Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**
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Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful.. read moreAh I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful words Lydi, thank you... xx knuffels!
I thousand ways to hope of many great hopeful things in life i am so blessed to be able to read your beautiful words everyday this is most beautiful!!!
Thank you Scott dear, a lot is so sad lately, I know..... but know my friend, out of pain comes beau.. read moreThank you Scott dear, a lot is so sad lately, I know..... but know my friend, out of pain comes beauty... always :) smiling, til soon xx
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Kiss...hug...:)
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Many hugs friend..... you will know when I'm back I will support fully! miss your writings! xo
The name and picture of this write attracted me to click on it. Glad I did! The way it starts with such deep pain and anguish and then how those last few lines suddenly gain a sense of hope! With the perfect words ''But beauty arises.' Purely amazing! It shows that even in the worst places there's always hope.
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Thank you so much love, to feel my fantasy writings... it's truly a great joy to read your words, ea.. read moreThank you so much love, to feel my fantasy writings... it's truly a great joy to read your words, each and every time, I can't thank you enough darling. xx
So I just finished this and I have to say wow... I really liked this... And I think in every ones life we have all lived this... Been in love with someone but the feeling wasn't returned... We wait and wait for them to open their eyes but it seems they never do... But when they finally realize what was there in front of them the whole time it's too late... Already with a new love in your life their time has expired... I really can't wait to read more of work.. And sorry it has taken me so long to get to your page... Keep up the good work..
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Thank you so much Stevo, sincerely from my heart, my friend. I love the things you got out of this p.. read moreThank you so much Stevo, sincerely from my heart, my friend. I love the things you got out of this piece, I shall come by for your new ones as soon as I can, your words are apperciated :)
"Where I hope to find you…" Your closing is such a testament that you are a ~believer~ that souls by the law of true love gravitate to each other throughout time and dimensions...
Szép szavak barátom, megvan teljesen .... köszönöm x thank you thank you!!!!! ;)
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~~~~~~~big smile~~~~~~ nagyon megleptel engem most te Dragasag!!
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Smiles back :)) És most én vagyok még jobban meglepett :) kedves barátom .... Sok szeretettel! l.. read moreSmiles back :)) És most én vagyok még jobban meglepett :) kedves barátom .... Sok szeretettel! lol :D
this is absolutely beautiful, I usually stray towards darker poetry but this left me speechless.
thank you so much :)
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Thank you very much Kora, means much to me, I have some darker pieces too, though, and a lot I didn'.. read moreThank you very much Kora, means much to me, I have some darker pieces too, though, and a lot I didn't shared yet ;) will let you know when I post them. I will come back for you too! :) xx
"Days we traveled, without effect,
I have seen pain,
And have slain,
So did you..."
Most of us learn the hard way. If we are lucky. Find true beauty and happiness. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
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Thank you dear John, for feeling the piece, I can't thank you enough for the support. :) Elisa