~ You Color the World

~ You Color the World, E.L. Elisa Laura, Silent Connections, Nature, From Winter to Spring, Love, Hiking, Real Life, Moments, Fragments, Pain, Beauty.

~ You Color the World

 

No day would ever be the same again,

As that day, of waking up, on that early

Morning on a cold December last year,

 

When I put my shoes on, and walked out

The door, in the middle of the night,

To catch your early morning breath,

 

Nights, I’ve waited, into mornings, for us to

Have eye contact, but your orange bliss

Shall remain, now inside my memory forever

 

Without speaking, you color the world,

My love, you dance among the misty sky,

To shine, and warm the cold waters in me

 

And where the sky is too grey, and the

Clouds are in front of your being,

As if they must hide your smile

 

You wink, with a halo around you,

As your aura is letting me know,

You are alright, for time passes

 

In days to light years, in our love,

Before the future day shall come,

I did live in his embrace

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy -xx- Feel free, with Love, Elisa

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Amazing and beautiful tribute to the Sun. it`s so warming, and creates real colors all around. You make me feel the freshness and rebirth and the mood of happiness here. I love this verse, where so lovely you expressed your love and need:

Without speaking, you color the world,
My love, you dance among the misty sky,
To shine, and warm the cold waters in me

Reminds me so much of love! :)

:: nour ::

[SmittyJas]

Fantastic write of forever shining light. Love and romance a dance in heaven's sky when the sun arises we shall greet a new day with happy joy along the way. Sunrise future another day has dawned now we can celebrate all day long. What a bright side of nature you have written in words. Loved this poem from start to finish. It hasn't got a blemish no not one its created around the Sun.

[Anita Singh]

It is a sheer bliss to read your compositions. Your poems are food for the soul. I loved this. Specially the lines: Without speaking, you color the world,
My love, you dance among the misty sky,
To shine, and warm the cold waters in me.

I'm ever so grateful to you dear, xxx thank you.

[Fernando Dardón]

Wow, did I just sing this poem while reading?
This is awesome my friend, for a memorable goodbye t someone you loved so much!!
I really enjoyed this!!! And in part because I missed your poems.
I guess I'll put it on my favs :)
I wish to have had such poem form that girl I loved so much

Thank you so much Javier, for this beautiful review. :) if you like it, just sing it, no problem... ;) I know you play fantastic guitar also with it. :) I'll be back for yours in a bit...

[Fernando Dardón]

Sorry for my review , not as wondefull as your piece, but it was written with love :)
I guess I might turn your poem into a song, me I? I just came up with some ideas :)

Your review is beautiful Javier :) always so nice to hear from you, and please make it a SONG! :) let me hear it when it's finished, I feel honored if you do... ((HUGS))

[Cassie]

I enjoyed this one too, keep writing

Thank you so much Cassie, when I'm home, I'll be back for yours, I'm underway, this was a kind of a very add special "goodbye" to someone, thus a special personal write, -xx-

[icelandicblue]

This is simply beautiful. It draws you in and you can almost feel the warmth of the sun on your face. It's a lovely way to spends a few minutes reading and feeling your words.

Thank you very much sweet Anne. :) I"m so pleased you enjoyed my little words.

[Deuces]

Almost written as an ode to the sun. A peaceful, graceful piece I thoroughly enjoyed. Love your work.

Thank you so much G. for the review, also for the save Travels... after a good sleep, I'm back... I love yours too! can't wait.

[ChemicalMadness]

love your contrasts and colors...soft, sweet, and longing.

CM.

Thank you dear. Good to see you here.

[Lydia Shutter]

Gentle and velvety soft emotion in every line of this one, Elisa......so lovely. Sometimes letting go is the most loving act of all. Lydi**

Thank you so much once again dear friend, :) for all the reviews! can't wait to read your new stuff! :) knuffels to you! -x-