~ The Woods did Listen

~ The Woods did Listen, E.L. Elisa Laura, FanFiction, My Style, Surreal, Woods, Freedom, Love, Life, Dreams, Nature, Sakura, Trees, Unconcious

~ The Woods did Listen

 

 

Deeper, into your surreal arms, filled

With your enigmatic love, I fell;

Wrapped up, in silken pink leaves,

Cuddled with your wooden fingers

Kissed by only your breath, your air,

The wind, you blew through my hair,

And I knew, I would stay forever

For only you did listen to my core

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Reviews

[realmwriter]

And when the roots entwined my legs, up around my waist. The grave did come to call to take me to my fall. Lest the wild call, where wind and water come together to meat the air and sea. Where land and soil collide, to meat rock and stone. Down in the depths of earth, where man is rent in bone.

Yet another inspiring piece Elisa, I loved it.

Thank you my dear friend, and WOW! you seem to be understanding my brain in depts, only a few can! through all elements, wonderful such a wonderful review... so so grateful this woman is. :) thank you.

[realmwriter]

You're most welcome

............ :)

[Spaceman26]

Beautiful! Although I am terrified of the woods I thought this was a beautiful poem. But it speaks to me because I love walking on the beach in the early morning and it makes me feel the same way! Loved it.

Hey Christi, thank you so much for your lovely words... I'm glad this one made you comfortable in your thoughts, by walking on the beach, Oh you're the first person, who I met, who's afraid from the woods, interesting!! :) thank you for coming by! -x-

[Edward Lancheister]

So beautiful spoken words that could be feel into depth of my soul

Thank you Nona manise for share the great poem

Thank you Nyong Edward. :) :) a pleasure you liked this piece of me!

[Edward Lancheister]

your poem is a food to my soul and never cease to amaze :)

Terimah Kasih really, that means a lot, selamat malam dear friend :)

[Edward Lancheister]

malam juga dear sister. :)

[Hannah Ellsworth]

The title of this poem draws the reader in... beautiful voice and photograph to accompany it.

Thank you Hannah, for your kind words. I appreciate it very much.

[kublakhan27]

Your words truly brought my imagination to life here dear sis...there is a mythical feel to this scene...forests are mysterious places, even ominous sometimes, but you've evoked a feeling of calm, and a connection to nature...of course that's just one facet of this piece...it is clearly a love poem as well and the woods make a lovely metaphor...you are a true visionary sis, great work :) xo

Thank you dear for feeling this one so well. I'm ever so happy with your words, and encouragement. I will be there for you soon bro... :) xoxo

[Alveron]

A beautiful poem in which you not only achieve in the reader a visual, but also a sense of touch. It is easy to put in image in people's minds, it is far harder to see allow them to see themselves in that image. You manage to do this with your subtle words.

Thank you so much for such a beautiful review... Alveron... :)

[VelvetRosetta]

Besutiful words and image...wonderfully penned!

Thank you so much... sweet Rosetta -x- :)

[VelvetRosetta]

Yw Elisa. =)

[h d e rushin]

Your words always sing to me my friend....
nicely written,
dana

Thank you dear friend, with whole my heart. I hope all is well... I come by soon... I have a busy time, and can be only here at my nighttime. I miss your writings. ((Hug))

[icelandicblue]

Such ethereal beauty in your imagery. This is a most enchanting poem and for a moment I lost myself in the luxury of your words.

Thank you so much Anne, it was another dream I had recently. :) I"m glad you enjoyed dear, peace and love!

[Baby Ricochet]

Elisa this is absolutely gorgeous. The photo, the poem, the music, incredible. I am truly awed

Aww, thank you so much Baby! :)