~ The Road to You

~ The Road to You, I was so close, I was there, You were too... A feel good Poem...

 

~ The Road to You

 

There were so many melodies,

      On my way to you,

 

But none were as strong, as

       The melody of love,

On that sweet hot

       Summer day,

 

I sensed you in the air,

       In my car, from the asphalt

You were there;

 

      Also where I walked,

And where I lay,

       You were there,

 

And there was me…

 

The Road of love

     At the end of June,

Never felt so good,

      Never felt so free...

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading xx

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Your writing style is quite rare. Everything is balance. Not over crowded with metaphors that could confuse your readers . Here in this piece I felt that I was the one being followed, being pursued. Intriguing cleverness of the chosen placement and flow of words. One word I could describe you with this piece Elisa . You're " NATURAL " ... Thoughts and words just floats not forced even gravity respects your thoughts motives and desire and gradual descents and you don't care where you land. " And there was me " ...one simple line..so innocent...so lovely at the same time.
You know what I got after reading this piece ? You simplified life. Its not really complicated and scary and hurtful at all to love even though its not reciprocated . Wow..I'm so glad I check you out.

Awe, really you do me some honor this early morning here... :) love to read your reviews, they are really helping lovely and honest. :) No, I'm for less is more. There is so much already complicated in life, (first I started here I think almost 3 years ago on WC, with pretty much difficult and cryptic writings, then I thought, why am I doing this???? what has it for a value, to hide myself behind these walls of un true being.... there is much more to writing, and all we we write is something out of our hearts, as (how good we want to protect it) save it, denial it, we are the authors, of it, and if it's fiction, or fantasy, or anything, there is a true part of the writer in it.... you can't denial ... I have been to points I did, but I don't anymore, I am how I am... you get me how I am, and you have me naked.... (literally).

Ofcourse I speak still through metaphors, and do my thing, but there is always an artist, and author in it... and we should watch more honestly to ourselves here on WritersCafe, to understand the process of that.... (a lot still hide in their writings)... keeping it safe, and secure.

Sooner or later they will know, their inner muse comes out, the poet they have inside... hidden or not....

I feel honored, truly honored by seeing you by, I'm on my damn HTC right now, but I do read you, and I love to be back on Tuesday, after my travel to give you responce, to your art, I already did read a lot of you, but I can asure you, you're a raw gem too.

I thank you for saying that, maybe I am... I still don't know what, or who I am, I know what I love, and where I shall fight for in life, but don't ask me who I am, because for me that's an infinite question, I shall never stop learning, and never be too young for it.... :)))) I adore you for truly digging into my soul, my travelers soul, my free soul, and trying to understand it... that's beauty.

I think I do, maybe, I have seen twice the light, and was almost dead, maybe it brings more relativation to my readers... for I love to give them that. I love you alreay new bud!!!! thanks for giving me new fuel to drive-live on!!! xx

[Deuces]

Beautiful piece. It's an amazing feeling... love, that is. You convey the innocence and sweetness that exists during the start of it all. And yes, it's the most free feeling in the world.

Enjoyed, my friend!

Thank you G. with whole my heart, you mean the world to me bud! take much care, I catch up in a while... have a road trip lol again yes I know .... shall snap-shot ;) have a lovely night my friend...

[Joyce S. Greene]

Loved this one, Elisa. Your road to love was a joyous one and you have shared your joy with us. Many thanks.

Thank you so much my sweet friend... happy that you loved this piece... :)

[Lydia Shutter]

A sweet and romantic love poem. When the road leads to love, it is suddenly less bumpy. Joyous emotions in this one. I liked the music you chose to accompany your words and the photo as well. Knuffels, Lydi**

Lydi** thank you very much! :) so right you are. Always a pleasure to see you... xox I'll be back for yours, after my home made Italian dinner tonight... :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Bon Appetito!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ohhhhh I LOVE THIS!!!

Magnifique'...Perfecto!!! :D

The entire piece feels free... Love is freedom to move and be moved....
You have no idea how much it lifts my heart to read your passionate words again.
Keep penning, Sis... I thrive on your words... when you are awake, so am I!

You energize your readers... that my dear, is a true Poetess!~xoxo~:)

P.S. The music is divine!!

Thank you so much love, the old me is coming back... I'm ever so happy these days :) what a wonderful review, you brought me tears.... I was making a delicious Italian meal tonight :D wanna come over? Love you xoxo :)))

P.s. it's my road music ;) ♫

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Yes!..I'll bring some wine. (he he)
Resting does wonders for your soul!...I can feel your warm smile... you are indeed back!

P.S.I love your road music... puts me in a happy place... I'm going to listen to it for awhile. lol :D

[Pryde Foltz]

I sensed you in the air,
In my car, from the asphalt
You were there;

Lots of musicality to this one. Really wonderful.

Gracias :) your words mean much to me sweet friend xo ♫

[Lover Of Words]

Simply beautiful in a magical way... simply beautiful

Thank you dearest ♥

[Lover Of Words]

My pleasure lovely one

[Kenaz]

I love how easy this is to read. Very pleasing to the eye and you've got your English spot on in this one ;) Good to have a destination, but the drive is always the best learning experience.

Thank you very much my sweet friend, I was in doubt though, but glad you say so... yes, this was a feel good one ;) I miss summer time, and those nostalgic days, where I drive my car, and with open windows... (no airconditioning) just the free air... thanks for being here T.

[Kenaz]

I'm a sucker for positive pieces

No worries, they will come, when they come... (remember we talked about that :P )

[Kenaz]

Take your time E, I'm just pushing you for my own greed :)

Glad to hear ;) glad to hear ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with Anne...so lyrical...

on the road to love, and with love as a very close passenger...

the pic is interesting also...

Thank you so much my friend... ♫

[icelandicblue]

This is so lyrical and reminds me of the first warm breezes of the summer season so filled with promise. Your words are so enticing:

The Road of love
At the end of June,
Never felt so good,
Never felt so free...

I love the picture too, it fits with your poem perfectly.

Thank you dearhart, xo I think I miss summer time ;) he he.....