~ Episode

~ Episode, Elisa Laura, The Love I feel deep Inside...

~ Episode

 

 

For you, I would dance infinitely,

Along the sparkling canals

Of Amsterdam,

 

In the depths of the night,

Where I live, and see;

 

And feel the passion of my death,

Slowly creep in, at every pass I make…

 

I want to touch your ivory beauty,

Almost taste, the passion of your strings;

Where you and me collide in fire…

 

Your dark shine, your hair;

And the reflection of the morning glory

Your teeth as white as our kiss;

 

All this makes our music more intense,

We are love and the invisible…

 

Evaporated air whirls through my fingers,

And I finally breathe out, my last breath...

 

It was you, for who I shone, and 

                It was you I played…

 

 

-        Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by: "Franz Liszt - Liebestraum - Love Dream"
Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Odysseus Wanders]

I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.

Beautiful writing Elisa-

Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you liked this one. :) it's my endless love for the piano, and music, I play it like a lover.... ;) haha... thank you Terry. I am soon back for more of your fantastic writings. Greetings from the Netherlands.

[Odysseus Wanders]

So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not know if you did or did not. "Your dark shine, your hair;
And the reflection of the morning glory
Your teeth as white as our kiss;"

After this, I knew... such a great play on words. Ha.

Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those feelers. I can see why you are connected as a sun to the one you love now.... ;) great to have you by my friend. Truly. (I am in a sort of hiatus, but will be around, and back soon, with all my heart, and intuition tells me, to support your writings). I'm grateful to you.

[Blue Ivory]

So much passion...it's always enjoyable reading about love and music combined. The two are very much connected. Great write. It was enjoyable visualizing the words you have written.

Thank you so much my friend, I'm glad you enjoyed, :) I was on my way to yours, have missed your writings, I'll be back after weekends xx again thank you!

[Avery]

So beautiful! I could just imagine their passionate dance, the way they move together and the music is just lovely, much suitable for your poem.

Sheri thank you dear... :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be a beautiful site to see you dance the sparkling canals of Amsterdam. A beautiful journey in your words. Good visions create by the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Thank you very much my friend... :) your words made me smile!

[Raymond Federle]

What can I say that others have not already said? Your just to awesome. Brill as always. :)

Thank you very much Raymond, awe... :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Smiling from ear to ear. (: I love the ending. It was desperate but so needed to end this one so perfectly. Saying, I am here. Reach out to the unknowing one. Saying, I have been here all along yearning for you and only you. Holding fast for this love that is as pure as death. Standing in the paint for this love that is as bright as snow. Saying you will take it as far as needed. Even to the bitter end if that is the alternative. Beautiful. Brilliant. Felt. xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo Truly. lol wow xo

Thank you so much for the lovely review my sweet buddy... X

[MsJewel]

The passion in your words is both breathtaking and beautiful. Everything about this poem is brilliant -
Definitely a poem I will read again and again.

:) Julie

Thank you love, I feel honored to have my romantic sister by! ;) xxxxx

[Larry Dyson]

A wonderful piece of music and composer...written by one who plays the strings I suppose, Cello? viola? has a depth of quality that's reflected there.. ?Laury

Hi Laury, No just the Piano strings... :) thank you very much for being here, I will be back after weekends fully! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

The intensity of emotion in every line of this write absolutely blew me away, Elisa! Of course, you know you transported me to the canals in Amsterdam where the bicycles ride on the little bridges and the skinny brick houses stand as sentinels along each side. The passion with which you write is extraordinary, my friend. You touch on all the senses....touch, taste, sight and sound.....delightful. I found myself lost in the imagery. There is such intensity in our words! Magnificent! Knuffels. Lydi***

Thank you very much sweet Lydi, for this powerful and well felt review, I'm so glad I could bring you back to Amsterdam... your words are appreciated, and so are you!! knuffels xx

[Tom]

An impassioned rhapsody , penned with poetic aplomb!

Thank you very much Tom, for the nice words!

[SAYED THANGAL]

really enjoyed, the power of music is beyond narration, I posted a poem, music, see it.
sayed

Thank you Sayed, I will check on you as soon as I can. I'm happy you enjoyed it.