~ Light in the Sky

~ Light in the Sky

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~ Light in the Sky, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, Dramatic, Thunderstorms, Headaches, Migraine, Ozon, Weather, connection to nature, Blue, Green, WaterSign.

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 Light in the Sky

 

Stabbing metal pain,

      Burning through each line

Of my so cold body -


      The smell of ozone,  far away,

Misty,  mighty grand dense clouds

      In front of my train of thought

 

And a rail of blindness ;

     Cold chilly Icy wind,

The smell of ozone, yet behind

 

      Thunderstorms are on the way

Within this core of being;

      There is light in the Sky,

 

For those who are

     In deep pain,

And for those who are just feeling


 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2014


Author's Note

Enjoy! xx

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To be in tune with nature and to feel the change of weather before it occurs, a lightening before it strikes.. Being highly sensitive is not to be weak. On the contrary, it lets you perceive more than the ones who are not. It allows for you to more easily make out an entirety rather than a snippet, whilst aware there is more than meets the eye.

You express sympathy, comfort, togetherness.. by the end it is evident. It has its highs and lows to be a feeler, as with everything. Your hurt is my hurt is everyone's hurt, and I am reminded of "Powder", his wisdom and the suffering he had to endure prior to and during every thunderstorm. You describe a powerful sensing here, of what is and what is to come.

Next to fear there is love, a yin and yang for balance. You stand in between duality with a tentacle to each side that lets you sense both planes, similar to a butterfly, receptive as an antenna.. All is accessible to everyone. We're no different and there is beauty in that, in everything, whether it'd be considered negative, it is fuel for the inner artist.

Your writing is always exceedingly deep. It's fantastic, a pleasure to read and examine :)) xx

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10 Years Ago

Your reviews, are the mere powder itself my sweet friend... you reach in gateways, and further visio.. read more
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

I'm so, so glad. Thank you as well ^^ I have much love for you, and your incredible art. x

10 Years Ago

And I for you! you're such a good friend to me, through thick and thin! ^^ through all weather, cold.. read more



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Pain is something not easily felt when written in words but you my love has described it well here speechless reader here love it

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Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

For someone who i think very highly of YOU DESERVE IT my sunshine

10 Years Ago

Aw, your heart is grand, sweetie, I am on my way to catch up.... for you deserve it so much too!
Lover Of Words

10 Years Ago

Take your time sweetie its in a place you can find it no need to rush love
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ron
I wish there was for some of us. This is a very beautiful poem Elisa.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ron! :) :)
ron

10 Years Ago

Your most welcome :) :)
Sis, you have described the very core of this pain...

Migraines are a whole entity within itself... it can ravage you physically...
"Thunderstorms" are a force too powerful NOT to wreak havoc... but it is the light in which I wait for at the end of the dark tunnel, which is the saving grace...

Emotive piece, Sis!...excellent!~xoxo~ *.*

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Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

No hurry, Sis... going to have lunch... XXXXXXXXXXXXXX *.*
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

Enjoy!!!!!!

10 Years Ago

He he, when you have lunch I always have dinner, funny fact... ;) enjoy your lunch... I know it will.. read more
The smell of rain... Yes, it is in the air. We stand before it at times and we look back as well. The smell connects us to memories very much. We anticipate the storm's behavior from our past experiences and they are reinforced as we pass to the other side and find the same scent fresh in our minds...
Yet, there is light. It is a gift to all. Some of us are almost beat to death with their pain and some just want to stop feeling anything because is seems every little thing hurts.
I wonder if the scent of ozone carries reassurance that the storm is over or is warning of a storm approaching yet again... Same scent, very different outcome.
Yeah! I was so happy to read your work again.
Thank you for sharing your vibrant talent with us all.

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10 Years Ago

What a beautiful review dear Vitamine D. :) You feel things too, I can tell, and with this review yo.. read more
And she shall wash away all that is fowl, all that is evil. She shall bring forth a mighty temptress to wreek havoc upon the land. When all is clensed, she shall bring forth pure spirit, when all is clensed. I loved this piece Elisa, as I love all that I have read of yours.


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10 Years Ago

Aww fantastic!!! :) that makes me happy! I'm so glad you enjoyed! after a good sleep I'm back for yo.. read more
realmwriter

10 Years Ago

I'm going to camune with a plant and the eavening moonlight, as I like to do after a few good reads... read more

10 Years Ago

Reminds me of the moonflower, great... I can't wait to read them... sweet friend xx
Hmmmm, a very interesting write… I could see this a few ways… metaphorically being about Mother Nature choking on the toxins we release…. then I can see the compassion of humanity looking out for those in need. Absolutely love it.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

I love your interpretation my friend... thanks for pondering here... :) and thanks for being always .. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I just express what the poem says to me… I appreciate you sharing your heart and mind t.. read more

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much again :)

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Tags: ~ Light in the Sky, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, Dramatic, Thunderstorms, Headaches, Migraine, Ozon, Weather, connection to nature, Blue, Green, WaterSign.

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