~ Illusions?

~ Illusions?, Elisa Laura, What do you know? What do you feel, What do you see? What will you Assume? Illusions, Life, Death, Love, Live, Real, Scribble, Hurt, Facts, Truth, Fake? Time for a change.

~ Illusions?

 

 

Rare dark streets,

The smell of chemicals

Ether hanging in thin air

Hospital odor meets;

 

Dancing on your bed,

Looking at the sky, 

The ceiling lights so high,

Flashing, before your eyes,

Trembling, shaking fled ...

 

Needles in your arms,

Blood through your veins,

Darkness in your thoughts, 

Life in your pains…

Silence for a while...

There is a little bit of

Death in your breath...

After each time we've met...

 

 ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by: Nine Inch Nails - Closer - Instrumental

Enjoy even the darker me. xx

Reviews

[Rosalind Gale]

Your darkness, to me, is everything. It is the light from which I can always feel you, see you, and know your emotions. This poem reminds me of a song, I mean, it could be one. This piece made me want to smoke a cigarette, but I dare not. My baby will tell me off. You are special.
-x-

Thank you very much dear one... I have the same with your writings, they are all brilliant... Oh and don't smoke ;) he he... you're the best xoxo :)

[KurKota]

Did I really read this ? Did I really hear the music ?.............or is this just all an Illusion ? I am here....you are there ? Or are we ??? You may really be here in my head, and I there in your head !

Very thought provoking, thus a very good write and compilation ! ...........Or is it ? :)

Thank you J. your presence is so appreciated here :)

[KurKota]

Good Morning, my friend ! I hope your day ( or evening/night) go well ! You are a great one.

Good evening from here dear one, 5:30 PM almost here :) wishing you a lovely day! Elis xx

[Pryde Foltz]

Not your usual style. You have a gift for the dark side too.

Thank you Pryde :)

[Cryingkate]

Sounds to me like a step back with observation more then a dark side.
For me this is displaying a statement of void from emotions and thoughts
and exchanging it for silence while observing.
This pretty much then translates to me on the next level as a reminder that Our life as we see it is just an illusion.And all those things attached to emotions and thoughts are void.
What then? Where do we go from here? No where.=everywhere, into the nothing and silence away from the illusion and into "The now" empty space which is really everything.

Great Job ! Well Done ! At first read I thought "she didn't say anything" "There's nothing there"
then It hit me that Nothing is everything.

Such a great review Connie. Thank you very much for being here, and your words towards this piece.

[Cryingkate]

Thank you :-)