~ Light in the Sky

~ Light in the Sky, Elisa Laura, E.L. Fantasy, Dramatic, Thunderstorms, Headaches, Migraine, Ozon, Weather, connection to nature, Blue, Green, WaterSign.

~  Light in the Sky

 

Stabbing metal pain,

      Burning through each line

Of my so cold body -

      The smell of ozone,  far away,

Misty,  mighty grand dense clouds

      In front of my train of thought

 

And a rail of blindness ;

     Cold chilly Icy wind,

The smell of ozone, yet behind

 

      Thunderstorms are on the way

Within this core of being;

      There is light in the Sky,

 

For those who are

     In deep pain,

And for those who are just feeling

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

To be in tune with nature and to feel the change of weather before it occurs, a lightening before it strikes.. Being highly sensitive is not to be weak. On the contrary, it lets you perceive more than the ones who are not. It allows for you to more easily make out an entirety rather than a snippet, whilst aware there is more than meets the eye.

You express sympathy, comfort, togetherness.. by the end it is evident. It has its highs and lows to be a feeler, as with everything. Your hurt is my hurt is everyone's hurt, and I am reminded of "Powder", his wisdom and the suffering he had to endure prior to and during every thunderstorm. You describe a powerful sensing here, of what is and what is to come.

Next to fear there is love, a yin and yang for balance. You stand in between duality with a tentacle to each side that lets you sense both planes, similar to a butterfly, receptive as an antenna.. All is accessible to everyone. We're no different and there is beauty in that, in everything, whether it'd be considered negative, it is fuel for the inner artist.

Your writing is always exceedingly deep. It's fantastic, a pleasure to read and examine :)) xx

Your reviews, are the mere powder itself my sweet friend... you reach in gateways, and further visions, then the most... I can read this review over and over again, and never get bored, each time I see new perspectives, on what you say, and bring... it's so lovely! I can't thank you enough Shelly... :) There is all spelled out, here what I intended to write, or bring over... I love you and your writings so much too! Thank you dear one. -x- :) for feeling home with what I express, and do write.

[Michelle N. H.]

I'm so, so glad. Thank you as well ^^ I have much love for you, and your incredible art. x

And I for you! you're such a good friend to me, through thick and thin! ^^ through all weather, cold or warm, through all pains and joy! :) many thanks dear. -x- :)

[paddy d daly]

Beautiful imagery and sense of feeling, love how you finish it off with a optimistic note:-)

Thank you for the beautiful thoughts, here Paddy! :) very very appreciated. Elisa :)

[Deuces]

This read as the calm before the storm. What an eerie write from you. I loved it... it was the realization of negativity upon us... and the comfort in that cold, dark realization. Your pen is still on fire, my friend.

Dear G. you understand my brain always bud! :) I am eerie maybe lol... sorry can't help it hah! :Dread moreDear G. you understand my brain always bud! :) I am eerie maybe lol... sorry can't help it hah! :D
Yep!!! you said that well... and that's reality mixed with fantasy. ;) I love to write for it's my calling and curse. -x- :) be back for you!

Dear G. you understand my brain always bud! :) I am eerie maybe lol... sorry can't help it hah! :D Yep!!! you said that well... and that's reality mixed with fantasy. ;) I love to write for it's my calling and curse. -x- :) be back for you! (again for my review got cutt off... ) a WC glitch....

[Deuces]

Any time, dear. My pleasure!

Thank you again, that means much to me G. :)

[Frieda P]

Sad, ethereal, yet down to earth, you bring forth so many emotions when you write sweet Eli, there's a darkly hue'd vulnerability in this somber piece, yet a light of hope that shines through at the same time...music is sheer perfection too. Painfully gorgeous cara. x

My darling, thank you so much! I love your review, words, thoughts, they bring me earlier back on the cafe, you do that honey... you and your sweet embrace. I can't thank you enough big Sis. :) Ti amo sorella -x-

[Frieda P]

Ahh you always bring a smile to my face with your warmth sweetie. The pleasure is mine sorellina :-) Ti amo troppo xo

Anche'io a te sorella.... spero che domani ti trovera... mi manchi troppo!! Sei sempre grande!!! Ti mando le ((((Coccole)))) -x- :D

[PearlPoet]

"For those who are

In deep pain,"


^^^ Glad that you were thinking of me... Dear Soul Mate... ~hugs~

Of course I thought of you and others, who are in pain, this one was about a special migraine, I felt, through nature, and a close one, on distance.... headaches are telling more than they should.... ;-) ~ Hugs ~

[Pryde Foltz]

The smell of ozone, far away,
Misty, mighty grand dense clouds
In front of my train of thought

A superbly expressive and surreal. Loved it.

Thank you sweet Sis.... always.... I will be back for you, good to see you again! -x-

[Effector Prime]

so vivid.. inspiring! it has inspired me to write Photon that will be up on wc soon :) thank you Eli, and thanks for sharing this awesome poem :)

Thank you so much my dear friend, and I'll be there to read "Photon" let me know when.... I'm very happy I could inspire you! :) :)

[Effector Prime]

you're welcome :) Photon's up luv :) playing it on guitar right now :)

Oh send me the song... ;-) and your review is there.... for I loved it, thank you so much!

[Effector Prime]

thanks matey!! you're such an inspiration.. :) I will send it, soon I hope :) I have a ghoulish voice though, you have been warned lol I sing in screams growls.. not to mention shrieks and grunts BAHA! good on ya :) cheers!

Matey! always, no worries, I'm eclectic, and can handle every piece of music, even yours BAHAHA!!! you know me ;-) Thanks so much xx

[Effector Prime]

oh yes I do! lol you're welcome :) btw this music here is thrilling! and for photon, wish I archived the melody I was humming last night :( never mind, a better one might come up! :) keep ya posted :) cheers!

The melody shall haunt you in your dreams, once or twice or much more.... it comes, when you never expect it... ;-) then you should grab your guitar.... and record. :D just a tip he he... it's how it's working with this brain.... and I love the theory, and even more the being one with a photon.... amazing. :) Cheers lovely!

[Effector Prime]

indeed :) my state of mind is often times determined by my future well being.. quantum entanglement lol so I've learnt to never chase anything beyond reach.. but love deems us hypocrit :D a better melody will haunt me lol cheers! :)

LOL, you never know when it comes.... but it will come, for sure... lol cheers buddy :)

[Effector Prime]

likewise :) rock on!

[Eric Pudalov]

Elisa, my good friend!! I always, always enjoy your poetry, and this one is no exception! As sad and somewhat disturbing as the words are, I find them inspiring in a way.

I especially like the refrain of "The smell of ozone, far away" and "The smell of ozone, yet behind," which help to tie the theme together. Although I certainly sense that this has something to do with inner turmoil, or chaos (which is a little upsetting).

Nonetheless, whether happy, sad, chaotic, or just reflective, I really do enjoy and feel inspired by reading your poetry. It's a pleasure to be allowed into your world.

Eric buddy, thank you so much for the lovely words, and thoughts upon my poem... I love to see each and every interpretation of this. I'm grateful with your words. :)

[Eric Pudalov]

You're very welcome my friend!! I see you have some other poems I haven't read yet, too. Will check those out soon.

Thank you once again :) take your time, whenever you have the need, my poems will be here forever....

[Eric Pudalov]

As Pinkie Pie (my favorite pony) would say, "For-EVERRRRRRR!"

Hah! lol..... yes! :D

[Eric Pudalov]

Wait a minute - is this about a migraine headache? I just saw that in the tags. That would explain a lot, actually!! Wow...that gives it a whole new context.

....................... ;-)

[Eric Pudalov]

Yeah, I didn't catch that the first time around. But poetry, as I always say, can have multiple meanings to different people.

No worries, I do love all interpretations, it's a cryptic piece of writing, so I expect nothing more than my readers will think about it a several times, which I love. :) thank you so much again! always.

[Horizon K.]

The smell of ozone with clouds in your eyes, and pain all around... This makes me feel like the head of a thundercloud, drowned by my own sound, my own lightening splitting me in two... Is this what a migraine feels like Sis? I love the way you describe this, and the ozone... The ozone makes me feel so lightheaded...

Wow, Sis, yes... it does... you are very perspective! loved this review... I feel intense pain before it goes thunder (in nature). So those two intense mixes I tried to convey here :D I loved your review, you are the best... after sleep I will be back, saved your beautiful poem already! sigh... ;) -x- big kiss!

[Horizon K.]

Aww Sis, rest well... And I'm sorry you ever have feel any pain...
I do have to send you the Sakura pic I took the other day. You know, now whenever I see Sakura, I always think of you! The petals are already falling, here...

Oh now I'm ok, all is happy and vivid!! :D it was this weekend very intense... I traveled much, and it was fantastic, but when the weather changes, I get this... 30 minutes later it hails/rains/or thunders... :) Oh please do!! I'm in our other world ;) I do too!! I'm still waiting they will bloom here, so I can make pictures for you. Oh no! so soon.... you live 2/3 months in my future love! -x-

[Horizon K.]

Ok, glad to hear you are well! And traveling which I know you love . Anyway, I just sent you the pics dearest! When yours bloom you can send to me and we can have extra long, seasons of Sakura...

Oh I so look forward to that my SakuraSis. :) I will make you plenty! we'll have 4/5 months of this pure bliss then!!!! All is good dear... your pictures were so amazing, I thank you with whole my heart. ♥♥ till tomorrow sweetheart.

[sharonlee]

garrulous squalls tore at weather-beaten eaves
bombastic winds blew fallen leaves
loquacious howls sang with wailing trees
clamorous sonnets in screeches weave
a light and sound symphony
as thunder rolls across the sky
I look up in hope... and sigh...

Oooh ♥ what a beautiful poem to my poem my sweet friend, I knew you would listen to every heartbeat... :) thank you so much!!! love hugs, and peace! :)

[sharonlee]

My pleasure Elisa Laura... I hope you are and tackling life with a smile. xxx

Thank you once again... I do dear! :) I hope you too, it's beautiful outside now, spring is coming here... I know your fall will be there... xxx on my way to your writings soon :)