~ Episode

~ Episode, Elisa Laura, The Love I feel deep Inside...

~ Episode

 

 

For you, I would dance infinitely,

Along the sparkling canals

Of Amsterdam,

 

In the depths of the night,

Where I live, and see;

 

And feel the passion of my death,

Slowly creep in, at every pass I make…

 

I want to touch your ivory beauty,

Almost taste, the passion of your strings;

Where you and me collide in fire…

 

Your dark shine, your hair;

And the reflection of the morning glory

Your teeth as white as our kiss;

 

All this makes our music more intense,

We are love and the invisible…

 

Evaporated air whirls through my fingers,

And I finally breathe out, my last breath...

 

It was you, for who I shone, and 

                It was you I played…

 

 

-        Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by: "Franz Liszt - Liebestraum - Love Dream"
Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Odysseus Wanders]

I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.

Beautiful writing Elisa-

Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you liked this one. :) it's my endless love for the piano, and music, I play it like a lover.... ;) haha... thank you Terry. I am soon back for more of your fantastic writings. Greetings from the Netherlands.

[Odysseus Wanders]

So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not know if you did or did not. "Your dark shine, your hair;
And the reflection of the morning glory
Your teeth as white as our kiss;"

After this, I knew... such a great play on words. Ha.

Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those feelers. I can see why you are connected as a sun to the one you love now.... ;) great to have you by my friend. Truly. (I am in a sort of hiatus, but will be around, and back soon, with all my heart, and intuition tells me, to support your writings). I'm grateful to you.

[Half Dream]

Such a beautiful and enjoyable write. I could feel every word of this piece. You left me no choice except to smile. An outstanding and a poetic write that takes the breaths out. I really loved all the sweet and wonderful senses that you put on this.. I enjoyed reading this as always.. Love ya.. :)

Thank you very much dear, I'm so pleased you loved it... Love you too! xx many thanks!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the personification in this poem...the ivory, the fingers touching it like it were lips...and teeth

and they play each other's tune.

love this poem...

jacob

Thank you so much my friend... for your kind words :)

[Fernando Dardón]

beautifull!!! a beautifull personification of an object!!! Loved it!! xD (sorry, I couldn't resist :P)

Gracias desde mi pequeño corazón.... :) I love it you loved it my dear friend xo :)

[Fernando Dardón]

Me recordó a una canción que escribi, where I made a personification too. It talks about inspiration. You have to tell me how the heck you add music to your publications!!! xD

Ah si? I listened to your music, you're a fantastic guitarist!!!!!!! I will I will mañana... besos! xD

[Fernando Dardón]

you did?... oh, ok I'll let you rest . THANKS XD

Yes, I did lol.... I do check everything of my friends always he he... ;) De nada... a mañana... duerme bien ... y buena suerte... :))) see you...

[Deuces]

Beautiful and passionate write. The perfect mix and such purity in your words.

Thank you very much my friend, and I'm truly sorry I didn't come by yet.... I will. I'm as slow as a snail in this condition right now.... will mail you soon xx I appreciate your visit, and trust in me.

[Rossen]

Hauntingly beautiful lingering love... romance that cannot touch the ground.
Soft echoing strings hammered to perfection sets the dance in motion.
Bravo Bravo...

~Rossen

Thank you for flying with me my dear, I shall fly over to yours as soon as I can... *smiling*

[Rossen]

Normally I become distracted by the addition of a musical number,
except when they collide and become one...
one

Thank you, that means much to me.... I do normally too. I hope to collide and become one, with all the music, and overall feeling I try to express my poems with.... your words mean much to me, thank you for your honesty, and presence.

[Rossen]

~My pleasure

[David Scott]

I see a love affair with music and maybe the piano mostly.
Yet, there is a lover in the flesh as well. A manifestation of your musical expressions.
Play on Amy... Play on! ;)

Thanks from Baroness Amy over here lol, I so appreciate you dear David, your feelers are like those of a cat...!!! I'm still breathing though, but I died a little while writing this one... I'm more near to the day... ( I wish for ) I shall play for you too! :) xx

[David Scott]

Every Baroness needs her Baron to play her music for and "on"...
I hope you have your "audience" soon and you music drifts happily up the chambers of your hearts dwelling place.

LOL yes.... I have a love-bond with my muse...... Oh audience, are just the living.... I like the ghosts.... *wink*

[David Scott]

Sometimes, the audience is only the angels and our ancestors... Still, it is a blessing to gift our music beyond our own experience.
Even a "ghost" is the manifestation of something undone , unfinished, un played.
Maybe this music is the bridge between those un filled gaps?

I think you could be right on that point dear... I was feeling, not actually thinking, you bring me back to earth... :)

[Art Sun]

one must journey deep to find and hold such an emotional love, your thoughts display the very essence of this captivating vision...nicely written Elisa....

Thank you very much Art, sweet friend for saying so, I did journey rock bottom... :) glad you could feel it... through my little dance, and words... tomorrow I will be back for you! x