~ Your Wall Flower

~ Your Wall Flower, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Spain, Life, Utopia, Hurt, Bliss, Perfection, Home

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

I embrace you as I’m your fence,

Your lovers prison, the real cadence;

               In your realm, I’m just your wall,

               And I’m happy  to be, for it’s my call,

 

Be wrapped inside of my warm heart, my arms,

I shall let you swoon the lovers charms,

               A smile, a warmth, a place to live;

              The Sun on my skin, the flowers growth;

 

To be around you is my intense need;

My summer Sun, of life's deed…

 

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm not expecting any reviews, for I'm still on a hiatus, but I promised my little brother "Pax" somehow to keep on writing in between.... so thanks for reading. Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Lovely!! It is a very unique take on the classic love poem. It brought to mind the famous "Wall" album from Pink Floyd and accompanying film. The animations regarding the protagonist's mother figure and her loving arms are given less than positive spin in that storyline, but we all know that this is just one facet of protection. You are showing the other...the more righteous side. "Your lover's prison" is such a strange and beautiful way to look on the complete encapsulation of love. Definitely a rare view, and that is always what makes for the best art!

What a most beautiful review my friend, thank you so much, I totally love it what you got out of this, and that I didn't even thought of that, is most funny. Thank you Robear.

[Nicole Williams]

You always make me smile Elisa, such a beautiful piece of art as always love.

Thank you love! always so nice to see you by! :)

[KurKota]

This is a beautiful work. The complete package is just you, my friend, as I perceive you. Precise, yet very mysterious....a combination in which you excel. A very nice experience to "absorb" this.

Thank you for sharing this, my dear friend !

Thank you so much James. If you say so I feel very honored my sweet friend :)

[KurKota]

Indeed I do think so, and it is I that am honored to be one of your many friends.

Thank you so much again James. :) for all you do!

[topsyturvy]

This was such a lovely read, it makes the feeling of hope and love even more so than what it normally is. It's there. It's bigger and it's more real. It means something :)

Thank you my dear friend, for the review (again) :) so appreciated. I love what you got out of it.

[Lydia Shutter]

The romantic longing and all encompassing desire is rich and full in every line of this amazing poem, Elisa. As always, you have chosen the perfect music and graphic to accompany your words. Swaying to the beat of the Spanish song here. We empathize and understand the needs of those we love....we hold them up when they need it and open the gates when we know they need space. Just beautiful, sweet friend of mine. Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you my sweet friend, for understanding the write so well, and your beautiful words... I hope all your page problems/issue's are solved Lydi, saw you lost your friendlist...? (glitches). Knuffels Eli xxx

[emmajoy]

Pulling the curtains open just for a second's glimpse - all your skills displayed and more than beautiful.

Thank you my neighbour friend.... for your words, hope you understood the lyrics.... most don't :) You come in off the street, through the doors of the theater. You sit down. The lights go down and the curtain goes up. And you're in another world.
-Robert Caro (such a special name, to the both of us) ;)

[emmajoy]

Not sure about the last comment .. but for the rest, I understand only too well. Your picture is perfect for your words..

Thank you love, that's already enough for me... :) The Spanish, is just a paradox on it all :)

[Pax]

I embrace you as I’m your fence,
Your lovers prison, the real cadence;

I so love the first phrase. It tell so much about us, the us here in wc. The we as the family. As humans, we build fences, the emotional barriers to protect ourselves, because we know how much pain we felt in the past to us. This fences are not ordinary as it seems. In a deep perspective, it’s a pieces of ourselves transformed into barriers, more often it is in reverse. So to understand it, you must embrace it as your own to understand and feel its core meaning. Sometimes we are the prisoners of our own d*mn choices, pardon with my words. Yup, sometimes we make foolish choices or even the stupid one, that in the end we are the lose end, the broken. But through that, we adapt and change.. just hoping for the better, and perhaps- just maybe we become a better person on the better end.

In your realm, I’m just your wall,
And I’m happy to be, for it’s my call,

I so love this next phrase. It’s like a friend, who never gives up, a friend who tries the best she/he can to do for what’s right and be around in the toughest time, even there are walls your still there being happy to support all the way- that’s the beauty of a real friend, no matter what the situation brings…

Ahh, “The Wall Flower of WC”, you. :)
I am so deeply touched by this piece.
Big sis, thanks for sharing us your gift. Be well always…

Aaaah, you get it love, thanks bro! yes, it's for all of us, here on WC. :) We have all difficult times, and we must write it out. We must live it.... it's not good to not talk about it, and suffer all alone ;) share your hurt.... Yes, pain is the fuel of beauty dear one. We get richer out of it.
maybe in other places, where our mind or body drives us too, but we are transported by the fact of writing/healing. You also learned me that. So thank you, this piece was indirectely for you, and for our families, so we can be always how far we are be together. You kept me going, writing, so thank you a million. :) Much love your wall flower Sis... lol :D xxx thanks with whole my heart bro, for always encoriging me in times I am feeling blue, and helpless lol.... you are a Saudi fuel :D did you now????????? now I wonder why they are so rich over there.... ;) just kidding. Love love you bro.

* encouraging... I'm life-tired lol ;) my fuel ♥

[Pax]

a million smiles here, i am grateful too, hugs... our emotional burden must be release or its not good for our heart and health... writing indeed is therapeutic. and I will always remember we fly high together... :D in our words...

hehe, you are my wall flower big sis here... can be, you know... for your family... the Saudi fuel is still rich...hehe, but in fact I am very near in the industrial area where most of the fuel is stored, it must be it..lol..and don't forget you are always welcome, a pleasure all the way... :D more hugs..

Yes, thanks so much for repeating that.... sigh. :) happy always lovely bro to have you around. I'm just a person, like you, that's why we match so well, we aren't robots, we aren't ashamed of what is going on. We are willing to heal. Not hiding. :) Love you for saying that... I shall be always your wall flower, and protect you. I will. Nobody shall harm you, for I am the stoned wall. :) More huggers your way.... must leave now, but will review more soon! can't wait.... for you I do all. :) xxxx

[Pax]

I am glad, our bond together as family is still strong... time flies by as we fly high, by words we become more stronger in understanding... a robot can only be a machine it doesn't have a heart on which it has the compassion, a the key to get better... better than who we are in the past... take care on the road...

So so true... we are strong and a strong family on here. :) lately I discovered that "true love" isn't artificial. :D lol..... when I drive, you're sitting on my deshboard always bro.... :) xxxxx

[Pax]

I think there is artifical love or so to say superfecial love, or false love, that kind of love is dangerous and painful... that is the most hardest to pin point, its a crazy world you know, insane as it seems, the beauty on it i think is finding the right person to be insane with, who will understand everything for who you really are...

Oh you're wise beyond your years Bro, I myself, couldn't have said it better.... thank you dearest.
What would the Elis do without Paxie? :D it simply has just one wing to fly, and we need two, :) to fly high! thanks my artistic brother. You have a special place in this little heart.... xxxx see you soon ok? must leave now, but back soon! :) much love hugs/and compassion.

[Pax]

smiling, smiling, keeps on smiling here... :)
see you soon too, drive safe, take care, much hugs back to you...

Thank you deary! :) Sis has you in her pocket :D and on dashboard :D and well everywhere ;) many coming road photo's hugs, and love! brother.

[Baby Ricochet]

Loved the photo, the song and the poem. Outstanding Elisa

Thank you with whole my heart Baby R. :) happy to see you by!

[Pryde Foltz]

I embrace you as I’m your fence,
Your lovers prison, the real cadence;
In your realm, I’m just your wall,
And I’m happy to be, for it’s my call,

To give support to those we love is to love. Excellent write, Elisa.

Thank you so much my sweet friend... your words always bring me happiness :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is excellent. Love the end rhyme and the line's cadence. A beautiful, stirring pieces as always.

Oh, Kenneth, thank you my buddy, so so much... :) smiling.