~ Air

~ Air

A Poem by
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~ Air, Elisa Laura, Sky, Nothingness, Freedom, Wings, Relativation

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~ Air


I flew over high mountains,

I could paint so many landscapes

With my eyes, looking down

On the seas and fields

 

The sun in me, warmed my soul

The wind was kind, and gentle

You were everything inside of me

My beloved air

 

You were the space,

Everything around me,

Nothing more than air,

For my blood, lungs and heart

For you I lived, without awareness

 

So dreaming and thinking the sky

I found myself in you,

And you my large cloud

My wave of passion

The storm of my core,

Mingled with me in our skies

 

My air, and I

 

~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note

Music - B-Tribe - La Unica Excusa...
Enjoy! xx


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"My wave of passion

The storm of my core,"


Seems to stick with me. This foundation is what creates the person of tomorrow. Think about it. With no passion comes no ambition. It is something you can't explain, it's just something you have to do. Good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, I do love your take on this one.... :) Smiling here..... good morning f.. read more
RienKelsoCinema

10 Years Ago

Thanks!

Good morning from the US. :D



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You hit the perfect spot with this piece and the musical tune is perfectly in symphony with your thoughts. What a profound lesson and thought it is ... Man can survive for weeks without food. Only few days without water. BUT only few minutes without AIR ...Its the most precious commodity and vital element on earth. We do sometimes take it for granted that the most important and detrimental in life is FREE and comes at no cost and no charge to us... God doesn't charge us a single penny for it . If He does then it breaks and wean us from our dependence on oil and gas. For we can still survive without it but not air..
Another brilliant composition Elise . The gentle breeze blew my way. So I follow the Northern Wind and It guided me this way ... ~The Lonely Sparrow ~


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10 Years Ago

Oh Neil, yes, you got it... thank you, thank you dear. :) Air and Water are my elements, (they say)... read more
WOW, Elisa so beautiful and delicate...like you want to wrap it up and keep it close forever....wonder if this is what birds of flight feel like or see when they fly in the air.....this poem makes me remember the days of sitting by the water and feeling the cool air blowing through my hair...as your lungs fill with the freshness and you feel so rejuvenated....okay I truly admire your work Elisa, you have this tranquility about you an essence in your writings, thank you for sharing

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10 Years Ago

Thank you dearest for this beautiful review, I'm so happy I could make you remember that, and let yo.. read more
A piece of zen, very nice.

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10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pryde. :)
Air is necessity and so are you. This is such a lovely piece of art. Beautiful work dear. xx

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10 Years Ago

Thank you so very much my dear muwah! xxx :)
This is heavenly, Sis!
I felt the love surrounding every cloud... a sweet caress of words, love...
Simply Breathtaking!~xoxo~:)

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10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sis, your words mean the world to me xoxo :) I'm on my way to catch up :D muwah fo.. read more
damn this is beautiful...i breathe you in and out...you are my sustenance---

so nicely worded, we can feel the passion and the strength of the love.
jacob

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10 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend for the kind words :)
Leaves would be still
birds earthbound..
There would be no sound
Nothing blowing in the wind
No floating no flying
Just silence..just dying...

Beautiful and sad ...................... Jazz ♥♥ XXOO



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10 Years Ago

Beautiful words, by you Jasmine........ ♥ Thank you so much xxx
J. J.  Nightingale

10 Years Ago

(((YOU))) .............................♥

10 Years Ago

((((NO YOU)))) abrazos................ ♥♥ I will / must read you tonight.........xx
Beautiful and romantic, maybe one day we'll all learn to fly

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10 Years Ago

Thank you Baby, very much :)

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