~ Energy

~ Energy, Elisa Laura, Life, Death, Dead, Skeletons, Love, Eternity, Southern Europe, Graveyard, Me, You, Us, We.

~ Energy

 

Under the sunset in our vision,

And some shadows of the grapes,

 

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

You smelled like dusty earth mixed

With my old volcanic soil,

 

The cemetery was flowered

With cherry blossom,

 

But only we could see the

Other side so green,

 

You embraced my soul, and life,

With your dead smile embroiled in

Beauty,

               You knew me, as I you…

 

Your dark hair

Danced down my cheeks

With the help of the wind,

 

And our bones became one…

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by BrunuhVille...

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I am stunned. This is gorgeous. I agree. lol Perfectly done!! The visuals and romantics lol are to die for. Such beautiful energy felt here while engaged in this story of two dead lovers. Soul-mates.

Under the sunset in our vision,
And some shadows of the grapes,

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

The beginning is so powerful, setting the air for the depth it precedes. The idea of the dust mixing. Being at last complete. Looking with eager eyes at the other side while in each other arms.. Wow! This poem is perfect Elisa. Truly xx

" You knew me, as I you…"

Thank you so much dear soul-mate of me, you understood this one so well, couldn't miss ;) xxx I'm grateful for your words...

[joshua deathdealer]

You are most welcome darling Elisa. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece. xx

Thank you deary for being always here... with me. Bestie. I miss you, can't wait to hear your music, and fantastic conversations... so much to tell... -xx-

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I had to read a few times. It took me to a lonely place and you create vision of life and beauty with your words. I like the ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Thank you very much my friend... I'm pleased that you could feel this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

did you mean "flowered"?

this is beautiful...our bones became one...there are those who leave us too soon, but a part of us never lets them leave...we hold on to their memories...

and embrace their dead smiles...because in our hearts, those smiles never die.

Yes, I think I meant that, thanks it looks better like this now... Thanks for the very kind words jacob, appreciated.

[writing mojo]

WOW! this one re-verbs institutionally with love and possession and trinity in mind, body, and spirit steps ahead of the echo you leave ...amazing piece

Thanks for feeling the piece weatherman :) and your words!

[Rob Santana]

What a very unique/fresh piece of writing Elisa. You've captured creativity and beauty in this write.

Gracias Roberto..... :)

[V. P. Trujillo]

Gorgeous. The music helped the poem touch real nicely. This is shorter than usual, but I find it soothing, there's that sweetness to it, like that of a stolen kiss.

Thank you so very much.... exactly! you have eyes beyond.

[Calissa Knox]

Such beautiful poetry! "You embraced my soul, and life,
With your dead smile embroiled in Beauty"

This is a very vivid, romantic, and reminiscent poem.

I absolutely loved reading this!

Thank you so much sweet woman... :) it made my heart smile you did... I was a little later on WritersCafe, had a busy day... hope all is well with you.

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome! All is going very well for me, thanks for asking. :) Hope everything is going well for you, too, Elisa!

Great to hear, here all is very well too :) I'm going to read more of you in a while :) thanks again!

[Calissa Knox]

You're welcome. And Thank you!

[Jack...]

There is so much life and love in this beautiful offering that it is hard, so very hard to relate to the aspect that these two may not be of the living. Still, the wonder that is you words engulfs me with a mystic feeling and walks with me through this graveyard of old stones and floral beauty. You my friend are floral beauty...in my eyes.

Jack thank you my dear friend, for the beauty of your words, upon my little poem... thanks for feeling this one.... Elis