~ Your Wall Flower

~ Your Wall Flower, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Spain, Life, Utopia, Hurt, Bliss, Perfection, Home

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

I embrace you as I’m your fence,

Your lovers prison, the real cadence;

               In your realm, I’m just your wall,

               And I’m happy  to be, for it’s my call,

 

Be wrapped inside of my warm heart, my arms,

I shall let you swoon the lovers charms,

               A smile, a warmth, a place to live;

              The Sun on my skin, the flowers growth;

 

To be around you is my intense need;

My summer Sun, of life's deed…

 

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm not expecting any reviews, for I'm still on a hiatus, but I promised my little brother "Pax" somehow to keep on writing in between.... so thanks for reading. Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Lovely!! It is a very unique take on the classic love poem. It brought to mind the famous "Wall" album from Pink Floyd and accompanying film. The animations regarding the protagonist's mother figure and her loving arms are given less than positive spin in that storyline, but we all know that this is just one facet of protection. You are showing the other...the more righteous side. "Your lover's prison" is such a strange and beautiful way to look on the complete encapsulation of love. Definitely a rare view, and that is always what makes for the best art!

What a most beautiful review my friend, thank you so much, I totally love it what you got out of this, and that I didn't even thought of that, is most funny. Thank you Robear.

[kublakhan27]

You are a better rhymer than I think you give yourself credit for sis ;) Such a powerful statement of devotion...we should all be so lucky to be serenaded by such a piece. Love and hugs always :) xoxo

Thank you dear one, it was meant to all :) and thanks for this lovely review, Love and hugs always brother... xo :) take good care of ((YOU)) x

[Chris]

I have written upon your soul
with dreams' inks
and life's paint...
and each tear's path
left time's mark
for the world to see.

Chris

You're a tattooed friend to (into) my heart my dear... so so beautiful your words, thank you immensely xo

[Chris]

A woman needs to know ...she touches more than the air brushing her cheek... and you lil love - always have.

I'm truly humbled and smiling by your words, my dear friend.... they mean so much to me. Thank you Chris. I'm maybe often abcent, or silent, but I see / notice all on here... and you are precious to me.

[Michelle N. H.]

Love is like an everlasting embrace, warm, selfless and protecting. It is unseen similar to a wallflower, but present even so, as the silent observer. Very beautiful :)

Thank you so much dear, for your keen insight, and sweet words towards this one... I so appreciate you xx

[Michelle N. H.]

You're so welcome :) You have an amazing pen, which makes my every visit to your page a special experience.

Aw, that means the world to me you say that, I have that with your writings too. I mean that, truly so highly sensitive you write. :)

[Michelle N. H.]

That means just as much to me, if not more! Thank you, Elisa :)

No thank you sweetie, you're a Sis, of heart.

[Paul Seaman]

its nice to think that flowers have secret lives !

Thank you so much Paul, :) funny you think that way, but I like it :D

[Paul Seaman]

I just cant handle innuendo tonite ! :-)

You should really read the mail I send to you. I think you think twice before you "ASSUME" the next time.

[joshua deathdealer]

A flower in need of sunshine. Willing to stand in the background and bask in the warmth. A wall by choice. Interesting and beautiful!!

Thank you my dear one, for your support always! xx :) beautiful words by you!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sis, I adore this!!
You weave a brilliant fence... A wall to house your love, which holds the strength for another...
What is not said in so many words, is what I find intriguing...
You compact so much emotion just by building this wall...not to keep out those who need you...
But to protect and love those who are inside ( the walls of your heart)...

This is enriched penning, Eli... Excellent, as always!!!~xoxoxo~

Wow, Sis.... I'm speachless... I truly am. You know me sometimes better than I know myself lol... truly you do! I can't thank you enough for your words, they are so so appreciated!! ♥ xoxo :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sis, you are most welcome...
So glad you are home safely...love your heart!~xoxo~

Thank you dear one, for fully understanding this write, love you for that! xoxo ;)

[Sasha]

"To be around you is my intense need;
My summer Sun, of life's deed…"

Beautiful !!

Thank you so very much sweet Sasha... :) smiling.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Thank you my Raven Sister for all your support, your poem could be about a person who fades into the background and secretly admires a loved one from a far and wraps him with her thoughts.

Now who is brilliant? yay! my Raven Sister, :) I always love it when you give me your sharp thougts... xxx thank you dear one.

[Tony]

I enjoyed the sense of strength you express here--
I also felt a sense of protection or protector in there too:)

Thank you so much Mr. Makosica... :) I love what you got out of it... I will come by soon my friend.

[Lover Of Words]

Such amazing beauty and warmth

Thank you so much Kelsey! :) xo

[Lover Of Words]

You leave me breathless my love!!!!