~ You Color the World

~ You Color the World, E.L. Elisa Laura, Silent Connections, Nature, From Winter to Spring, Love, Hiking, Real Life, Moments, Fragments, Pain, Beauty.

~ You Color the World

 

No day would ever be the same again,

As that day, of waking up, on that early

Morning on a cold December last year,

 

When I put my shoes on, and walked out

The door, in the middle of the night,

To catch your early morning breath,

 

Nights, I’ve waited, into mornings, for us to

Have eye contact, but your orange bliss

Shall remain, now inside my memory forever

 

Without speaking, you color the world,

My love, you dance among the misty sky,

To shine, and warm the cold waters in me

 

And where the sky is too grey, and the

Clouds are in front of your being,

As if they must hide your smile

 

You wink, with a halo around you,

As your aura is letting me know,

You are alright, for time passes

 

In days to light years, in our love,

Before the future day shall come,

I did live in his embrace

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy -xx- Feel free, with Love, Elisa

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Amazing and beautiful tribute to the Sun. it`s so warming, and creates real colors all around. You make me feel the freshness and rebirth and the mood of happiness here. I love this verse, where so lovely you expressed your love and need:

Without speaking, you color the world,
My love, you dance among the misty sky,
To shine, and warm the cold waters in me

Reminds me so much of love! :)

:: nour ::

[joshua deathdealer]

This floored me... I haven't read poetry in a while but my god this is touching. The sky, the clouds. Catching a morning breath...I love this poem and I love you my dear friend. xo

Thank you lovie! I'm so honored with your words, for you and me know there is so much more... Love you too Josh, can't wait to hear your song... -x- we call soon! :) my bestie!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Dearest Eli,

This is stunning!...
The gentleness in your words felt like a comforting caress... as if "good byes" can be held with such passion....
I am learning that love comes in so many different forms... letting go is one of them.
You can truly love someone and give to them the freedom to 'be'...

The "Orange Bliss" is eternal... and will always be embraced.

Letting go of the season, or watching the sunset is a Beautiful thing...like your heart~xoxoxoxo~

What a beautiful words darling, thank you. Yes. I can let go, out of love, and I shall treasure in my heart forever. Thank you for these words, and your beautiful personality love -x- :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Beautiful, romantic and such a sweet write hun.
You can feel the love and romance oozing out of this piece.
was written well also and has great meaning to it.
Very well done.

Thank you Australia, love to you my dear -x- :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome hun anytime :)

I will come back for you cimmy! you mean much to me sweet friend :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

awwww thank you :) and likewise

[Edgar Perez]

No words are found in my heart.
All I can share is my smile.

(:

Thank you so much my sweet friend :)

[realmwriter]

This is why I love your work. Where mine is dark and forboading, yours is light and hopeful.

My dear friend, I thank you so much, I try too, but not all is so light, there is a hurt, inside... :) I believe through hurt, we heal, and through pain we see beauty. Thanks so much for being here, I treasure your comments. -x- :)

[realmwriter]

As I do yours my friend...!

So glad to see you now and then! those moments are always on caliber and golden. Thank you!

[realmwriter]

You're most welcome

I'm smiling always when you come by! :) thanks again!

[Rossen]

Your love whispers warm goodbyes your words gently cry.



glad you are here,

Rossen

Thank you my dear, I'm glad too... finding my way between the Cafe, and this gorgeous Spring time.... :) it's lovely outside, when the sun shines.... :) take care, I come by soon -x-

[Hatchling]

Beautiful write Elisa. The flow of this is perfect

Thank you with whole my heart -x- :)

[Hatchling]

You're welcome

[PurpleQuartz]

This poem is hope and warmth and wonder. It makes me feel so happy to read it!!

Thank you dear one :) that makes me happy too, (it makes you happy) :) -x-

[Eric Pudalov]

Elisa...this poem is gorgeously sweet (and romantic, of course). The image of "...your orange bliss/Shall remain, now inside my memory forever" is haunting, and conjures mental pictures of a kind of romantic morning in some tropical world.

My other favorite stanza is "Without speaking, you color the world/My love, you dance among the misty sky/To shine, and warm the cold waters in me." It's not only loving, but very spiritual in a way.

I also get a sense of sadness and loss from the poem, but with a hopeful ending, as if even death and physical absence cannot keep you apart. It is a wonderful idea, and I hope that it's true!!

I'm honored to read your words my friend, thank you for understanding, feeling, letting in... beautiful review, truly so appreciated! -x- :)

[Eric Pudalov]

You're welcome!! How's your sis, by the way? Well, I hope! :-)

So well, no worries, all is great! :) Oh my I read your collab, wonderful, I need more time as a Dutch, but you own, 2 beautiful reviews from me dear one! hah! :) What a nice epic one! shall come over after traveling, (I'm a road devilette in weekends ;-)) so back soon my friend.... love and peace! -x-

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a beautiful personification of the sun...better than any i have ever read...i like the early morning romance.

jacob

Thank you so much jacob! :)