~ A Thousand Years

~ A Thousand Years

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~ A Thousand Years, E.L. Elisa Laura, A Thousand Years, Keys, Love, Relationships, Trust, Feelings, Ancient, Me, You, Us, We.

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~ A Thousand Years

 

Through the ages,

Your soul embraced me,

 

Where dark nights never

Seemed to finish,

 

The pain in my chest,

And it's infinity,

 

Days we traveled, without effect,

I have seen pain,

            And have slain,

So did you...

 

I have waited, and slept for years,

 

Now the world is barren and desolate,

             I perish with hunger,

 

But beauty arises,

If life exists,

 

Where I hope to find you…


 

 ~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note



Music: Lyriel - Autumntales

Enjoy the "details"... xx

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Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful.. read more



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Like the princess who slept for a hundred years until woken by the kiss of a prince !

An enchanting, atmospheric write with lots of dark passion throughout!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Hey Tom! thank you so much for being here, I appreciate it. Elisa
In one word it's beautiful. The hope and longing is so beautifully prominent through the writing. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you with whole my heart Tassawwur, I appreciate you! shall come back for you soon! x
Wow, simple, but powerfull!!
I read the review above, vampires uh, I actually imagined an old traveler who toured the world with his/her beloved over the years, but somehow he/she disappeared but now it is evident the emptiness in the heart without that loved person

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Wow, Javier, also a wonderful review you give me, with a great interpretation. You make me think of .. read more
Fernando Dardón

11 Years Ago

you're welcome! :)
I invite you to keep feeding reader's imagination like this :)

11 Years Ago

Awe, I feel honored, to have you by!
I like the meandering style here and the message of hope.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much Legion! :)
not many people can write about love in so convincing a way....dreamlike and penetrating

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much my friend.... I'm happy to have you by.
Immortal slave to beauty...
Rich with elegance and wonder. ghostly love

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

I'm smiling, thank you Rossen...
i loved ur words , simple ,easy and convinced .
Great song

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Many thanks for reading and your review Khaled! appreciated.
Khaled Abu Owaida

11 Years Ago

i hope i can write like u , but i'm reader type ;) . i have a friend who writes but she is very shy .. read more

11 Years Ago

If you listen to your heart, you can write like me :) I'm a reader type too... I now and then share .. read more
Immortal love. Enduring through all the pain and deaths. I absolutely love the wording. The infinite pains in your chest. Heartbreaking and breathtaking. Beautiful piece dear Elisa. Your words are amazing..xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

I thank you dearly immortal soul-buddy of me! :) so glad you loved it xx
joshua deathdealer

11 Years Ago

You are welcome. (: Sending love your way xx

11 Years Ago

Many love and hugs back right at you :) xxx thanks again!
Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful.. read more
There must be something more beyond this mortal coil. Your poem reminds us of that. It is beautiful because it contains a grain of hope that will turn into a pearl of wisdom.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

Thank you my dear friend, your words are a pearl of wisdom itself... beautiful review.

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