~ Energy

~ Energy, Elisa Laura, Life, Death, Dead, Skeletons, Love, Eternity, Southern Europe, Graveyard, Me, You, Us, We.

~ Energy

 

Under the sunset in our vision,

And some shadows of the grapes,

 

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

You smelled like dusty earth mixed

With my old volcanic soil,

 

The cemetery was flowered

With cherry blossom,

 

But only we could see the

Other side so green,

 

You embraced my soul, and life,

With your dead smile embroiled in

Beauty,

               You knew me, as I you…

 

Your dark hair

Danced down my cheeks

With the help of the wind,

 

And our bones became one…

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by BrunuhVille...

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I am stunned. This is gorgeous. I agree. lol Perfectly done!! The visuals and romantics lol are to die for. Such beautiful energy felt here while engaged in this story of two dead lovers. Soul-mates.

Under the sunset in our vision,
And some shadows of the grapes,

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

The beginning is so powerful, setting the air for the depth it precedes. The idea of the dust mixing. Being at last complete. Looking with eager eyes at the other side while in each other arms.. Wow! This poem is perfect Elisa. Truly xx

" You knew me, as I you…"

Thank you so much dear soul-mate of me, you understood this one so well, couldn't miss ;) xxx I'm grateful for your words...

[joshua deathdealer]

You are most welcome darling Elisa. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece. xx

Thank you deary for being always here... with me. Bestie. I miss you, can't wait to hear your music, and fantastic conversations... so much to tell... -xx-

[Costa Siwale]

Fantastic!! I love this writing, beautiful stuff!

Thank you very much again Costa, I feel happy you enjoyed!!

[Mark]

I like this for its positive take. Nice

Hi Mark, thank you very much.... :)

[Dominique Lambright]

It is so sweet and elegant, great piece, I enjoyed reading it :)

Thank you very much Dominique, :) I read your latest, have to let it sink for a while, got many feelings with it ;) but you write wonderful... I'll come back when the perfect words are there... xx

[Dominique Lambright]

Lol ok and thank you. And you are very welcome.

[Leslie Philibert]

A poet I know and like, this is evocative, rich with imagery, finely paced, to put it simply, an excellent poem.

Thank you so much Leslie. Your words always make me smile!

[Lilly]

This is beautiful!
Bittersweet and lovely imagery
I love the last line too. A great, 'resonating' way to finish this piece

Thanks a lot Lilly for the beautiful words....

[Lilly]

No worries - you're welcome :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Such a haunting melody that fits so well with your words. This was an entire exprience, and perhaps in my current state of mind I am more attuned to the words behind your words, but for me this was an emotional ride. There is always such power in your writing, but you do it with a succinct grace.

Thank you very much dear Sarah... for your sweet words xx

[Quill~]

Reading this brings to mind a soul, reflecting on the golden years when happiness and love was pure, untouched by sadness. This is breathtaking. :)

Thank you so much sweet Quill~ for your wonderful words.... xx

[Antonio Valentino]

you are the sweetest wine from orbs of bunched up sun and shine..

a spirit is soft that writes so delicately

loved the end

Antonio :)

Thank you very much my sweet friend... life and death lay so close, and the fertile aspects, you saw as no other in this one... thank you with whole my heart sweetie. I'll be back for you after a good sleep... take care Antonio, :)

[Antonio Valentino]

the death of reality lies in dream.. the birth of beauty shares your gleam..

sleep sound sweeter pie

talk soon :)

Thanks for your trust and patience my friend... your words are magic.

[Lydia Shutter]

Heavy sigh! Such a bittersweet romantic write, Elisa. Deep emotions arranged so beautifully on the page and the accompaniment you chose is, as always, the perfect one. This is going into my library. It is far too beautiful to read just once. Lydi**

I'm ever so grateful to you, thanks for the encouriging.... and all you do Lydi xx