~ A Thousand Years

~ A Thousand Years

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~ A Thousand Years, E.L. Elisa Laura, A Thousand Years, Keys, Love, Relationships, Trust, Feelings, Ancient, Me, You, Us, We.

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~ A Thousand Years

 

Through the ages,

Your soul embraced me,

 

Where dark nights never

Seemed to finish,

 

The pain in my chest,

And it's infinity,

 

Days we traveled, without effect,

I have seen pain,

            And have slain,

So did you...

 

I have waited, and slept for years,

 

Now the world is barren and desolate,

             I perish with hunger,

 

But beauty arises,

If life exists,

 

Where I hope to find you…


 

 ~ Elisa Laura

© 2013


Author's Note



Music: Lyriel - Autumntales

Enjoy the "details"... xx

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Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful.. read more



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Oh Sis...
I felt the pain and hope intertwine in your words...
You exude strength within the unraveling of the fragile threads...Only time will heal your heart and mend what is fraying...

Hope is eternal...

Such a touching write... always Eloquently penned, Sis.~xoxo~



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sis, for the beauty and timeless love in your words. You always touch me deep my bestie! A.. read more
This poem reminds me of beautiful tale of reincarnation and sharing of souls...The described people, even so individual, look somehow like spirits, overcoming the time and space. The world needs beauty and needs love, but the accent here is much on the strong connection between spiritual lovers, throughout times...and ages, and even death can`t change that. Acc. to Buddhism and Hinduism all souls are connected and there is a big chance we to meet again in our next life. I feel so much from your words...

:: nour ::
:: 07.12.013 ::

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

You have given me a wonderful review nia. Every time you come here, you make me speechless, it's you.. read more
"Now the world is barren and desolate, I perish with hunger" Gorgeous. SO gorgeous.

"The pain in my chest, and its infinity.."

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much :)))
love, lorey

10 Years Ago

You're welcome very much lol :)

10 Years Ago

I will be back for you and the others, after weekends :) thanks again...
A moment without the one you love is a thousand years of death. A moment experiencing the joy of true love is the birth of infinite life...

Never loose hope and the night will never own you and the sleep will be full of wondrous dreams until the Sun stirs your slumber into wakeful bliss.

Keys to eternity indeed Baroness. ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

I'm a teary woman... my heart is half Spanish, so emotion is in my genes lol... but thank you so muc.. read more
 David Scott

10 Years Ago

I'm teasing. Feel free to cry any tears you feel...
Thank you again. Your words warm my heart... read more

10 Years Ago

I know, I know, he he.... :D you make me smile always friend. No worries. I'm strong, and have a th.. read more
Where ever we may be in a thousand years, we hope that our memories remain, our loves survive and our hearts still cherish all that we find. So many different doorways we may travel through over this time, with even more keys to unlock what waits for us...to dream of a love that can stand this enormous test of time brings wondrous meaning to the word eternal. Very nicely done my sweet friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Oh Jack thank you dearly my friend, yes, you got the clue... we are just dust particles, all along o.. read more
"Days we traveled without effect
I have seen pain
and have slain
so did you"

That stanza hit home in me hard.
Beautiful poem Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you for feeling this one Baby :) and for your words x
I feel close to these thoughts today as well. You are such a beautiful soul and I feel so connected as I read your words.I have missed everyone in my absence but am glad you are around still. I find your world very inspiring and peaceful:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gypsy Warrior Queen

10 Years Ago

P.s. the keys intrigue me...I was just looking at some of those yesterday feeling the need to hang t.. read more

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much my dear friend... I am pleased you felt connected to this one. I know how that fee.. read more
I could feel the longing in your beautiful poem Elisa. You have touched my heart with this one - definitely a keeper for me. :) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you with whole my heart sweet Julie, that means much to me, that you totally felt this one... .. read more
MsJewel

10 Years Ago

My pleasure my sweet friend. Travel safely. :)

10 Years Ago

Thanks hon, I shall, :) sweet (((YOU))) many road-hugs!!! :D x
Elisa i would suggest that you swap that you slept for years instead of slept for days .It adds more sentimental value to your already beatiful piece . The price doubled because of its commercial or retail value but now you have added a historical value to your piece complimenting your title as well . Just asuggestion Elisa . The Lonely Sparrow .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you, I shall come by after my (always so busy weekends) traveling, sniffing in other air... th.. read more
NeiL ArandA

10 Years Ago

Looking forward to that...

10 Years Ago

Me too :) me too :)
Elisa your title is timeless and intriguing . Your chosen complimentary background music however diminish the feelings and emotions of your beautiful and timeless piece . If its not viewed or taken as offensive but rather a room for improvement . The Song " A Thousand Years " by Christina Perri will surely enhance and harmonize with your timeless piece . Bye for now Elisa . The Lonely Sparrow .

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Neal, for coming by, I appreciate your honesty, and imput on my writing, and the s.. read more

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