~ The Dragonfly dreamt Me

~ The Dragonfly dreamt Me, Elisa Laura, Freestyle Poetry, Dreams, Fantasy, Love, Nature

~ The Dragonfly dreamt Me

 

Dark waters, deathly dehydrated,

By the arid light of the devils Moon,

A glimpse of grey-turquoise, transformed

Originated by blue and green,

              The changing incidence of the light,

              Daylight, was to come, too soon!

 

And so I rested upon a wet broken branch,

In this forbidden land,

The glossy maple leaves,

              Reflected just one star;

              I saw you, shining upon this water,

With these quadruple wings, from afar

 

Tired, but ever safe here in this land,

A moment, of peace merged

With water, wood, some sand…

 

I did entered your dream,

Where you gave me your visions…

               The world felt home, through

                Light transmissions,

 

A mood of gentle euphoria,

Glided slowly through our thin veins,

Where we became a Dragonfly;

            Four eyes of passion,

            Seen through two, never to extinct,

Love in rest for a life-time,

On this quiet lakeside interlinked ~

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Sometimes you awake with poetry in your head, ;)

I dreamt, I was a Dragonfly ~



Enjoy xx

Reviews

[Thaddius]

This is surreal, Ovid-esque. A great meditation on beauty and escape from our corporeal monotony. The dragonfly dreaming you as the vehicle for your dream as the dragonfly is brilliant. Metaphysical, the lines dance and brim with aesthetic bliss, but it's the spaces in-between that tempt of something ethereal, religious. The one-ness of everything. Loved it.

I can't thank you enough for your review this time Thaddius, you felt it... I felt it, I dreamt this, while I was been dreamt, and wrote it quite soon after in a scribblish way out on paper. Then this came out, of the unconciousness... your reviews, are brilliant. :)

[writing mojo]

Such a lucky bug this interceptor muse...the ode is breath breeze traveling from a hidden place not willing to show, but lipped away beneath veined branches of a exhaling love...amazing peace this..

Thank you so much dear weather man! I think you've seen things, through the eyes, of one too! :)

[writing mojo]

perhaps glassy as the rain that hangs on a stubborn Oak cheek in the forest of dreams, not ready to fall in just yet..

nicely said, with my (our) round eyes, from the wetlands as the morning sun comes through, I (we) shall look up, and see you there thinking, and resting... from a long icy flight just being...

[writing mojo]

no longer alone, but on the flapping wings of a fossil coming to life...

Now that makes you the oldest and special dragonfly ever.... (reminds me somehow of Jurassic Park lol) the scene with the mosquito into that orange, yellow resin layer resin block.... oh now I ruined the moment I am afraid shoot ;)

[joshua deathdealer]

First off I love the music and scenery you set your poetry to. Second the way the two are transformed into the dragonfly is brilliant. All the elements and the love in this poem is key to the message. It defiantly unique and I could spend hours here musing all the different thoughts provoked. Excellent excellent work dear Elisa.

The glossy maple leaves,
Reflected just one star;
I saw you, shining upon this water,
With these quadruple wings, from afar.....and still some sand!! xo

Oh thank you Joshua, really, you understand what the "Key is" I saw it on your profile too ;) beautiful to end your about me, with that perfection... I feel blessed with you near me! your words mean the world to me my friend.

This one was a dream, I had, I dreamt, I was a dragonfly, and that the dragonfly dreamt me, we became one, with four wings... to fly into the early morning sun... thanks hon! xxx

[joshua deathdealer]

Thank you. I am blessed with you as my friend. I spent all night last night working on my profile. lol I've never changed it before and it took more work than I thought. It was fun though.

What a powerful dream. It's wonderful when you can remember them and portray them so well. A dragonfly is a very strong symbol of transformation. The dragonfly totem carries the wisdom of transformation and adaptability in life. As spirit animal, the dragonfly is connected to the symbolism of change and light. When the dragonfly shows up in your life, it may remind you to bring a bit more lightness and joy into your life. Those who have this animal as totem may be inclined to delve deep into their emotions and shine their true colors.

Oh really... you didn't had night-shift? or where you working and working on it together, aw poor you, you must have been tired from this.... HTML-ing is boring... ha, know all about it. Thanks so much for saying this wisdom, touches me even deeper, now I felt it really, without knowing, sweet Robbie also said the dragonfly had something to bring to me..... loved this respond! thanks so much sweetie xx

[joshua deathdealer]

I was off last night but i work tonight...blah Oh well so is life. Work work. Your welcome.

It is.... know all about it, I wish you goodluck, in a while, (don't think about it yet), enjoy each moment :D

[joshua deathdealer]

*breathes* (:

Check your mail lol :P he he

[J. Kell]

So imaginative and vivid. Nice when we can feel so connected to nature and the creatures in this beautiful world :)

Thank you so much my friend, yes, it is, I think myself always just as little, as these creatures... (that's why I dreamt this write, litterally, woke up, and had to write it out of me lol). Thanks for the review :)

[J. Kell]

thats amazing, we all should see ourselves that way.

Actually we are all just (dust) into the nothingness lol.... ;)

[J. Kell]

haha true true

[Rossen]

lovely description of my favorite bug!

Thank you so much Rossen, always good to see you.

[Kenaz]

Glad to have retained such a vision upon waking. True poets are dreamers and you are a true poet. As for the dragonfly I find your quotation fascinating. It may just be a mistake of grammar, but it makes me wonder if other creatures dream of being human.

Now that's what I wondered too, ah thank you for bringing that up.... is it the human race that separates dispite our intelligence from other beings who exsist? I know horses, and dogs dream, (they can move with their legs during sleep, as if they run)... but of a human being? interesting concept yes. Thank you very much T. :)

[Kenaz]

Surely we are not alone. You are welcome.

We are never alone my friend... never.

[Jack...]

My sweet friend, moonlight reflecting off of tiny ripples on the water's surface hypnotize with their rhythmic slowly moving patterns as light, in the form of color, trancends these saphire surroundings to a shimmering wonderland as we fly, free of pain and hurt, to the safety of our arms. More beauty from your words pours from this screen to my eyes and I smile. Simply stunning Elisa.

Those are beautiful words Jack, thank you. This was a dream I had, and woke up... I had to write it out, as soon as I could. I love the interpretation you give it, (for it's still not clear to me)... I'm happy that you enjoyed it my friend, heartsmiles! :)

[David Scott]

The dragonfly symbolizes a spirit able to transport between consciouses.
Dream connected with reality. Spirit world connected with physical.
I like how you say this poetry visited your mind in a dream... Perfect place to visit with your inner dragonfly.

Again such a beautiful insightful review David, :) makes my morning, thank you :)

[Inda]

This is so soothing it's almost hypnosis! Great piece that really took me to another place and that is what i liked the most. Fantastic!

Thank you sweet friend... I treasure your words, and I'm happy it took you to another place ;)

[Revery]

Wow Eli, the beautiful hues of sublime that you can conjure are always striking. I'm so impressed with the beauty you ink onto white. Love it

Oh thank you so much G. :) I'm ever happy to see you here. And I promise I'll be back for you and the others on here as soon as I feel a 200%. Just now I listen to health and heart. Much love my friend... I read you already, and you rock!

[Revery]

:) Your in my thoughts and prayers dear.

♥ thank you my friend, you are always with me! :) so good to see you again!