One beat, 

                         Softly, tenderly

 

The rhythm of intense passion

Entwined us, as colliding stars

 

Where darkness, became our

Supernova, a dance of

You and me - unending.



~ Elisa Laura

© 2014


Author's Note

Enjoy! -xx- :)

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What a masterful way of weaving through a cosmic connection... I absolutely love this, Sis!
It's dark, mysterious, and full of possibilities...light years dancing before you...intertwined in passion!

A romantic yearning is embedded in the stars.. (sigh)...

Lovely art,, Sis!...superb!~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

Yes, can't wait, Sis!.. take care, Beauiful!~xoxoxo~:)
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

*Beautiful* :)

10 Years Ago

Love, I gotcha! :D you are the most beautiful! :) -xxx- will send pics, this weekend of my road-trip.. read more



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What a masterful way of weaving through a cosmic connection... I absolutely love this, Sis!
It's dark, mysterious, and full of possibilities...light years dancing before you...intertwined in passion!

A romantic yearning is embedded in the stars.. (sigh)...

Lovely art,, Sis!...superb!~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

Yes, can't wait, Sis!.. take care, Beauiful!~xoxoxo~:)
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

*Beautiful* :)

10 Years Ago

Love, I gotcha! :D you are the most beautiful! :) -xxx- will send pics, this weekend of my road-trip.. read more
Love and a little passion...excellent.
Some very nice images.
Honest wording.

Admiration
Scotty
xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Scotty :) -xx-
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scotty.....
Simply beautiful, E.

The only thing I would recommend is to change "tender" to "tenderly" in order to retain parallel structure.

Best Regards, K

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear friend, for your help there ;-) Indeed it looks better now! :)
Best.. read more

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Added on April 11, 2014
Last Updated on June 6, 2014
Tags: ~ Appassionata, Elisa Laura, Surreal, Love, Happiness, You & Me, Dancing, Music, Heartstrings, Romance... Dark Romance, Supernova, Connection, Stars, Sun, Moon...

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