~ Episode

~ Episode

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~ Episode, Elisa Laura, The Love I feel deep Inside...

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~ Episode

 

 

For you, I would dance infinitely,

Along the sparkling canals

Of Amsterdam,

 

In the depths of the night,

Where I live, and see;

 

And feel the passion of my death,

Slowly creep in, at every pass I make…

 

I want to touch your ivory beauty,

Almost taste, the passion of your strings;

Where you and me collide in fire…

 

Your dark shine, your hair;

And the reflection of the morning glory

Your teeth as white as our kiss;

 

All this makes our music more intense,

We are love and the invisible…

 

Evaporated air whirls through my fingers,

And I finally breathe out, my last breath...

 

It was you, for who I shone, and 

                It was you I played…

 

 

-        Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note


Music by: "Franz Liszt - Liebestraum - Love Dream"
Enjoy xx

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I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.

Beautiful writing Elisa-


Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you li.. read more
Odysseus Wanders

10 Years Ago

So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not.. read more

10 Years Ago

Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those fee.. read more



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I haven't read one of your pieces in quite some time, so I'm glad that I stumbled across this one. So very beautifully written, Elisa. You've captivated us once again with your genius:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you sweet Rebecca, I'm always happy to see you by, and read your words. Thank you so much. xx
I last saw Amsterdam in the deep snow. When the canals were frozen and everywhere looked like a Bruegel. This poem has the same baroque splendour. Gorgeous.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oh that must have been idyllic, and beautiful... so glad you saw the city in deep winter... it has a.. read more
Very beautiful... your lines, choice of music n' everything about this page is enchanting

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Oh thank you so very much my friend... I am ever so happy you came by here :) xo
Much passion in this piece. Fluid and effortless. Like the the last line, since it can have an interesting meaning, if applied to a human lol. Great write, thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Keen insight Michael, thank you for your sharpness!!! :D lovely review, I shall come back for you! ;.. read more
Liszt Ferenc! You just made my heart sigh... You see I'm Hungarian ~smiles~
Did you write this beautiful verse to the music?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you thank you, Franz Liszt is Hungarian yes, like you, and has a one of my many rooted "Austri.. read more
Nice piece. Every words are enjoyable to read. You made it super for us. Keep on the good the work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the visit and review :)
I love the comparison between music and love, i think its a realy great idea that you have defiantly without a doubt, translated across beautifully :) amazing!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much girl, for the lovely words and for being here :) xx
What a beautiful piece, the writing and music flow together so smoothly. great poetry here, much enjoyed. Trace

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much Trace, for the lovely words. I'll come over soon for you! :) happy weekend!
Another great piece that shows just how you can pain with words, you took me o a wonderful ride, felt like a dance really. Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear friend of me... always nice to see you on my page!

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