~ Impermanent

~ Impermanent, E.L. Elisa Laura, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Reality, Dreams, Dimensions, Truth Seeking, Aliens, Supernatural.

 

~ Impermanent

 

The shimmer on the ceiling,

       Made her eyes sleepy,

If water waves reflection danced

       Quiet circles,  further in her mind,

 

Gently hypnotize

       Of her many thoughts

Emptying her memory

       Feeding the flourishing  fate

 

Dragged by bright rays

      Quiet dreams

In larger dimension

      Of her so elected tunnel

 

But impermanent, was her memory

      Dreamed of hues in mystery,

She never knew what happened,

      Until the day began,

 

Until the day began,

      Anew, and anew…

And for so many years,

     Like the time stood still…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Dedicated to a "Special Friend" Enjoy! -x- :)

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

This is so beautiful, in a range of ways that I struggle to express by the use of words. I'm crying... You know the reason... Sigh :')

You were let into someone else's field of flowers, someone's personal experience and reality. You accepted what was shown with an open core, and that of which you perceived you turned into art. Truth cannot be understood before it is felt, and the heart needs no proof. However, I do believe there's a subconscious reason to your fast acceptance on the matter at hand, certainly.

Gosh... I can think of no greater present to be given by a friend, than one of such immense trust and creativity.

You grew a flower, here x

Thank you so very much, for your kindred soul, my sweet friend, and your words towards this very special poem for a very special friend... it made me travel through the brilliant mind, my friend has, and I experienced these words from out of the car, in a mix of feelings, and fiction. You are so right, about the Truth, that cannot be understood before it's felt. I felt this truth... I'm so glad I could write from out of the bottem of my heart again, for those are so meant... Thank you for your words, they mean the world to me... -x- :)

[Michelle N. H.]

The words along with your intention are incredibly moving.. You are welcome, Elisitta ^^ Always. x

I'm so happy I could give / bring that feeling over, that's why I keep on writing... Thank you again... Selmisitta... ^^ -x- :) smiles!

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is really interesting. Bravo! :D

Thank you dear one... :) I apperciate it.

[Lyn Anderson]

An intriguing read -- one that is not overtly sci fi, but subtle.

Thank you so much KL, I apperciate your thoughts, on this ode for a good friend. :)

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You did awesome:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) I love it:)

Thank you Jon. I appreciate it. :)

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Your very welcome dear friend:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))