~ Your Wall Flower

~ Your Wall Flower, E.L. Elisa Laura, Love, Spain, Life, Utopia, Hurt, Bliss, Perfection, Home

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

I embrace you as I’m your fence,

Your lovers prison, the real cadence;

               In your realm, I’m just your wall,

               And I’m happy  to be, for it’s my call,

 

Be wrapped inside of my warm heart, my arms,

I shall let you swoon the lovers charms,

               A smile, a warmth, a place to live;

              The Sun on my skin, the flowers growth;

 

To be around you is my intense need;

My summer Sun, of life's deed…

 

~ Your Wall Flower

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm not expecting any reviews, for I'm still on a hiatus, but I promised my little brother "Pax" somehow to keep on writing in between.... so thanks for reading. Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Robert Tusitala O'Neill]

Lovely!! It is a very unique take on the classic love poem. It brought to mind the famous "Wall" album from Pink Floyd and accompanying film. The animations regarding the protagonist's mother figure and her loving arms are given less than positive spin in that storyline, but we all know that this is just one facet of protection. You are showing the other...the more righteous side. "Your lover's prison" is such a strange and beautiful way to look on the complete encapsulation of love. Definitely a rare view, and that is always what makes for the best art!

What a most beautiful review my friend, thank you so much, I totally love it what you got out of this, and that I didn't even thought of that, is most funny. Thank you Robear.

[Revery]

Your words Elisa are those of unselfish love and that doesn't surprise me coming from you. I love the imagery you used here the wall, the fence, and being sheltered beautifully in your heart. Stunning.

Thank you so much G. for your wonderful comment. :) good to see you again!

[ron]

You are a beautiful wall flower. This is true love in poetic fashion.

Thank you so much, I try to give some friendship and love always for the Cafe, even if I'm silent :)

[ron]

You are most welcome :)

[Half Dream]

"Be wrapped inside of my warm heart, my arms,
I shall let you swoon the lovers charms,
A smile, a warmth, a place to live;
The Sun on my skin, the flowers growth;"

You warmed my heart and my soul reading this another brilliant art of your work. I am seriously addicted to you!! *smiles* Love you sweetest sis!!

Thank you so much sweet Sis.... It's nice to read your words when I'm on the road, they make my day... X love you too! :)

[Wuji]

I don't usually like rhymes, but this is very sweet. It's lovely to support and feel that support and that mesh of sharing lives.

Thank you :)

[junaid altaf]

i would like to be your wall flower...
jus jokin!
simply amazing

He he... thank you so much ;) Junaid.

[junaid altaf]

your welcome

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Can the emotion be any more pure than from the "wall flower"?...this is an exceptional look at love! I am always so immersed in your imagery and flow...so captivated by the vibrations your thoughts leave in my senses. Kudos Dear friend!

Thank you so much my sweet Queenie. Such a heartfelt review, here. I can't thank you enough. I will be back soon... breathing out some stuff in between my hiatus ;) missing you! x

[Jeannear]

beautiful poem very well written....thank you for sharing

Thank you with whole my heart sweet jeannear.... xxx

[Author Unknown]

A change in writing style for this piece....from free verse which was your preferred style to rhyming. Yet it still came out very good. Not sure if the wording lines were rearrange to a shape or figure of a question mark. Could be just coincidental ..
The wordings are very intriguing...Was the muse or her love was an illusion or a decoration ? Is she blending in ? In my realm i consider this piece as " dubious " ... I need to investigate what the author mean ...

Thanks for the review Author Unknown, I appreciate your thoughts... :)

[Author Unknown]

I'll be coming back for more ...

You take your time, precious one. ;)

[Shane Hogan Poetry]

I love it :) .

Thank you very much Shane :)