~ A Thousand Years

~ A Thousand Years, E.L. Elisa Laura, A Thousand Years, Keys, Love, Relationships, Trust, Feelings, Ancient, Me, You, Us, We.

~ A Thousand Years

 

Through the ages,

Your soul embraced me,

 

Where dark nights never

Seemed to finish,

 

The pain in my chest,

And it's infinity,

 

Days we traveled, without effect,

I have seen pain,

            And have slain,

So did you...

 

I have waited, and slept for years,

 

Now the world is barren and desolate,

             I perish with hunger,

 

But beauty arises,

If life exists,

 

Where I hope to find you…

 

 ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music: Lyriel - Autumntales

Enjoy the "details"... xx

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with hope for something better after leaving this world. Who really knows? Some believe what they learn in church or synagogue. Others are not so certain. Have we lived before and were we with our one true soulmate in that life too? Perhaps. Maybe that is why we are drawn to one particular person in this life. Who really knows? Lots to ponder here, that's for sure. Beautifully written, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Ah I love what you got out of my little write... thanks so much for pondering on this one, beautiful words Lydi, thank you... xx knuffels!

[Lover Of Words]

I thousand ways to hope of many great hopeful things in life i am so blessed to be able to read your beautiful words everyday this is most beautiful!!!

Thank you very much Kelsey always.... :)

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure sweet love

[Wuji]

I like the eternity of this poem, and the desperation in between!

Thank you so much Starchance.... thank you for reading.

[Scott Metro]

Sad....I hate feeling this way.
A very good job Elisa
I could taste every syllable.

Scott

Thank you Scott dear, a lot is so sad lately, I know..... but know my friend, out of pain comes beauty... always :) smiling, til soon xx

[Scott Metro]

Kiss...hug...:)

Many hugs friend..... you will know when I'm back I will support fully! miss your writings! xo

[Carl Drake Barnard]

good work :) love the deepness of this and such beautiful flow keep it up :)

Thank you so much Carl :)

[Carl Drake Barnard]

plesier lief Hehe it's afrikaans for thanks love :)

Dankie skattie en versta jou :)

* ek versta jou

[PurpleQuartz]

The name and picture of this write attracted me to click on it. Glad I did! The way it starts with such deep pain and anguish and then how those last few lines suddenly gain a sense of hope! With the perfect words ''But beauty arises.' Purely amazing! It shows that even in the worst places there's always hope.

Thank you so much love, to feel my fantasy writings... it's truly a great joy to read your words, each and every time, I can't thank you enough darling. xx

[Stevo The POE-t]

So I just finished this and I have to say wow... I really liked this... And I think in every ones life we have all lived this... Been in love with someone but the feeling wasn't returned... We wait and wait for them to open their eyes but it seems they never do... But when they finally realize what was there in front of them the whole time it's too late... Already with a new love in your life their time has expired... I really can't wait to read more of work.. And sorry it has taken me so long to get to your page... Keep up the good work..

Thank you so much Stevo, sincerely from my heart, my friend. I love the things you got out of this piece, I shall come by for your new ones as soon as I can, your words are apperciated :)

[PearlPoet]

So beautiful exhaled dear Friend!

"Where I hope to find you…" Your closing is such a testament that you are a ~believer~ that souls by the law of true love gravitate to each other throughout time and dimensions...

Szép szavak barátom, megvan teljesen .... köszönöm x thank you thank you!!!!! ;)

[PearlPoet]

~~~~~~~big smile~~~~~~ nagyon megleptel engem most te Dragasag!!

Smiles back :)) És most én vagyok még jobban meglepett :) kedves barátom .... Sok szeretettel! lol :D

[Nicole Williams]

this is absolutely beautiful, I usually stray towards darker poetry but this left me speechless.
thank you so much :)

Thank you very much Kora, means much to me, I have some darker pieces too, though, and a lot I didn't shared yet ;) will let you know when I post them. I will come back for you too! :) xx

[Coyote Poetry]

"Days we traveled, without effect,
I have seen pain,
And have slain,
So did you..."
Most of us learn the hard way. If we are lucky. Find true beauty and happiness. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Thank you dear John, for feeling the piece, I can't thank you enough for the support. :) Elisa