~ The Woods did Listen

~ The Woods did Listen, E.L. Elisa Laura, FanFiction, My Style, Surreal, Woods, Freedom, Love, Life, Dreams, Nature, Sakura, Trees, Unconcious

~ The Woods did Listen

 

 

Deeper, into your surreal arms, filled

With your enigmatic love, I fell;

Wrapped up, in silken pink leaves,

Cuddled with your wooden fingers

Kissed by only your breath, your air,

The wind, you blew through my hair,

And I knew, I would stay forever

For only you did listen to my core

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[realmwriter]

And when the roots entwined my legs, up around my waist. The grave did come to call to take me to my fall. Lest the wild call, where wind and water come together to meat the air and sea. Where land and soil collide, to meat rock and stone. Down in the depths of earth, where man is rent in bone.

Yet another inspiring piece Elisa, I loved it.

Thank you my dear friend, and WOW! you seem to be understanding my brain in depts, only a few can! through all elements, wonderful such a wonderful review... so so grateful this woman is. :) thank you.

[realmwriter]

You're most welcome

............ :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The language you proclaim in the lines..Elisa...
the atmosphere is felt quite well...
the way this goes about the verse...
captures the moment...
and the reader with the ambiance...
like the musical --- fits everything into place...

Thank you very much Glen, I appreciate your thoughts, and visit very much! :) (hope all is well) will come by for you soon too! catching up, on my own tempo... grateful for your presence. -Elisa

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...there is only so many hours in a day...and many reviews needed...feeling much better after recovering from surgery in late January...

Exactly, I get dizzy.... lol Oh you were through health issues too... I know how it feels... I wish you well, and hope that you stay well... my best, Elisa.

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Wow my gosh that's some real wind:) I love this my gosh girl, Awesome music btw:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

Thank you so much Jon! for feeling this brain... :) thanks for your visit here!

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Smilesssssssssssss Very welcome dear friend:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

........... :) take care Jon, you know I'm back soon for you :)

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Ill be waiting:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) you too dear:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Extant]

I've just read a little piece of some haven of yours and I'm glad you shared it with all of us. There's a deep sense of peace here, such a pleasure to read.

Thank you dearly Haunt, when you come by I'm always happy!

[Horizon K.]

Sakura world!! So first, yesterday I took more photos of Sakura, and I was just in this dream... I sat in the grass beneath ... the petals are already falling here in Cali.
I love this of course Sis, the title too, for it is in such a place, with such moments, that reality is so beautiful and magical, that it feels like a dream, exactly what our core wished for, if only we could stay forever, in this evanescent world... Utterly lovely, Elisa!
xoxo

Yes, SakuraWorld!!! :D I love to read your words, today. I can't wait to see the pictures sweet Sis... they always bring a smile on my face.... Thank you so much! xoxoxox :)

[Lover Of Words]

wow such a beautiful piece if words are speaking and they do have a voice and you make them always stand out such an amazing read and the picture to go with it is amazing as well

Thank you very much Kelsey! always

[Eric Pudalov]

Elisa, my friend...this poem is absolutely magical!! I'm so happy you shared this one with me (and with everyone). I normally like to cite my favorite lines in a review, but that's difficult here, because honestly, I like them all!

"Wrapped up in silken pink leaves/Cuddled with your wooden fingers/Kissed by only your breath, you air." It has such vivid imagery, and oddly enough, the first thing that came to mind was something like the Ents from The Lord of the Rings!

I'm sure that's not quite what you had in mind, but surely, this is for someone with whom you are deeply in love. And also, if I'm not mistaken, these are references to your Second World, Elysion? It sounds like such a beautifully fantastic place to write about it, and if it were possible, somewhere I'd like to visit!

Finally, I must say that the poem also has wonderful rhythm, very much like a song. It's as if the woods you speak of are singing to you, and you are singing back. What an enchanting song it is!!

Thank you my friend for such a great and detailed review as ever, I treasure your words Eric. :)

[redzone]

Enjoy you say .. oh my yes. I too would stay if someone listened to my "core " yes Elisa. I enjoyed ... ~~redzone

Thank you very much redzone. :) so appreciated!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i found this about love and an analogy to that peaceful walk in the woods, just as a peaceful walk with a significant other who makes us feel that same calm, easy feeling as a walk with nature gives us.

Thank you so much for the kind words jacob!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I know this could be about love but I also see it as a person finding their deep rooted connection with nature. Either way a fabulous write.

Thank you for feeling the two edged sword Dale, you are great in perception always my friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why you are welcome and thank you, I try hard at being perceptive and observant.