~ For we are One

~ For we are One, Lovers Death, Death's Kiss, Life and Death, My Oneness, Together, You and me, My Death, My Love, My all.

~  For we are One

 

 

For us it didn’t take a lifetime,

The fields, we feel now bare feet,

The so red sky filled with ozone,

And the birds in all the colors of the rainbow,

You and me are there, arrived, settled..

 

For nobody can stop us now,

So is each day a great miracle,

That we wake up into each other’s arms,

Pure magic, only we can touch,

Only you and me can see.

In the transparent air above us;

 

There are no questions,

Only moments I am in love

With your expression,

No fear, or anything that hurts

 

Only you and me, seem to be there,

And our weight of love

That never bloomed this much

So far, for we are one

 

 

 

-           Elisa Laura

Author's Note

It came to me again, it came... the "Vibe".
I wonder... DO YOU TRULY LISTEN, MUSIC COMPARED TO EACH WORD?
ARE YOU A SENSITIVE SOUL? OR A RUSHY..... Needing for reviews in return? curious, Michelle thanks to you, for grounding me, and you and me! and our bond, and friendship. True love, and friendship have their own time, and space!!!



Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Eric Pudalov]

The poem and its message are amazing - it truly is wonderful when you find that person that you connect with and, as some believe, are destined to be with.

I'm not sure if I'm misunderstanding the meaning...is the person that you're in love with someone that's died? (That was what I inferred from the picture.) Regardless, it is a very touching work with incredible imagery.

I especially enjoyed the lines, "For us it didn't take a lifetime/The fields, we feel now bare feet," and "There are no questions/Only moments I am in love/With your expression." Ideally, I would hope that the best relationships would strive for these things!

I can't thank you enough my friend, for your words. I shall explain this poem, in the finest details to you privately soon. (when I'm back), and shall be there for your writings too! I'm grateful with this review. Elisa :)

[Eric Pudalov]

Aww, thanks Elisa! I like to take time to put details into my reviews; otherwise I don't feel that it's truly worth it. And yes, I look forward to speaking with you about it soon (whenever it is you come back).

[Belle]

Soulmates, Twin Flames as the Hinduism belief calls it, but in layman's term simply compatibility. It is rare to happen to meet someone who truly understands, but when you have the other half everything in you and in him become one.

Good to read from you again, dear sis. :)

Thank you so much my sweet Sis. What a beautiful review, and yes, you are right in the term you name here. :) -x-

[PurpleQuartz]

*wipes away tear* you can always make us cry Elisa. This is a heart touching story of love, and I know throughout my reviews I may seem repetitive but only because each of your writes are so beautiful and enchanting. You are such an inspiration!

I'm so glad Australian angel, you really felt the piece, that's what I was going for, Thank you so much for the lovely review... -x- :)

[ferousfinite]

Constructive: In this Obviously executed format, the number variation screams for a pattern of some kind. There are signs of intended repetition and a designed format but if however, this piece's intention was to illustrate to the reader a chaotic rendering. I really like the story board. In the first stanza, some of the words were a bit stuffy and out of context, which can be intentional but I believe this just shows where you are in your writing. Keep Writing =) Keep it up. Cheers!

Thank you very much E. for such a constructive review, I see things different through your eyes now... ;)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very intense poem, full of eternity, of your sacred love and all real feelings of life...For me it`s like a mirror to another world somehow. And mirror to the soul of your beloved, and time disappears in your words, they are flying out of it so free. Love it totally, dearest!

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Thank you dear, for feeling this one, and the eternity, you always see through many emotions, and feel my poetry, glad you loved this one (hug you) -x-

[Sugar Plum ♥]

For me reading your poems is like sharing and special moments, because I can feel you more :) (hug)

You always feel more, you're psychic, love ... we are on a wavelength... it's undeniable... xxxx

[NeiL ArandA]

Till death do as part . True love truly transcends time, space and even death . I love when you always mentioned these two words on your piece " of You and Me " ... What ever and whoever the muse it surely captivates my thoughts and imagination. You surely connects with your words. And do you know Ms Elisa that because of you and your unique and inspiring writing style that I was able to pen and write in free verse . What I thought impossible became possible through you. And I appreciate you so much for that ! You are truly Ms Natural !

You are right my dear, you are. I do... I have my muse. And he knows who he is. Even in a life, far beyond this living one. You did dear??? I'm so so pleased, please tell me which one, I'm still in a break, cos of many things, but I'm the first to support you when I am (back).... it can take a bit, but my goodness, what does it matter? You have a key to my second world :D xx Love you my friend. You are one of a few, on here for who I stay.... thank you so much for your words. -x-

[NeiL ArandA]

Yes .. all of your piece were all awe inspiring. Just exposing myself to it somehow I was able to find your rhythm. How I wish I could emulate your style and imagination. The way you pen and harmonize your words is like a fine silk or delicate fabric that is seamless . Its SEAMLESS . Could not really figure out yet how you do it. You are truly unique and enigmatic....

I can't thank you enough.... just I know, I always listen to my heartbeat... and it leads me the way... :) in love, freedom, life, and happiness. You truly humble me dear friend, when I'm back you shall know, how much I've missed you! :) It's early spring time here, and I saw some sparrows, happy singing... ;-) -x- til soon precious friend.

[NeiL ArandA]

Sparrow ... you heard my new song :)

[Jeannear]

I love this Elisa.....! it's beautiful and a true love story

Thank you so much again my precious friend, I hug you, thanks xx

[Emma Ruth]

A beautifully written poem; drove the exterior noise and humdrum of life away as I read - there was so much tranquility and depth to be immersed within. Thank you for sharing :)

Emma, love thank you with whole my Dutch heart, your words knocked my door, and I shall never forget, as soon as I am back here, I shall read you sweetie... xx

[Tina Louise UK]

The words, the art, the music...tied this piece together beautifully, it really touches the soul. Simply stunning :) x

Thank you love, I do so love and appreciate your UK gut :) xx

[Pryde Foltz]

Pure magic, only we can touch,
Only you and me can see.
In the transparent air above us;

A enchanting ethereal love poem. These lines transported me.

Thank you Vancouver, I appreciate you dearest Sis xx