~ Your Wall Flower

~ Your Wall Flower, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Spain, Life, Utopia, Hurt, Bliss, Perfection, Home

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

I embrace you as I’m your fence,

Your lovers prison, the real cadence;

               In your realm, I’m just your wall,

               And I’m happy  to be, for it’s my call,

 

Be wrapped inside of my warm heart, my arms,

I shall let you swoon the lovers charms,

               A smile, a warmth, a place to live;

              The Sun on my skin, the flowers growth;

 

To be around you is my intense need;

My summer Sun, of life's deed…

 

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm not expecting any reviews, for I'm still on a hiatus, but I promised my little brother "Pax" somehow to keep on writing in between.... so thanks for reading. Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Lovely!! It is a very unique take on the classic love poem. It brought to mind the famous "Wall" album from Pink Floyd and accompanying film. The animations regarding the protagonist's mother figure and her loving arms are given less than positive spin in that storyline, but we all know that this is just one facet of protection. You are showing the other...the more righteous side. "Your lover's prison" is such a strange and beautiful way to look on the complete encapsulation of love. Definitely a rare view, and that is always what makes for the best art!

What a most beautiful review my friend, thank you so much, I totally love it what you got out of this, and that I didn't even thought of that, is most funny. Thank you Robear.

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

When the "wall "gets compared, it often is the symbol "separation" yet you changed all that. This is original, unique piece you have here, and very touching in a loving way

Thank you very much Greg, it's always good to see you, and I shall return the favor soon :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

I reviewed this a long time ago :( lol but lets see :) Loved your heading :) but it made me so sad your wall flower being you the wall of Wc. You described your emotions well very done this is a very good poem Elisa good work

Dank je wel! voor je mooie woorden! Soentjis en Drukkies ;)

[Trace]

I read many wonderful things here, the warmth of a lovers embrace, the security of true love.
the ease of being with someone that is your everything.

Very nice.

Trace

Thank you so much Trace. Always nice to read your reviews... very appreciated.

[Ahena MK]

good read !!
nice :)
ahena

Thank you very much Ahena :)

[Frieda P]

Oh Eli, I'm wrapping myself up in your warmth this morning. I could take this one a few places, Italy makes me feel this way, and a certain someone, hmm a whole other old song. Just charming my sweet friend, love the graphic too, you have so much talent, it blows me away! xoxo

Oh Sorella, you give me goosebumps, in this afternoon :) so so happy with your words, they bring me heartsmiles. I'm so glad this one could bring you back to Italy for a bit, Italy/Spain, are so alike... it's both home to me.... ♥ thank you love so so much xoxoxoxo

[Frieda P]

Goosebumps are good cara ;-) Such a luverly place to be in your poetry. xoxo

Thank you so much again sweet friend.....xxxxx

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is written to perfection..Truly romantic in the sweetest possible way.Letting the one you love know that you will always be there for them in a lovers tone.Much enjoyed by Vidya Vista :)

Oh your words bring me pure joy my friend, thank you sweet soul for being here. So appreciated you are.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome sweetie it was a pleasure for sure :)

Thank you so much again :) I will come by for more soon! always good to catch up with you Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

......................:D

[Rossen]

Your poetry ~the spice of life~

No, your reviews..... are! thank you friend.

[Scott Metro]

Beautiful...giving...surrender to love.
You have a beautiful heart.

My admiration always.
Scott

I'm grateful to you dear friend... :) smiling.

[Scott Metro]

It was beautiful..thanks for sharing with us.
S.

The pleasure is all mine, and I hope I can bring some more writings soon... (they come when they come). It's always nice to have you by... my friend. E.

[Scott Metro]

Do what you can do...and when you can't..we will wait..some things are worth waiting for..
S.

That's the sweetest thing a person said to me tonight. Thank you with whole my heart Scott. Elis. (means so much to me).

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty wolf..

He he, oh that's so sweet!!!!! howls :)

[Scott Metro]

You always make me smile so...you exude warmth by the ton !!!!
S.

I feel happy we are friends Scotty Wolf. :) I shall come by soon for more! you deserve it....

[Scott Metro]

Thank you Elisa.

[Belle]

Such love as the blind-god knows. "Your wall flower." Your sweet protector.

"To be around you is my intense need;
My summer Sun, of life's deed…" - this is very much home to me, Dear Eli. Nothing compares the feeling of being secured, being protected by love!

Thank you so much my dear, you got it as always :) so so happy to have you by!, I'm slow, I will come by to you too :) can't wait, so good you're a bit back xx

[Belle]

No worries, Dear Sis, I very well understand. I've been there many times, I was not even sure if I can stay as much as I want to. Just here again for the name of "love"! :)

Hoping that you are always well.

I love that "for the name of love" my mantra! thank you Sis. I'm hoping that for you too... you have a special place in my heart xx

[Belle]

and you have in mine, too...just here for you...

I'm here for you too, I will mail you soon... to catch a bit up, in between our busy lives... xx :) have much to tell you!

[Belle]

certainly will wait for that, dear sis ;)...

Thank you so much! sweet Sis. :) I plan soon a whole day, to respond on everyone's mail... or maybe I see you in a hangout by then... ;) but shall mail first, I think that's better.... much love!