~ Enter my World

~ Enter my World, E.L. Elisa Laura, Dreams, Lucid, Second World, Fantasy, Analyzing, Classic, Venice, Italy, Masquerade, Love, Romance, Illusive

~ Enter my World

 

 

From dark shades, and glimpses of reality,

I dreamt you all again, and so vividly

This time a little different though,

You all knew me, by the scent of life,

And followed me across the canals

To this castle where we seem to be now

 

I whispered through thin air, and clouds

Of fresh dew of March, you’d may enter

The gate of my heart, and as I wished I

Was there too, but I escaped

Into another chamber of thoughts

 

Yet, the masqueraded perfume still flew

Across the halls of hope, and the

Doors of the heart chambers, where locked;

The red ceiling, and the golden curls above

Merged with white plaster art

 

Where swinging  in front of the imagination of

Understanding this real dream, yet I felt it;

Far away music, from one of the rooms,

And I turned around, I saw you there

 

All standing and saying nothing;

And as we looked to each other deep 

In the eyes, so felt each other, and

Sang a song, of poetic dreams;

Of lucid dreams, inside of our distance

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy another dream I had :) -x-

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

It is curious how people that have never physically met can feel such a deep connection to one another. Coincidence upon coincidence may be no coincidence at all, but something that was meant to be.

We observe these commonalities, synchronicities, dreams that touch dreams that touch reality. At times we know what will come to pass by forefeeling as of visions from sleep, and I do wonder, now and again, why?

Really, that specific perfume you smelled, hours later I am still like, wuutt??

I am thankful for these invisible strings that connect minds alike, the works of the Universe, these magnetic vibes which brought me both of you. I know we are many in this wonderful write of yours for your heart is immense, a glorious castle, to house all :) It is where you have us dancing and singing, in your European warmth, we are beating too.

Nothing but love in your direction x

My dear friend, and Sister, I can't thank you enough for coming over with such a profound, and fantastic point of view, towards my dream, and writing, you know there is so much in it, not even the words, can explain, but intuition, and feelings, and the unconcious do... you are aware, as am I, and it's just fun to explore this further, into new gateways, realms, castle's who shall tell, where the dream continues... Thank you for such a high caliber here... with love from your south! :) xxx beautiful expressions, as words.... :) sleep well darling Sis.

[Michelle N. H.]

You are welcome, lieve zus x I had a great night's sleep and at this very moment sunrays are touching my skin. It's getting warmer over here with spring on its way and it's fantastic :) I treasure our connection and these numerous dreams of yours, of mine, this cord that seems to link us, in between. There can be no doubt, I love you as fam. We'll keep digging into the meaning of it all because that's our thing and we just can't help it! I hope you slept well, that you're having a beautiful day.. Tot de volgende keer, ajuu x

Thank you so much again sødeste søster... (og wow, hvad en stor dansk bogstavrim der..) LOL :D
read moreThank you so much again sødeste søster... (og wow, hvad en stor dansk bogstavrim der..) LOL :D
xx I'm so glad you did enjoyed the lovely European sun today, I did too ^^ :D it was fantastic, this weekend it will be more gray above the Netherlands, hope not at yours.... it's so fantastic our early spring time, we have waited for it so long, and winters here are too long... it's depressing sometimes. :) light in sight, whooot! :) I love you likewise, there is such a bond we have, and that shall be for a lifetime! I am curious as you told me of one of your friends, this will continue to both of us either. :) would be fantastic, working this larger out, in all magnetic universal gateways, our brains connect. :D I did slept as an Michelangelo(i) hah! ;-) wink... We just can't stop our alien brains, I know, and it's only a good thing, for being yourself... while others are too, but on another wavelength~ lol ;) You too deary! always.... se dig snart rundt, Jeg elsker dig, ajuuus! -x- Kys fra Holland :)

LOL, you know how it can be a dilemma when there are Gremlins on WC... right... ;) so here again:Thank you so much again sødeste søster... (og wow, hvad en stor dansk bogstavrim der..) LOL :D xx I'm so glad you did enjoyed the lovely European sun today, I did too ^^ :D it was fantastic, this weekend it will be more gray above the Netherlands...but will enjoy it nevertheless... lol, I treasure this dream too, and I know to listen carefully to all what it has to give me, or you, or others, it's awesome. For me you are such fam, we just feel so great, that no ever hurt, or rushes stay in beteen it's really good! I slept like an Michelangelo(i) lol, love the codes we know, and have. Hah! We never can help it to analyze our dork, geek-ness, for it's a part of us, and if others are bored, they just should walk away, and wave a good goodbye lol... I hope you have too Shell... Se dig snart, dejligste søster, Ajuu hej hej fra foråret fuld Arnhem ...J eg elsker dig :) -xx-

[Michelle N. H.]

Ik hou ook van jou. Tot later, mijn lieve vriend, mijn zus. Hou je goed. Heb een fijn weekend. Glimlachen en lachen. Veel geluk. Hahah. Adieu, for the present! x

Thank you so much Shell.... xx I love your Dutch! you speak it so perfect!!! :) I'm smiling from ear to ear! overhere.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thanks, Lis ^^ I have a fine teacher! and google translator fills the gaps, hah.

Haha lol you are too funny! ;) and I never spoke so much Danish too lately! what a great language!!!! :) you are the best!

[DrD]

I did not enter your world. You pulled me in on the tide of your words and elegant word combinations that became alomst music. Marvelously done.

I'm grateful to you DrD for entering a write, that was a dream first... many thanks, and greetings from the Netherlands. I shall come back for you Sir. :)

[DrD]

I envy you! Niemand heeft gewoond tot ze een wandeling in Amsterdam hebben genomen.

Zucht.... en u kan het weten.... ;) wat een prachtige Nederlandse woorden hier mijn vriend. Ik ben geraakt. :) Amsterdam is een levende droom :)

[PearlPoet]

The last experience I had with dreams and reality being entwined almost left me dead... really Im not making this up, it left me heart-broken for good... Im glad that your version is different ~hugs~ also I am glad to read yuo again.. Missed you...

Thank you very much my soulmate... hope all is well. I can understand, the other side of dreaming is entering with me too ;-) so not odd at all, just very perspective. Missed you too buddy!

[PearlPoet]

Missed you so much more!!!! ~soft hugs~ Im doing ok..

Fine to hear you're doing ok my friend, I was worried.... I'm too... ;) all will be ok soon... :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

I hear music.. heart beats .. and secrets..
Behind closed doors ..dreams play out
Across oceans we communicate ..
Ans still we are intimate.....

Lovely................... Jazz ♥

Thank you so much love, a beautiful message to the core, of being lucid and being intimate! ♥♥ Til tomorrow hon! -x-

[J. J. Nightingale]

Tis morning now... Wow, forgot to say, I love the music............ beautiful ..
And You Are Welcome ...... ♥♥

Goodmorning to you luv, and thank you so much, It's baroque/barock, and Marcello: Oboe concerto in D Minor: (II. Adagio). Always nice to see you by! ((Hugs))

[J. J. Nightingale]

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[Radhika]

Very pretty imagery. Keep up the good work! :)

Thank you so much Radhika... it means a lot ;)

[Ghost of Jupiter]

The inspiring and deep connection one can feel from such distances is quite amazing! You covey this so well in this write. You seem to dream in such vivid fantasy and paint us pictures so we step inside those lovely dreams of yours. You are a beautiful soul that shines so brightly, it blinds me with awe that you can express yourself with such brilliance. Here in this magical poem...we can clearly feel your caring and endearing heart! Well done gorgeous poetess!

Thank you so much for this beautiful review, my sweet friend! you humble me, I feel so happy you enjoyed my dream. And you so understand this. Much love to you sweet K. :)

[Saddam]

All standing and saying nothing;
And as we looked to each other deep
In the eyes, so felt each other, and
Sang a song, of poetic dreams;
Of lucid dreams, inside of our distance.

Love the poem lot. It great to have dream of someone who is with you, but not With you. Love the feeling and emotions which you have created. Great read.

Dear SSADD, thank you for feeling my dream... it was probably the most special dream, I ever dreamt... there were close friends in this one, I'm still figuring out, who is who.... but one perfume, I had right... the one of one of my bestie's. You capture it well, the elusive and feeling, is in this as touchable, as it isn't.... that makes us ponder, but platonically love our friends... -x- :) so happy with your words, thank you.... very much!

[Dhaye]

I am also a dreamer, Elisa. I can relate to this. Sometimes it is only in our dreams we can hold the things we can never have in reality. In dreams, there's no distance and impossibilities...everything is possible.

Nice words and music choice. Nothing is a harsh thing. This is wonderful!

Thank you my sweet friend for your words, It's so nice to be one isn't it? You are so right, there is a new world, that tells us much, and sometimes more... (((HUGS))) xx

[Dhaye]

........ :)

I'm on my way, dear to be back on here.... :) I've been reading you ;) beautiful.

[Blue]

"And as we looked to each other deep /In the eyes, so felt each other, and/Sang a song, of poetic dreams;/Of lucid dreams, inside of our distance."

You have captured the air of mystery between two people who seem to have a 'spiritual' connection, Elisa. It's fascinating how despite distance, both are united in souls, communicating in an inexplicable language.

Arzel, dear, thank you so much for coming by! and so sorry, I am not online lately! I will come back for you, for you write awesome lately! :) thank you very much for your encouriging words, my friend :)

[Blue]

No worries, Elisa. I have been busy these days, too. I just thought of dropping by on some random profiles and see what my WC friends are up to. It's nice to hear from you again!

Likewise, :) take your time too! I know life can be busy! Sweet of you! I will not forget :) All my best, for now, you will see me by soon -x-

[Tina Louise UK]

Loved this one hun...wonderfully done :) x

Thank you so much Tia for your words hon! -x- :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Some people have a strong connection even if they are miles apart. The imagery in this one is splendid and the longing is palpable....as if you dream him into existence right there in the same room you are in. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you so much Lydi... sigh, maybe you are right ;-) Knuffels -x- :)