~ Inside

~ Inside, Elisa Laura, The Eagle once left, The Eagle returns...

~ Inside

 

 

My so long cold heart and

These high snowy peaks,

He once left me, 

And flew away,

For years, 

To freedom...

 

Today my feelings 

Are spread like golden rays,

Along the underlying rivers,

Where sunrise twinkles,

 

And the snow slowly melts,

Into fallen raindrops

Softly on the so high trees,

 

I watch further then I can see,

The sky is white of misty thoughts,

And grey of other mountains,

 

They are black on top,

Where they think

Higher than the clouds…

 

I could feel him

Strongly coming

From afar

 

With his dark and

 Wide open wings into

My direction,

 

To land softly 

On my sensitive

Heartstrings 

And to bloom

With the deepest 

 

Music

Inside of me.

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[captain]

I feel the navigation of magical thoughts in your words Elisa, there is so much warmth and love the music to the soul. Whenever I read your poems, I felt like your always in love, always full of love in the way your expressed things around you. Simply Beautiful!

Thank you dear one, for the ray of words here :) I'm an optimistic person, here I was connecting to my inner male muse. lol he's an eagle, I think.

[captain]

your very much welcome, :) stay true, I see the inner male muse is courageous, keep him well feed and he will be the next captain :D

Hahahaha, you make me smile! truly! :D thank you my friend... for the encouriging words.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is an unforgettable heartsong, Sis! To land on your heartstrings, to feel his music strongly within, is truly a surreal imagery. You have an innate ability to guide your readers into utopic dreams....where mountains of love are pure, yet tangible.

Gorgeous write, Sis!!~xoxo~:)

Sis, so happy to see you, what a wonderful words, you bring me, it's music itself.... thank you darling heart. xoxo :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure, Sis... will be back to read more...
Enjoy your day!~xoxo~

Thank you dear, I will, you too ok? :) *heartsmiles* xoxo

[Lydia Shutter]

Lyrical and lovely romantic poetry, sweet Elisa. The imagery is just exquisite and the sentiment is beautiful...I just want to get lost in it! A dreamy write. Lydi**

Thank you sweet Lydi for your beautiful review xx knuffels..

[MsJewel]

You have created gorgeous images Elisa.
Beautiful romantic poetry!
:) Julie

Hi sweet Julie, thank you so much my friend, for the review and visit, I'm glad you enjoyed! :))) xx

[jacob erin-cilberto]

can't name my favorite lines..they all are...nature mixed with love...you do it so well..this is a very romantic poem, my friend.

"i got the music in me"

Goodmorning jacob, and thank you so much from my side of the world, coming from you honors me double! :) so glad you could feel the music (soul-music)

[Pryde Foltz]

Beautiful, Elisa.

To land softly
On my sensitive
Heartstrings
And to bloom
With the deepest

Music
Inside of me.

Great metaphor and I loved the picture.

Thank you dearly Pryde... xx