~ Magnetic

~ Magnetic, E.L. Interpret as yourself... Love, Life, Living, Breathing, Piano, Heartstrings, Music...

 

  

~ Magnetic

 

 

Is the love, of two opposites,

In a zero state, of breathing,

Touching, loving...

 

Nothing, but everything,

Is just so felt…

 

There is power, in the lines,

Of those who are silent,

Those who feel and;

See beyond, in love, profound,

 

Enjoying real life, and

Love’s a bound…

Reflecting through

The words that bring,

Loving life, is what they sing,

 

And you and me,

We know the place,

 

Being there is our grace…

Nothing is more needed...

Nothing more is felt...

 

Through the dark, as the day will come...

We had our moment;

Just that I spelled...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Music by one of my piano hero's - Yann Tiersen

Really, I don't care about popularity, or reviews, or rating ;)
Just feel... learn something from it... xx



Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Horizon K.]

...Is the love, of two opposites,
In a zero state, of breathing...
Oh, delicious, these words! They make me think that 1+1 is not two, that the addition of two opposites is not zero, but some multiplication or logarithmic expansion of absolute numbers... How much we learn and grow, from loving an opposite mind... Even those quiet ones, say much to us in thier introspection...
Another lovely one Elisa...

What a wonderful review, yeah, you got a great vision to this Sis... couldn't miss, you always understand my brain :D:D xx thank you so much!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so nice review! ♥

[Lydia Shutter]

Your words hold deep emotions and are so honest. They are truly lovely, Elisa. Yes, opposites do attract and when they do, it is a beautiful thing! Softly romantic and filled with love, your words are stunning. Lydi**

Thank you my sweet friend, truly. I love your reviews, always, thanks for truly understanding my pen... and have felt it. (you're a great soul).

[Lydia Shutter]

As are you.....slaap lekker! Lydi**

Dank je wel lieve schat... je bent een zeldzame goede recensent... ik kom morgen terug voor jou, en je laatste stukken. Dank je, en jij ook slaap lekker voor straks! veel liefs! xo

[joshua deathdealer]

Me either lol and there is much to glean here. This is such an emotive poem. Powerful and touching. Absolutely beautiful song btw.

Thank you for feeling this one lovely friend.... your words always bring me smiles!! xoxo

[Pryde Foltz]

A very beautiful, touching and expressive piece, Elisa.

Thank you so much Pryde...

[AleyshaRosa]

Enjoying real life, and

Love’s a bound…

Reflecting through

The words that bring,

Loving life, is what they sing,

Beautiful.
That splash of melody in this stanza is truly amazing. I don't know another way I could explain it

Koodoos

Thank you very much dear Aleysha, thanks for being here. Elisa x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

moments together, unspoken, just felt...

nice feeling presented in this...opposites attract, get together and then it just works whether they are doing nothing or everything.

Thanks a lot my dear friend, it really means much to me you felt this one... All is good in this one, there is love and nothing... There is just everything... Grateful to you jacob. I'm...