~ Enter my World

~ Enter my World, E.L. Elisa Laura, Dreams, Lucid, Second World, Fantasy, Analyzing, Classic, Venice, Italy, Masquerade, Love, Romance, Illusive

~ Enter my World

 

 

From dark shades, and glimpses of reality,

I dreamt you all again, and so vividly

This time a little different though,

You all knew me, by the scent of life,

And followed me across the canals

To this castle where we seem to be now

 

I whispered through thin air, and clouds

Of fresh dew of March, you’d may enter

The gate of my heart, and as I wished I

Was there too, but I escaped

Into another chamber of thoughts

 

Yet, the masqueraded perfume still flew

Across the halls of hope, and the

Doors of the heart chambers, where locked;

The red ceiling, and the golden curls above

Merged with white plaster art

 

Where swinging  in front of the imagination of

Understanding this real dream, yet I felt it;

Far away music, from one of the rooms,

And I turned around, I saw you there

 

All standing and saying nothing;

And as we looked to each other deep 

In the eyes, so felt each other, and

Sang a song, of poetic dreams;

Of lucid dreams, inside of our distance

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy another dream I had :) -x-

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

It is curious how people that have never physically met can feel such a deep connection to one another. Coincidence upon coincidence may be no coincidence at all, but something that was meant to be.

We observe these commonalities, synchronicities, dreams that touch dreams that touch reality. At times we know what will come to pass by forefeeling as of visions from sleep, and I do wonder, now and again, why?

Really, that specific perfume you smelled, hours later I am still like, wuutt??

I am thankful for these invisible strings that connect minds alike, the works of the Universe, these magnetic vibes which brought me both of you. I know we are many in this wonderful write of yours for your heart is immense, a glorious castle, to house all :) It is where you have us dancing and singing, in your European warmth, we are beating too.

Nothing but love in your direction x

My dear friend, and Sister, I can't thank you enough for coming over with such a profound, and fantastic point of view, towards my dream, and writing, you know there is so much in it, not even the words, can explain, but intuition, and feelings, and the unconcious do... you are aware, as am I, and it's just fun to explore this further, into new gateways, realms, castle's who shall tell, where the dream continues... Thank you for such a high caliber here... with love from your south! :) xxx beautiful expressions, as words.... :) sleep well darling Sis.

[Michelle N. H.]

You are welcome, lieve zus x I had a great night's sleep and at this very moment sunrays are touching my skin. It's getting warmer over here with spring on its way and it's fantastic :) I treasure our connection and these numerous dreams of yours, of mine, this cord that seems to link us, in between. There can be no doubt, I love you as fam. We'll keep digging into the meaning of it all because that's our thing and we just can't help it! I hope you slept well, that you're having a beautiful day.. Tot de volgende keer, ajuu x

Thank you so much again sødeste søster... (og wow, hvad en stor dansk bogstavrim der..) LOL :D
read moreThank you so much again sødeste søster... (og wow, hvad en stor dansk bogstavrim der..) LOL :D
xx I'm so glad you did enjoyed the lovely European sun today, I did too ^^ :D it was fantastic, this weekend it will be more gray above the Netherlands, hope not at yours.... it's so fantastic our early spring time, we have waited for it so long, and winters here are too long... it's depressing sometimes. :) light in sight, whooot! :) I love you likewise, there is such a bond we have, and that shall be for a lifetime! I am curious as you told me of one of your friends, this will continue to both of us either. :) would be fantastic, working this larger out, in all magnetic universal gateways, our brains connect. :D I did slept as an Michelangelo(i) hah! ;-) wink... We just can't stop our alien brains, I know, and it's only a good thing, for being yourself... while others are too, but on another wavelength~ lol ;) You too deary! always.... se dig snart rundt, Jeg elsker dig, ajuuus! -x- Kys fra Holland :)

LOL, you know how it can be a dilemma when there are Gremlins on WC... right... ;) so here again:Thank you so much again sødeste søster... (og wow, hvad en stor dansk bogstavrim der..) LOL :D xx I'm so glad you did enjoyed the lovely European sun today, I did too ^^ :D it was fantastic, this weekend it will be more gray above the Netherlands...but will enjoy it nevertheless... lol, I treasure this dream too, and I know to listen carefully to all what it has to give me, or you, or others, it's awesome. For me you are such fam, we just feel so great, that no ever hurt, or rushes stay in beteen it's really good! I slept like an Michelangelo(i) lol, love the codes we know, and have. Hah! We never can help it to analyze our dork, geek-ness, for it's a part of us, and if others are bored, they just should walk away, and wave a good goodbye lol... I hope you have too Shell... Se dig snart, dejligste søster, Ajuu hej hej fra foråret fuld Arnhem ...J eg elsker dig :) -xx-

[Michelle N. H.]

Ik hou ook van jou. Tot later, mijn lieve vriend, mijn zus. Hou je goed. Heb een fijn weekend. Glimlachen en lachen. Veel geluk. Hahah. Adieu, for the present! x

Thank you so much Shell.... xx I love your Dutch! you speak it so perfect!!! :) I'm smiling from ear to ear! overhere.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thanks, Lis ^^ I have a fine teacher! and google translator fills the gaps, hah.

Haha lol you are too funny! ;) and I never spoke so much Danish too lately! what a great language!!!! :) you are the best!

[emmajoy]

' All standing and saying nothing; ~ And as we looked to each other deep ~ In the eyes, so felt each other, ..'
As always you move into a different dimension with thoughts and interpretation of another place which far outreaches the average person and writer. Vivid, unusual, almost scriptural.. a beckoning of senses. Dreams so often wrap enduring logic, hope, love, stillness. I'm sure you - above anyone, knows that.

Thank you for a wonderful and heartfelt review dear Emma. I'm glad you enjoyed. :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sis, I truly loved this piece... It's mystical and filled with enchanting references to music, art, and lucid dreams...
I felt as if I were right there!

You grasp a world that only few can understand... and I am so lucky to step into the realm of your reveries!... so many doors to open and mysteries of the heart to be revealed..

This is like a maze to a dream gate of your heart....a Fantastic imagery, love!~xoxoxo~:)




I am loving this one! :)

I'm so glad you did... my dear! because you where in it for sure. :) you really understand the piece, I love that... thank you so much for your beautiful words, you know I treasure them :)

-x- :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I am so happy that you opened the gate to your dreams, Sis... it's a mystery in itself, but there is a comfort in knowing I was there. xxxxxx :)

Yes, there really is Sis... I will explain this better when we talk on the phone lol.... -xxxxxx- :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Can't wait! :))
enjoy your time... going to play outside... it's beautiful today.
ciao for now~xoxoxo~:)

Yes, I have lot's to do too.... enjoy your time outside love!! ;) say hi to my Sun.... ;) -x- :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It could be about the castle being a metaphor to the mind of royalty writers that sometimes share the same ideas and being useless running to a different part of the world because there could be another writer there that sees the same dream at a different time "but I escaped Into another chamber of thoughts".

Wow Raven Sis, I really do like this interpretation... it's a whole new one so far! you always bring refreshment :D thank you so much. -x-

[realmwriter]

I would say you painted it perfectly. You use the etherial like colors to paint a vivid lusterous portrait of your dream, I may as well be in it myself... Amazingly beautiful and a pleasure to read.

Thank you so so much dear! :) I think you were... still analyzing. :D I found one or two for sure of the 5. based on the odores, I sensed... shall keep you in touch about my process... Thank you so much... my sweet friend. :D -x-

[realmwriter]

You are most welcome my dear friend!

Thank you so much! always!

[Eric Pudalov]

Elisa! I remember you telling me about this poem in our conversation yesterday - now I can understand where the comparison might have come from with "Eyes Wide Shut."

Nonetheless, I never would've thought you "plagiarized" the idea, and even if you had, who cares? From what I can see, you are a very intuitive, perhaps even psychic person. Your dreams and visions are the perfect thing to inspire poetry and other writings.

I'm actually reminded more of "Alice's Adventures in Wonderland" here than "Eyes Wide Shut," to tell you the truth. Lines like, "You all knew me, by the scent of life/And followed me across the canals/
To this castle where we seem to be now" seem reminiscent of Lewis Carroll's work.

Ultimately, they're your visions, your intuition, and no critic can take that away from you.

Thank you so much Eric, for such a high review. I can feel and see what you are saying, and what you mean, through each line... I will dig it. Eli :)

[Eric Pudalov]

Thank you Eli!! Glad that you appreciated the review - and it's great that we're becoming friends as well; you are quite the awesome person.

I did! :) aww, thank you and you too!

[Jack...]

Finding that melody, sweetly flowing from a far away place, turning to see this one, of love and affection, near, but far...running to find the answer...lost in every question found, still they remian close enough to touch, to taste, to feel...waiting within our hearts. My sweet friend. This was deep and oh so alluring. To step within your dream is a dream to many and that includes me. Beautifully penned Elisa.

Thank you so much my fellow musician. Sometimes notes are all we hear, instead of ratio.... your review made my night, I can't thank you enough for letting in my dream, and feel it's embrace.

[Horizon K.]

...Of fresh dew of March, you’d may enter
The gate of my heart, and as I wished I
Was there too, but I escaped
Into another chamber of thoughts...

Lovely, Elisa! Such a vivid dream!
It makes me think... That distance is not a measurable space, but one that we create by choice, to be close to someone..... Or so very far away... But that you can meet, lock eyes and touch hearts, in these dream spaces, that can be ever so real, if both wish for them to be... Even from across the world, we can connect...
And thank you to the human gods, for Internet and Skype and the WC...

My dearest, thank you so much! I love it you found it vivid, it's certainly one of the most "important' pieces I ever did in my writers carreer, and it has a huge meaning to me, for from out of this piece, my future shall be lead..... Indeed we are everywhere my dear, and one place isn't enough! thank you!

[Horizon K.]

... we are everywhere... and one place isn't enough... I love that thought, Sis!!!

[joshua deathdealer]

^^ ahh Elisa this is such a touching and inspiring poem.. This connection you speak of is just as powerful as if you were physically there and possibly even stronger from reaching out mentally and spiritually to keep this connection alive. Thank you for writing this magnificent poem. *sighs

Thank you love, for such a great review.... you feel and know me. I so adore you and shall always, because well, (actually no words are needed) you already heard me.... sighs... love you friend -x-

[Rita L. Sev]

This is a vivid and rich description of deep connection to another soul - a very col piece, Elisa!

Thank you so very much Rita, your words mean much to me. Eli