~ Magnetic Jam

~ Magnetic Jam, Elisa Laura, Psychedellic, Fantasy, Above, High, Skies, Love, Music, Colors, Touch, Beyond, Butterflies, Magnetic

~ Magnetic Jam

 

 

Thirsty, I saw you,

In my REM sleep,

You seemed to move my eyes,

With your silent music;

 

Fiery notes, rapid gaps,

But deep spirited colors,

Overcome the void

With a warm feeling,

 

It brought unfathomable passion,

By silky thoughts,

Burning in my mind,

Singing in my deepest pain,

 

Howling like hungry wolves,

In a chilly night, where the moon

Smiles with her big pale face

 

“Dust we are, in gray matter;

She whispers….”

 

But colorful as a significant other

Who shall visit you,

With the love of music;

 

And plays the strings of your heart

As if he lost himself

Just right there…

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy xx :)

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

Gorgeous and supremely deep poetic work, Elisa (as always)! I've read this piece twice, and there's almost always something I just can't decipher. But perhaps it's better that way!

"It brought unfathomable passion/By silky thoughts," is possibly my favorite stanza out of all of them. But the story as a whole is supremely mystical and filled with magnificent beauty.

The message I've somewhat gathered from it is that someone (personified as the moon in your vision) was telling you of a "significant other" who would visit you, possibly in this dimension, communicating with "silent music," as you put it.

Of course, there is more depth to it than a simple review can explain, but I sense that you have many dimensions through which you travel, and these things are revealed to you in those dimensions. The poetry reflects that as best it can.

Thank you very much Eric, for another great review, with depth, and layered observations. I so appreciate it! :)

[paddy d daly]

This is really something Elisa, I loved the three line fourth verse followed by those two magic lines,
''Dust we are, in grey matter;
She whispers... .''
Excellent work from start to finish...:-)

Thank you so much Paddy dear. :) I appreciate you!

[paddy d daly]

welcome. I appreciate your work elisa, :)

[David Scott]

One of my favorites from you Eli. :)
Glad to see you dreaming and changing the world with the beauty of your dreams.
I love how your subconscious mind finds expression in your conscious world.
I did enjoy the thought about our minds being only dust is all we are is the mental process of calculating thoughts. Then you offer a lasting state of being in the interactions of those we share the music of our souls with. It is easy to get lost in the music found in the heart of those we love.
a wonderful poem in intention and delivery.
Be well child of light and music. You are a singer of dreams and your eyes will not let the darkness rule even in the depths of sleep.

Scott, my dear vitamine D. Your reviews, mark always a spot in my heart and they never leave. Thank you my friend for such wonderful words here. :)

[bitz]

Nice one.beautifully describd d hearts feelin...was d painting urs.?its splendid

Thank you very much! :) and the painting is not mine :)

[PurpleQuartz]

I love the passion and desire that flows throughout this piece. The image really helps connect with the bursts of colour in the words, and the music adds a sense of fantasy. Wonderful!! :)

Thank you so much PQ :)

[Pryde Foltz]

“Dust we are, in gray matter;
She whispers….”

Love the transcendental piece, Elisa. So layered.

Thank you Pryde xx