~ Episode

~ Episode, Elisa Laura, The Love I feel deep Inside...

~ Episode

 

 

For you, I would dance infinitely,

Along the sparkling canals

Of Amsterdam,

 

In the depths of the night,

Where I live, and see;

 

And feel the passion of my death,

Slowly creep in, at every pass I make…

 

I want to touch your ivory beauty,

Almost taste, the passion of your strings;

Where you and me collide in fire…

 

Your dark shine, your hair;

And the reflection of the morning glory

Your teeth as white as our kiss;

 

All this makes our music more intense,

We are love and the invisible…

 

Evaporated air whirls through my fingers,

And I finally breathe out, my last breath...

 

It was you, for who I shone, and 

                It was you I played…

 

 

-        Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by: "Franz Liszt - Liebestraum - Love Dream"
Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Odysseus Wanders]

I just floated through the whole read... on a cloud... in a dream.
Really effortless... stunning metaphors. At one with the instrument.
Its like the fingers are the hammers. Love or the piano.... yes to both.
To the pen, most certainly.

Beautiful writing Elisa-

Oh thank you so much my friend again, for reading me. I appreciate it very much, I'm so happy you liked this one. :) it's my endless love for the piano, and music, I play it like a lover.... ;) haha... thank you Terry. I am soon back for more of your fantastic writings. Greetings from the Netherlands.

[Odysseus Wanders]

So happy I got it right... I was going to ask if you played, because it sure felt like it. I did not know if you did or did not. "Your dark shine, your hair;
And the reflection of the morning glory
Your teeth as white as our kiss;"

After this, I knew... such a great play on words. Ha.

Ha ha, yes, thank you so much, I have a big smile on my face right now friend... you have those feelers. I can see why you are connected as a sun to the one you love now.... ;) great to have you by my friend. Truly. (I am in a sort of hiatus, but will be around, and back soon, with all my heart, and intuition tells me, to support your writings). I'm grateful to you.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I loved the intense passion of this piece...and honesty in it! as always your soul is connected with the main sources of elements - as fire and air here; Love you have inside and love you want to experience is everlasting, and connected with all spheres of existence, it`s also timeless, as in your poems the past is connected with the future in the memory. Humans are transformed into emotional energies, breathing and acting with all beauty, even subconsciously. Wonderful tale of heart, dear sister...

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Thank you dear one, I am pleased to read you loved the intense passion, and honesty ;) it's always lovely to read your reviews, and I want to take time for them to respond to them. You have a way with reviewing, (you feel so much always) adore it. I think you're right on the spheres of existence. You read well and deep dearest. I can't thank you enough... xxx sweet Sis.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, sweet Eli! Thank you for all too! You are my favorite poetess, so how not to feel? :)

[writing mojo]

a parade of the senses here, you have sight, smell, sound, touch, and taste...and the six sense is you creating such a master piece...excellent work

Thank you so much mister Weatherman...

[writing mojo]

some dance to see what kind of forecast the big in brain will leave...how's your mom? how are you?

All is stable dear, thanks for asking... I love to dance, and make music...especially in Amsterdam :) hope all is well with you too, last night I felt I'll, but after a good sleep, I felt better, I think I was just exhausted....

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Is that you I see dancing through this dreamy masterpiece...so eloquent and poised and such a handsome partner you present from the romance that unfolds in the tones and sway. Almost reminds me of "Phantom".
The build is ringing in my ears! The downward soft execution lulling me into serenity.... Exquisite!

Thank you so very much my dear friend, for bringing me always a smile :)

[Chandler bing]

hey nice one really enjoyed it though.

Thank you, Thank you :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Coming from a hopeless romantic I must say the poem took my breath away.

I want to touch your ivory beauty,
Almost taste, the passion of your strings;
Where you and me collide in fire…

especially love these lines.

Thank you so much my friend... it's a pleasure you enjoyed this one :) coming back in a while for yours too :) thanks for the review!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

No problem, tis my pleasure.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I am entranced by your beautiful display of love and music, Sis!
You have truly evolved into a Poetess of classical romance... wistful, melodic, surreal...ENCHANTING!
The music is heavenly, as is your divine write! Sheer Perfection.~xoxo~:)

Oh you're back, hiii Sis, hope all is well :) Thank you so much for the lovely words on this one. xoxo :))

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'm back for a bit... and so happy to read you! This is lovely art Sis!~xoxo~:D

Okay, you take your time, :) and enjoy it here for a while... xoxo :) thank you so much love! chat soon xoxo :D:D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I will try my best. lol
Enjoy your day, my dearest!~xoxo~:)

[Jack...]

My friend, your beautiful poem expresses a love that I am truly familiar with, for without the joy, the passion and the tears that come from sitting before this wonderful instrument, I would not be. Superbly penned in your very own melodic ways which we have all come to love so much.

So good to see you here Jack. Hope all is well? I knew you would feel this one, :) Thank you very much for making me smile through the day! :)

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This brings the saying becoming one with the music in a new light
Falling so hard and so deep it takes your life
Utterly haunting and romantic

Thank you Chloe, for your nice words... :)

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

You are welcome and thank you for your kind words I cannot get my comment box to open very beautiful and haunting it lingers

You are welcome too, I saw you are on your phone yes, then it's sometimes hard yes... Take your time, cool you came by xx

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Thanks again E

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Yes the phone is a pain and you're welcome take care

Most of the time I'm on my phone too, so I know what you mean xx haha you too x

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Ha ha I wish Santa would bring me a new or used desktop I like it much better than laptops tablets and especially these iPhones I just cannot type on this tiny screen my fingers hit all the wrong keys

Ha ha... yeah.... I wish that too... my laptop is a beast at the moment, and I'm always outside home, so I use my phone... I know what you mean... lol but I'm glad you are here, and try haha! xx

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Keyword try lol did you write or type episode on your phone?
If you did it triples the beauty of it
Is there winter storm coming your way also? You take care I'm glad to be here I'm able to read all you wonderful right

Haha indeed.... it depends, mostly I write all out on just a hand-notebook, with paper and a black fontain pen. (I have always with me wherever I go)... but then if I forget it, I make scribbles on my phone... all I work out later on a moment when I have my laptop again with me... but it can be I post from my phone too, mostly when I'm in Southern Europe... I will be back for you dear Chloe, many thanks for all! xx

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

You're very very welcome dear one

Thank you luv, oh and I forgot, (wasn't well yesterday eve/night) the storm layed down a bit, but we had a very tough one, here in North-Western Europe... trains down, at almost everywhere, and hail/snow, and strong wind... it is still not done, but fortunately not as windy as it was... xx try to be back this eve (my time) xx

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

I'm really sorry to hear that bu things are somewhat better
The storm here is ice freezing rain sleet and snow
It will shut down much of this state i'm hoping we don't lose power but so far 5000 have take good care E peace love and respect xo

Oh in AZ you live right, just as mister Craig... I saw it, my goodness... You and your ppl are in my thoughts... So sorry to hear too... Hugs x

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

Thank you we live We live in Arkansas A little farther south lol
Appreciate your thoughts thank you!

[J. J. Nightingale]

"We are love and the invisible…"

First I must wipe the tears away
The music and the verse are pure love

Given within the flames
We so mortal be
With joy complete
..Give last breaths..

You touch deep to the heart of me .. I have known this kind of Love..
Here you express love inside a dream .. as "the invisible"..... beautiful..
Perfection .. from a heart of forever love ............

Jazz xoxo

Sniff, and I do the same overhere... what a beautiful review my dear.... you totally understood me! and the write... sigh! Much love xoxo

[J. J. Nightingale]

Amor eterno... Estaré contigo................................♥♥

Gracias por estar conmigo en mente, pero también ahí, y hay ... ya sabes a qué me refiero ;) Amor y Abrazos xx te quiero! ♥♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

..tears ................................................... ♥♥

Here too........... ♥♥ goodnight my sweetheart!!

[SkinlessFrank]

beautiful matching of words and music EL....what amazes me about good love poems is how endlessly many and unique they each are

Thank you very much Frank, yes, I think love can't die, it will go as flying sparkles to afterlife even... when two souls are connected... I'm pleased to see you by always dear friend.