~ Profound

~ Profound, Elisa Laura...

~ Profound

 

We are the earth,

We run on the same planet,

 

                   You are in my future,

                   I was in your past,

 

Days whirl, like snowflakes,

For my eyes, but there is sunshine,

 

You melt my cold moments in your warm light,

                  Inside your heart,

                  Your happiness is my face ...

 

The ozone layer is not damaged,

When you sing your music,

 

                   And your arms around me, the radiation

                   Your faith brings me back to serenity

 

Evening counted times,

The mornings so shiny,

 

                    Confidence by the wind, of our existence,

                    Care, love, and the ink, our blood,

 

Tasted, lived, love that trembles, like a gift,

We are the atmosphere, the ring, of our

                     Hearts so near...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Enjoy, xx
Wishing you all a wonderful Christmas xx

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Labyrinth of time, made of different realities...Love express itself mostly with the pain , and why we don`t have the power to say. Really profound piece, as its title. We pay high price, and exchange body for soul, go through many tests, nothing is just one choice. It`s meaningful...I loved this lines:
You melt my cold moments in your warm light,
Inside your heart,
Love is all

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Beautiful words, yet again by you sweety. :) This was a piece to someone very special, as well to everyone... for there is a love between all connected time-zones, and the comets we have in our universe. -x- I'm smiling with your reviews :) I will be back for you as soon as I can...

[Pax]

Confidence by the wind, of our existence,
Care, love, and the ink, our blood,

I was drawn to this not because of the profundity of the piece but the profundity of our love for the written word. How big our love for words, to express it is just like breathing. Like the quote says; Poetry breathes life. Our heart is always shown in the many verses we write. We write to tell a story, a feeling of love, sadness, happiness or even sorrow and grief- we write our emotions in verses.

This verse shows us how love is just around us. So profound that more often we don’t see it. Little things must be taken to account, ‘for small things comes from big packages’. Like a flicker of light can brings so much warmth, enough to keep us going, to keep us hoping… you only need one light to bring so much love. That is love, we don’t need many, one is enough to keep us alive and energize in plenty.

I do love the imagery here, the way you used the science and nature to blend in beautiful imagery, you’ll simply achieve the full beauty of life and love. I do really like the beauty of light in your piece.

Very well expressed, big sis.

Oh brother what a wonderful review you give me.... yes, "Breathe in life, Breathe out Poetry" is my slogan/quote/mantra. Love is universal, where it is, bro, it means it can be in one second from Eindhoven to where you are, ;) from sis to you, or from me to Robbie, or other friends... love in this cafe is universal, we are all together... the ether(net) is rich, the inter(even richer) love is there, when you're standing open to/for it. Thank you so much dear one, I love your points of view, to my core always, you know that, only you and a rare few get there ;) xxxxx

[Pax]

"Breathe in life, Breathe out Poetry" ~ love that mantra... its good to have it around, to remind us that to write always does have a catharsis effects on us. So we should not stop writing, lets keep on penning for the better understanding of our love of words... great to have you around big sis... and your always, always welcome...

Exactly dear bro.... yep that's it. We should never stop, even when it distract, or feels empty. We will get anyhow (speaking of myself) words true the parallel.... ;) sometimes, I fight them, I wished for them not to come through, but then, they are stronger than me ;) so what can I do? haha... dilemma.... x :) a writers curse probably ;) thank you so much for the dialogue tonight.../morning. Always a pleasure to have you around my dear. xx

[Pax]

those empty feelings, that's the time I really want to expressed them in words, or else I will drown to nothingness.. Those delimma will passed, like you've suffer now, then on the next you'll know what to do, then be loved... we suffer from it now and then, but you know, we know we are stronger than that.. so we keep on trying, and trying till we reach something...

morning from here... have a cap of tea to relax the mind... :)

Yes, you're a true translater/transmitter... :D I smile. We always reach... even through air ;)
read moreYes, you're a true translater/transmitter... :D I smile. We always reach... even through air ;)
Morning from here too he he... not so much time difference, it's 8:30 almost here. xx Oh we should drink tea together, the kettle is on............ hahaha x

[Pax]

haha, the kittle is on, i like any tea that is red like now I am having hibiscus tea or anyther fruit tea... with flavor the better..cheera!

Oh that sounds so lovely!!! I'm just struck to my South African one ;) hahaha... pass me some of yours!! please :D

[Pax]

sure, its a good herb tea, good for the health too... :)

Yes!!! I need some of yours! send it by post now hahaha x

[Pax]

oh the postman is asleep, to lazy..lol, but should i fly there and send it personally, now that's much better, i just need to find that nice gift of wings you bought me from ebay..LOL

Haha... it's a Saudi one? maybe a Dutch even ;) lol Nia sended me something from Bulgaria lately, it never received!!! shame on EUROPEAN POST DELIVERY!!! that been said... Oh Ebay WINGS, yes... haha oh, I almsot forgot, I send them right away lol ahhaha

[Pax]

yup, it has arabic letters, so it must be one.. :) such a shame it got lost... in time, I'll be able to send you one as well... :) those wings are precious, one of a kind perhaps, ebay has some rare find there..hehe..

Oh that would be lovely, will send you a package too! promise! with some typical Dutch thingy's in it... maybe you want to have something? from here? just say it to me, I'll send it to you. :) hahaha, wings, I send with no doubt, but maybe tea, coffee? cigarets? perfume? anything?

[Pax]

nah, no need big sis, for now i am doing good and don't need much... your words is enough... :)
read morenah, no need big sis, for now i am doing good and don't need much... your words is enough... :)
i am enjoying my mornings, thanks for a great company friend, family.

always so humble .... ;) you can / may really ask me, I send it with pleasure, no problem :D

[Lover Of Words]

I am profound at your amazing ability with words you are such a beautiful soul and your words say that to us readers i felt the depth of love of this gorgeous work

Thank you so much sweet Kels! :) you're a gift that is send to me! :) I can't thank you enough.... be good yourself ok? catch up very soon! x

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you for giving me a gift my dear and i will do my best

You're the best Kelsey! tears.............. xxx

[Lover Of Words]

Dont cry love

I do of happiness ;)

[Lover Of Words]

well as long as there happy tears you truly are something special my dear friend

So are you my friend, you're a gem!

[Lover Of Words]

Nothing compared to you my sweets! :)

[David Scott]

I like you use of metaphor mixed with simile.
You say "we are" and "love is" and then offer comparative expansion of your thoughts.
This poetry is "profound" Eli!
Thank you for sharing this work dearest angel.

Thank you so much Mister Scott :) you always have the feelers :D

[emmajoy]

There are beautiful words and beautiful thoughts, but, you find beauty in meaning. Thank you, dear Elisa, for posting yet another .. revelation.

Thank you my dear tooolip twin xxxx

[NeiL ArandA]

Your deep appreciation of the world around you . Your circle of influence and those moments and places and life experiences that mold and shape you for who you are now . A strong and resilient women . .Another beautiful write .

Thank you so much dear one. Your review is beautiful :)

[Dave]

It's a great opening line you have here. It drew me in completely.
And the poem itself is not bad at all.

Thank you Dave, I appreciate your thoughts :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

wow so many subject in this piece yet you make look elegant and easy:)

Thank you with whole my heart ayele :)

[ayele marie dalmeida]

Your welcome:)..... Happy new years

[Frieda P]

Thoughtful, intellectual write my sweet friend, profound indeed. Have missed you. Have a sweet New Year cara. Baci. xo

Love :) you're back yay! thank you so much.... I'm out of here for a while, but back soon.... Have missed you too xxx Happy New Year love xx

[joshua deathdealer]

I am empowered. Agape love shines in this one. Which is the purest love. Such a connection with emotions and nature. Interactive even with the reader. Tremendous work dear Elisa. Happy Holidays and a blessed New Year. xo

Thank you dear, xx wishing you a fantastic time overthere with lot's of music, and happiness for the New Year xx :)

[marck milderman]

I love the steps your pen takes, and the feeling I get speaking this in my head. The mention of faith, confidence and love in the heart fills me with childish glee. I dislike like this season, but your poem rings true :)

Thanks a lot for your words here! so appreciate it. :)