~ Energy

~ Energy, Elisa Laura, Life, Death, Dead, Skeletons, Love, Eternity, Southern Europe, Graveyard, Me, You, Us, We.

~ Energy

 

Under the sunset in our vision,

And some shadows of the grapes,

 

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

You smelled like dusty earth mixed

With my old volcanic soil,

 

The cemetery was flowered

With cherry blossom,

 

But only we could see the

Other side so green,

 

You embraced my soul, and life,

With your dead smile embroiled in

Beauty,

               You knew me, as I you…

 

Your dark hair

Danced down my cheeks

With the help of the wind,

 

And our bones became one…

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by BrunuhVille...

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I am stunned. This is gorgeous. I agree. lol Perfectly done!! The visuals and romantics lol are to die for. Such beautiful energy felt here while engaged in this story of two dead lovers. Soul-mates.

Under the sunset in our vision,
And some shadows of the grapes,

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

The beginning is so powerful, setting the air for the depth it precedes. The idea of the dust mixing. Being at last complete. Looking with eager eyes at the other side while in each other arms.. Wow! This poem is perfect Elisa. Truly xx

" You knew me, as I you…"

Thank you so much dear soul-mate of me, you understood this one so well, couldn't miss ;) xxx I'm grateful for your words...

[joshua deathdealer]

You are most welcome darling Elisa. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece. xx

Thank you deary for being always here... with me. Bestie. I miss you, can't wait to hear your music, and fantastic conversations... so much to tell... -xx-

[Muse]

I thought of Romeo and Juliet as I read this. Not even death could keep them apart. The background music was wonderful too. Everything that you pen seems so light and innocent.

Your dark hair
Danced down my cheeks
With the help of the wind,
And our bones became one…





Pure magic....

Thank you very much dear, for your words, means much to me. Especially coming from you, and this genre is your opposite... be back soon for you xoxo :)

[icelandicblue]

A very romantic day of the dead here. I am reminded of eternity in these lines and the path to it is lined in cherry blossoms. It is a most haunting and beautiful poem.

Thank you dear Anne, this one, was, an old dream, reformed into a new Jacket.... :) so lovely you felt it.... I'm just home, returned from Germany, will catch up on reviews, after a good sleep, and rest, I'm grateful to you.... x

[Pryde Foltz]

Very romantic and atmospheric. Great write.

Thank you Pryde, I appreciate your visit :)

[MOON]

Beautiful write as usual full of energy and light.

Thank you dear Moon, good to see you again xx take care...

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

All I can say is ah huh beautiful simply beautiful little bit of darkness with the romance gorgeous

Thank you so much Chloe... Good you enjoyed this one xx

[Chloe..Across the Universe]

You're welcome yes I did enjoy it you know I still have that copy of the full moon that you left on my page thank you for that you have a great weekend

[Sanober]

"You smelled like dusty earth mixed
With my old volcanic soil,"
This is absolutely captivating...saturated in the feeling of physical, emotional and almost sacred oneness. When love penetrates the soul...there is nothing to hide. nothing else matters. you are a very talented writer. Gorgeous poem here.

Sanober, thank you very much, for this fine review. I'll be back for you. - Elisa

[Ken Simm.]

I see love in the south. Warm halcyon days and a certain peace. A precious memory to keep and here you have beautifully.

Thank you dear Ken for your wonderful words, yes, there is only love... :)

[WILDERNESS]

Oh such impulse in this poem............ lovers power

Thank you kindly sir...

[emmajoy]

Perhaps we're left with inherent touches.. spaces filled with memories that wriggle into their true places and stay forever. If i've read correctly, you've said that so very beautifully, Elisa .. ' You embraced my soul, and life .. .. ' Real.

Thank you Emster luv for this wonderful review my dear friend.... :)

[emmajoy]

Pleasure..