~ Profound

~ Profound, Elisa Laura...

~ Profound

 

We are the earth,

We run on the same planet,

 

                   You are in my future,

                   I was in your past,

 

Days whirl, like snowflakes,

For my eyes, but there is sunshine,

 

You melt my cold moments in your warm light,

                  Inside your heart,

                  Your happiness is my face ...

 

The ozone layer is not damaged,

When you sing your music,

 

                   And your arms around me, the radiation

                   Your faith brings me back to serenity

 

Evening counted times,

The mornings so shiny,

 

                    Confidence by the wind, of our existence,

                    Care, love, and the ink, our blood,

 

Tasted, lived, love that trembles, like a gift,

We are the atmosphere, the ring, of our

                     Hearts so near...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy, xx
Wishing you all a wonderful Christmas xx

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Labyrinth of time, made of different realities...Love express itself mostly with the pain , and why we don`t have the power to say. Really profound piece, as its title. We pay high price, and exchange body for soul, go through many tests, nothing is just one choice. It`s meaningful...I loved this lines:
You melt my cold moments in your warm light,
Inside your heart,
Love is all

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Beautiful words, yet again by you sweety. :) This was a piece to someone very special, as well to everyone... for there is a love between all connected time-zones, and the comets we have in our universe. -x- I'm smiling with your reviews :) I will be back for you as soon as I can...

[redzone]

if only the earth were as wonerdfully healthy and happy as the love you share with your partner... we would all be greatful for both our future and for your words.... these are my favorite lines: "You melt my cold moments in your warm light,
Inside your heart,
Your happiness is my face"
Other lines too, but others have already expressed them so won't do a repeat... Thanks Elisa for the loving thoughts on this rather cold day.. ~~redzone

Thank you so much Redzone. Happy Holidays to you, and till soon, when I come back for you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Beautiful Elisa the words paint such pictures that has my head reeling and a smile on my face.Thank you for letting us share in your mastery.Merry Christmas love:)

Thank you love :) you make my heart always happy when you're here, Merry Christmas xxxxx

[Vidya Bacchus]

Same to you , and you are welcome.Yours Vidya Vista:)

Hope you have a great day my sweet VidyaVista :D:D xx till after the holidays, can't wait to be back for you love! x

[Vidya Bacchus]

Same very same to you.All my love and you take care:)

[Pryde Foltz]

A wonderful spiritual write, lovely one.

Thank you Pryde :) xx

[Horizon K.]

...love that trembles, like a gift...
Such beautiful words Elisa, this warm and lighted poem and the feelings and experiences that shaped you to write this, is truly a Christmas gift! I feel like a warm fuzzy atmosphere now. Christmas hugs to you Sis! Love you! xoxo

Beautiful words, Sister, I am grateful I could give a little gift here... :) xx

[Jack...]

So very beautiful my sweet friend. That this love is my earth, your heart my oceans and your soul my wind so that I my breathe in you eternally. Days, nights, each as precious as this shared love. Once more I find exquisite beauty when I visit your world.

Thank you Jack :) Merry Christmas to you my friend.

[Traci]

Confidence by the wind, of our existence,
Care, love, and the ink, our blood,

As always a beautiful write, another fav.

Thank you love, always xx hope you have a wonderful time x :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

again, you and I...are one with each other, and one with nature...and meant to be.

beautifully meshed piece of love with the surroundings and being surrounded with love.

Thank you Jacob! :) Merry Christmas to you!

[Aethereal]

Very insightful poem! We are the Earth's ability to find value and meaning within herself.

Thank you so much my friend, I appreciate your thoughts! Happy Holidays xx