~ Impermanent

~ Impermanent, E.L. Elisa Laura, Science Fiction, Fantasy, Reality, Dreams, Dimensions, Truth Seeking, Aliens, Supernatural.

 

~ Impermanent

 

The shimmer on the ceiling,

       Made her eyes sleepy,

If water waves reflection danced

       Quiet circles,  further in her mind,

 

Gently hypnotize

       Of her many thoughts

Emptying her memory

       Feeding the flourishing  fate

 

Dragged by bright rays

      Quiet dreams

In larger dimension

      Of her so elected tunnel

 

But impermanent, was her memory

      Dreamed of hues in mystery,

She never knew what happened,

      Until the day began,

 

Until the day began,

      Anew, and anew…

And for so many years,

     Like the time stood still…

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Dedicated to a "Special Friend" Enjoy! -x- :)

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

This is so beautiful, in a range of ways that I struggle to express by the use of words. I'm crying... You know the reason... Sigh :')

You were let into someone else's field of flowers, someone's personal experience and reality. You accepted what was shown with an open core, and that of which you perceived you turned into art. Truth cannot be understood before it is felt, and the heart needs no proof. However, I do believe there's a subconscious reason to your fast acceptance on the matter at hand, certainly.

Gosh... I can think of no greater present to be given by a friend, than one of such immense trust and creativity.

You grew a flower, here x

Thank you so very much, for your kindred soul, my sweet friend, and your words towards this very special poem for a very special friend... it made me travel through the brilliant mind, my friend has, and I experienced these words from out of the car, in a mix of feelings, and fiction. You are so right, about the Truth, that cannot be understood before it's felt. I felt this truth... I'm so glad I could write from out of the bottem of my heart again, for those are so meant... Thank you for your words, they mean the world to me... -x- :)

[Michelle N. H.]

The words along with your intention are incredibly moving.. You are welcome, Elisitta ^^ Always. x

I'm so happy I could give / bring that feeling over, that's why I keep on writing... Thank you again... Selmisitta... ^^ -x- :) smiles!

[Pryde Foltz]

Dragged by bright rays
Quiet dreams
In larger dimension
Of her so elected tunnel

Fantastic imagery, Elisa.

Thank you so much Pryde, for your review.

[David Scott]

I can relate to this write in many ways Eli. Yes, I could see the dreaming and the otherworldly thoughts, but for me, I see more concrete meaning.
I see a loved one with Alzheimer's loosing her memory. There is a special sadness in this thought.
I see also can see lovers forgetting the good times they had together and moving away from each other.
Yet, I can see a loving heart forgetting the pains of past hurts as well.
You lead the mind to see the near death experience of the "light at the end of the tunnel", only you do not say it is light. You give us more mysterious considerations and possibilities in this write.
I personally love your last stanza. I always feel it is good to leave yourself and the reader with hope. You do this well eve with the sad truth held true to the intention of the write. The years, the time, it is lost forever. Somehow, we start new each moment or each day and find a way to begin again. Even if it is in the next life.
Worth waiting for. ;)
Yes, it is good to have a buddy like you too.

My friend, thank you for this wonderful review, and all you see in this little poem. I love to ponder about your thoughts, and visions... they mean the world to me. I treasure this review, and keep it forever with me Scott. :) Thanks buddy.

[Rachel Anderson]

I love this, and the music added an extra feeling to it. Great job.

Thank you very much Rachel for the kind words. :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi Raven Sis

The poem could be about a person that is laying down looking up at a spinning fan while the ceiling lights reflect heat waves influencing control of her thoughts while her in a comfortable state to view her concerns and waking up in the morning realizing the previous night has stayed behind.

Or it could be about a person that was abducted and her brain has a hard time figuring the events and stays quiet because most persons dont know how to provide comfort or solutions in those type of situations adding to her confusion.

I like the author's intellectual ability in which the protagonist situation is artistically approached and described.

Thank you dear Anika for your beautiful and intelligent review towards the subject matter here...read moreThank you dear Anika for your beautiful and intelligent review towards the subject matter here...

I always love your reviews! :) Elisa.

[Pax]

The first three stanza made me thing of alien abduction, :D, reminds me of the documentaries that says they abduct you and studies you, afterwards erase your memory of the said event. Despite those fictional theme, I see, how fragile is our memories, how delicate our dreams that comes as they go, or how time just stood still untouchable always unreachable...

so beautiful, big sis...

My sweet brother, thank you, you are the first who isn't afraid to enter this realm... I knew you were one of the most perspective ones... sigh! ♥ You are on point!!!! so beautiful your brain is!!! thank you for being so open minded! and always a part of my lovely life! **HUGS** try to come over in a bit... must run now sigh... x

[Pax]

you are most welcome, always! tight hugs....
families touchs each other soul, stay together even in silence...
Know that I'm always around, take care, always...

Tight hugs my dearest lil Bro...
You are my fam, through thick and thin,
A brother, of heart, a philosopher of soul-kin
Know that I am too, for you, and only you!
Always (sharing smoothies in thought) he he.. xx

[Pax]

haha, love smoothies... even though i have a cold, I'll still definitely enjoy it... :)

Awww get well soon dear.... you must be flying high :)

[Pax]

the changing of season always gets me sick, from hot to cold, cold to hot... summer is not yet in its peak that is why, it is still starting here, sandstorm and cold winds in the early dawn... thank you big sis... i will be better soon as i adjust... hope you too take care of yourself, we will fly high soon... hugs

Yeah, that's true, I know what you mean with that... you are sensitive to changes too.. Oh you must live in such a difficult area for you... Yes, soon dear bro!! hugs to you! :) xx

[icelandicblue]

This is so delicate and lovely. It feels live a cool ointment on a burn. I think I shall sit here a while in your poem and catch my breath.

Please feel home here... it's good to have you by! :) much love, my dear friend, thank you.

[Trace]

What a beautiful and powerful poem. The music you chose to accompany it is haunting and compliments your words perfectly.
This is a 100/100 for me.

Trace

Thank you very much my friend... also for the 100, I'm so pleased you felt my poem. Elisa :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I know this could be about someone trying to forget a lost love, but deeper between the lines I read it like someone who is starting to get alzheimer disease. Either way very powerful words.

Thank you for your beautiful words Dale... you are appreciated! -x- :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome sweetie, always a pleasure to read your heart and mind.

I'm happy with your friendship, and great heartfelt reviews always! take much care Dale. :) I'm on my way to yours and others... when my mailbox is done ;-)

[Rossen]

When since fiction meets eloquence and there color collide new worlds open
you impress me Elisa Laura...


100/100


Rossen

Sigh, my sweet friend, thank you so much for being here, your time, and wonderful words... :) Elisa.