~ Energy

~ Energy, Elisa Laura, Life, Death, Dead, Skeletons, Love, Eternity, Southern Europe, Graveyard, Me, You, Us, We.

~ Energy

 

Under the sunset in our vision,

And some shadows of the grapes,

 

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

You smelled like dusty earth mixed

With my old volcanic soil,

 

The cemetery was flowered

With cherry blossom,

 

But only we could see the

Other side so green,

 

You embraced my soul, and life,

With your dead smile embroiled in

Beauty,

               You knew me, as I you…

 

Your dark hair

Danced down my cheeks

With the help of the wind,

 

And our bones became one…

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Music by BrunuhVille...

Enjoy xx

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I am stunned. This is gorgeous. I agree. lol Perfectly done!! The visuals and romantics lol are to die for. Such beautiful energy felt here while engaged in this story of two dead lovers. Soul-mates.

Under the sunset in our vision,
And some shadows of the grapes,

I felt your warmth, upon my skin;

The beginning is so powerful, setting the air for the depth it precedes. The idea of the dust mixing. Being at last complete. Looking with eager eyes at the other side while in each other arms.. Wow! This poem is perfect Elisa. Truly xx

" You knew me, as I you…"

Thank you so much dear soul-mate of me, you understood this one so well, couldn't miss ;) xxx I'm grateful for your words...

[joshua deathdealer]

You are most welcome darling Elisa. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece. xx

Thank you deary for being always here... with me. Bestie. I miss you, can't wait to hear your music, and fantastic conversations... so much to tell... -xx-

[Troy Henson]

It is a long lasting dream of mine to find that one person to share such a special life with, to love and adore till the day the we pass then together start a new journey through life as one. What a wonderful thought provoking piece Elisa. Very well done.

Regards
Troy

Thank you for your beautiful words my dear friend. :) I'm glad you felt this one. :)

[Jessi Leigh]

I love how you polarize the deadness and aliveness in us, in life, in so many different ways. A truly spectacular piece. Thank you

Lief, dankie.............soenjies en drukkies ;-) Love you Sis.... so miss you, I will talk to you soon, we need to catch up, thanks for being here again, know I am around and love you, but my absence has a reason... will Skype it.... love and hugs. Your reviews mean the world to me.

[Horizon K.]

If I were the roots of a vineyard, that fell in love, with the earth... If I were the leaves of the vine, that fell in love with the sun... This is what I think of, sweet Sis, when I read this... Pieces of life that are meant for one another, loves that are so natural, they could not be any other way... Sis, this is so romantic!

Thank you so much love, and Sis, for this great review, full of dept, heartwarming, connections, and utterly fantastic insight. You dance on my page, it's time we should chat... and eat some great bapao's together, mmm Saya Cinta padamu, Sayang, cium.... -x- :) ♥♥

[Horizon K.]

Saya Cinta Padamu Sis!! I ate Indo food last weekend, & I thought of you of course... miss you! xxx

Oh that's so fantastic Sis..... I'm curious what you choosed from the menu :) miss you so much, will mail you this week xxxx ♥

[sharonlee]

Elisa, exquisitely graceful... such haunting beauty with sophisticated level of poetic language and metaphor.
Bravo.

Hope you are well.

Thank you love, for this great supportive review full of love and friendship, :) ((HUGS)) have flue, but am on the better hand.... it goes great in a bit.... xxxxxxxx be back for you ♥

[Inda]

Such beauty and elegance presented here, there's such a softess to this it's just amazing. Great piece!

Thank you my dear buddy! good to see you around again, hope all is well :) -x- Lis :)

[Aethereal]

I was drawn into this poem by its title because I know a lot about energy. Sooner or later we all end up as spent energy. In time, our entire universe shall wind down to zero as all of its useful energy is used up. The big mystery is where all the original useful energy came from in the first place. When this useful energy is restored, then we'll all be restored. We walk in the shadow of the grape. I enjoyed this wonderful dark grape wine poem of yours. Here’s a tiny inspired gift poem for you.

Wine

Drink a cup of useful energy
before you go to bed.
It will do a lot of good for both
your tummy and your head.

Thank you so much my dear, :) I love the way you see things, analyze them, and spread your great brain all over my page... I wonder too, I wonder all, like you. You are a fellow scientist. :D
I wonder Higgs Boson, or the Higgs particle there... I wonder dust, I wonder, time, and space in general. Zero could be, another big bang, or just after a 30.000 years the Sun is too hot, and will explode... all is possible. I loved it you enjoyed this one, for it was inteded to let people feel, earth, death, birth, and the "fertility" of all is transience, but lovely when it's there... moments, to moments, years after years, history that repeats itself.... and then ....

There are wines,
The blood through our veins,
The older it get's the riper it is...
The more tasteful, the more bliss....

Always, thank you for your awesome reviews, my friend...
They are unique, full of pleasure, and taste! :) he he...

[Aethereal]

Thanks for your beautiful reply poem, Elisa! Perhaps the older our universe gets, the nearer it gets to bliss as well. Wine just goes along for the ride.

Exactly... that was what I inteded too ;-) hehe, you get me always, and I you somehow..... fantastic friend.

[Aethereal]

Good night. Sweet dreams!

Night night, you too! :)

[Ruth]

I think, no - I know, I need to breathe after absorbing this! In a good way - hon, this is so beautiful, it reached through my flesh and played my heart strings! Wow ♥

Thank you so so much love ♥ for being here, I'm so honored you loved this darling heart.... ((HUGS)) I have to catch up with you, I will much love xx

[Scott Metro]

Shows the beauty within you...
My admiration dear soul..

Scotty

Thank you so much dear Wolfie... admiration to you too my friend... :) Lis :)

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

Harmony within beauty and darkness.

Yes, ;) thank you very much.

[Trace]

Would it be a "PUN" to say: this is deep?
But very lovely.
Trace

Thank you so much my sweet friend, your words, are lovely, and, no, you can say what you need to on my writings, I love your honesty, and all with me is very deep, some do love it others hate it :) it's my nature... and I'm soon back... :) can't wait to return the favor!