I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.
Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you li.. read moreOh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you liked this one. :) it's my endless love for the piano, and music, I play it like a lover.... ;) haha... thank you Terry. I am soon back for more of your fantastic writings. Greetings from the Netherlands.
10 Years Ago
So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not.. read moreSo happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not know if you did or did not. "Your dark shine, your hair;
And the reflection of the morning glory
Your teeth as white as our kiss;"
After this, I knew... such a great play on words. Ha.
10 Years Ago
Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those fee.. read moreHa ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those feelers. I can see why you are connected as a sun to the one you love now.... ;) great to have you by my friend. Truly. (I am in a sort of hiatus, but will be around, and back soon, with all my heart, and intuition tells me, to support your writings). I'm grateful to you.
I haven't read one of your pieces in quite some time, so I'm glad that I stumbled across this one. So very beautifully written, Elisa. You've captivated us once again with your genius:)
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11 Years Ago
Thank you sweet Rebecca, I'm always happy to see you by, and read your words. Thank you so much. xx
I last saw Amsterdam in the deep snow. When the canals were frozen and everywhere looked like a Bruegel. This poem has the same baroque splendour. Gorgeous.
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11 Years Ago
Oh that must have been idyllic, and beautiful... so glad you saw the city in deep winter... it has a.. read moreOh that must have been idyllic, and beautiful... so glad you saw the city in deep winter... it has a magical way with it then. Nice you name Pieter Bruegel... I love his paintings. Thank you so much for being here Ken, I come soon by! :)
Much passion in this piece. Fluid and effortless. Like the the last line, since it can have an interesting meaning, if applied to a human lol. Great write, thank you.
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11 Years Ago
Keen insight Michael, thank you for your sharpness!!! :D lovely review, I shall come back for you! ;.. read moreKeen insight Michael, thank you for your sharpness!!! :D lovely review, I shall come back for you! ;) after my travels... I hope it's tomorrow, or tuesday... appreciated, - Elisa!
Liszt Ferenc! You just made my heart sigh... You see I'm Hungarian ~smiles~
Did you write this beautiful verse to the music?
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11 Years Ago
Thank you thank you, Franz Liszt is Hungarian yes, like you, and has a one of my many rooted "Austri.. read moreThank you thank you, Franz Liszt is Hungarian yes, like you, and has a one of my many rooted "Austrian" part woven through him too... "Smiling" I wrote this one in silence, :) then after, I have mostly some music/melodies in my head, and the piece of Liszt did fit best, in my somehow robust, but absolute ears... ;p lol thank you very much! I appreciate the review. - Elisa
I love the comparison between music and love, i think its a realy great idea that you have defiantly without a doubt, translated across beautifully :) amazing!!
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11 Years Ago
Thank you very much girl, for the lovely words and for being here :) xx