~ Inside

~ Inside, Elisa Laura, The Eagle once left, The Eagle returns...

~ Inside

 

 

My so long cold heart and

These high snowy peaks,

He once left me, 

And flew away,

For years, 

To freedom...

 

Today my feelings 

Are spread like golden rays,

Along the underlying rivers,

Where sunrise twinkles,

 

And the snow slowly melts,

Into fallen raindrops

Softly on the so high trees,

 

I watch further then I can see,

The sky is white of misty thoughts,

And grey of other mountains,

 

They are black on top,

Where they think

Higher than the clouds…

 

I could feel him

Strongly coming

From afar

 

With his dark and

 Wide open wings into

My direction,

 

To land softly 

On my sensitive

Heartstrings 

And to bloom

With the deepest 

 

Music

Inside of me.

 

 

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[captain]

I feel the navigation of magical thoughts in your words Elisa, there is so much warmth and love the music to the soul. Whenever I read your poems, I felt like your always in love, always full of love in the way your expressed things around you. Simply Beautiful!

Thank you dear one, for the ray of words here :) I'm an optimistic person, here I was connecting to my inner male muse. lol he's an eagle, I think.

[captain]

your very much welcome, :) stay true, I see the inner male muse is courageous, keep him well feed and he will be the next captain :D

Hahahaha, you make me smile! truly! :D thank you my friend... for the encouriging words.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Simply my special and favorite poem today! ♥ all expressions, all feeling and view from above is so heart touching and takes my breath making my heart thrills. I like that spiritual flight and fantasy, and specially loved the wings...When he comes to land in your heart and the music inside you is so clear...Then all missing harmony is restored again, all pain is removed and fear is gone...Great, my lovely sis!

:: nour ::
:: 07.12.13::

I had a feeling you would like this one dear... you exactly get me, lol... it's indeed a mix of reality with fantasy, who else could know but you. "all pain is removed and fear is gone" exactly!!! thank you so much xxxx ♥

[Tom]

Perhaps you may need to prune that wandering eagle's wing feathers incase it decides to fly off again ?

A wondrous poem of a love united !

:) that made me think and smile.... perhaps you are very right ;) thanks so much Tom!!! be back for you, after weekends! x

[Horizon K.]

...The sky is white of misty thoughts...
This one is particularly gorgeous sis... This eagle could be so many things, dreams and loves that fly away and then one day return, and our hearts cold and longing without... How much it warms and brings love, upon it's return... Beautiful...

I always have dreamt the eagle is my inner-muse. It's a he-bird though. Sometimes he flies away for years, and I'm helpless, sometimes he returns, it's like the strength of 7 rich 7 poor years... thank you so much for feeling this one... dear.

[Horizon K.]

What a splendid muse! Haha, why is the muse of the opposite sex though, mine is as well, perhaps it is the ability to find opposition to the self, a place to draw between... I hope he stays for a long time. And upon his return, I wonder how he has changed...

I think it could be, I don't know, maybe it's a brother I lost before my birth... ( did in real life ).
I wonder about that too, with this he-bird I create art.... haha thanks for understanding me dear Sis.

[Horizon K.]

I'm so sorry to hear of your brother, dear Sis. I hope he does visit you and bring you these dreams and inspirations.
xxx

He does, he does often.... :) thank you so much darling heart. xx

[Kenaz]

"Black they are on top -Sounds better as: They are black on top :)
Where they think
Higher then the clouds" -and this should be higher than :)

If only we could be like eagles and fly away from our problems. Very interesting.

Thanks for the great review my friend... I will change it, ah what would I do without you ;) thanks for feeling this one.

[Dominique Lambright]

I love the depth in the words you chose ^_^

Ah Dominique, thank you for reading, I appreciate that.... Elis x

[Dominique Lambright]

You're welcome :)

[kublakhan27]

It's ironic that the opening image of a cold heart would warm my own so much. Of course you're aware now of my affinity for seasonal writing, particularly when Winter is involved. I find myself at a loss for words in trying to express how much I love this piece. I can only say that it is a gorgeous poem, and one of my new favourites. All the best dear sis...never stop writing :) xox

Thank you with whole my heart dear, really. I lost my inner eagle, for a long time... and I think with baby-steps, my time will come, and there will be more happiness, your words are beautiful love. Thanks so much bro... xoxo

[kublakhan27]

I know your time will come sis...you are too strong to let such things defeat you. Happiness is not an easy thing to catch, but there is still a lot of it out there, no matter how rough the world gets. Take care my dear friend :) xoxo

Thank you immensely dear friend, you have no idea, how much your words mean to me, thanks for the super sweet mail too... (((HUGS))) I know it will too :) for you also.... *smiles* xx

[icelandicblue]

The shadow always seeks the light drawn to the thrumming of waiting heartstrings. Darkly romantic imagery among the snowdrops of gray mountains and misty thoughts.

That is so beautifully worded by you Anne, many thanks, I'll be back for your art after weekend darling, hope you have a wonderful one x

[Raymond Federle]

I like this very much. Good music to. :)

Hey Raymond, thanks for poppin' in, I appreciate that. I've read already a lot of your stuff ;) great writer you are, I shall come by when weekend is over, always busy then... - Elis

[Ken Simm.]

There are a pair of eagles I know very well.
This is a heartfelt paean of a poem that resounds with me for all sorts of reasons. Evocative memories and lovely writing.

Thank you with whole my heart Ken, I know you would understand this one, and truly feel it... I'm honored to have you by my friend.

[joshua deathdealer]

Wow.. This is such a deep piece of you. To how you feel and perceive sadness and love and longing. Deeply romantic and an amazing journey. I like the images of the black mountain tops high in the sky where they think. Interesting stanza. I love this poem dear friend. (: xo

Thank you very much my sweet buddy, you always know me, and feel my poetry so well... xoxo