~ And when all is Silent

~ And when all is Silent, Elisa Laura, When heartbreak, transforms to Beauty. Europe, Classical, Mystery, Panta Rhei, Fate.

~ And when all is Silent

 

 

There trustfully enter,

Soft musical notes

Inside my mind,

From you for me to find;

 

You bring me further,

To other worlds,

Places, and, by then;

I need nothing more.

For I’m Zen.

 

You're holding hands,

And are swinging around me,

Like a carousel of love --

 

That smile on your face, is one

Of priceless beauty,

Beyond the attractive force

Of love, so -- invisible art to

My core.

 

Not even the smile

You wore, I saw you with

In my dreams,

But you looked different,

This time, with more heart beams...

 

I tear off my mourning veil,

And kiss your lips;

Fiery women hands,

Around your cheeks…

 

My nose smells your new skin;

My lips are kissing your face,

And we merge like the essentials of

Panta Rhei …

 

No more tears, of pain,

I shall combat! for what I’ve lost;

I will donate them, like;

Water to the Earth,

Let them sweetly fall,

On the ground beneath my feet

For growth to come,

 

There will be new born flows,

Of fresh wind, and water;

Where the resurrected

Fluidly may dance,

 

All shall be moving, and living,

Within the strength of true love,

Into new tiny creations, of

Life, to live for,

 

As in my new born heart.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading, you just being here is enough for me,
But all critisism and reviews are always welcome. Enjoy, xx

~ When heartbreak, transforms to Beauty...

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

We must die a little to feel a lot... there is a certain pain in birth, as there is in death...
The two are inevitable.. life and death shall meet...
This is a story filled with heartbreak, and healing.. I believe your silence speaks louder than words...

Beautifully penned, Sis!~xoxo~

As unpredictable as I am, I came out of the shower, and oversaw your beautiful words again. Nobody like you understand the essence of my soul. THANK YOU!
Not even a man! Every man! :) It's sheer madness, the speed of reviewing, not to land the true feelings, traversing popularity, above what really matters .... that's what sisters are for. And be aware, I do all for my true friends, (you know they know). I am ever grateful of your patience, and Spanish blood line, who sees art to art Sis. If one is born, we all die a little, transient and fleeting life is.

I am one of the few who is always aware of, death, so I do not fear death. In fact, I will not regret, if it's my time. (this is not in depressed sense). As everyone interprets, more, as the light I've seen it before, and with him, sister with him ... :) he he... this was a death wedding ;) I celebrate xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know where your heart is, Sis...there is a rebirth!...
It is felt throughout this piece...there is a beauty in death... painful as it may be...
I do see the merging of both...

You are a brilliant Poetess... write until there is no more ink.... Love you!~xoxo~

I shall... sigh, I shall, however I'm over tired, and hurt, I am a slave of the pen, until I truly die. Love you too xx :) and may it not be on here, I shall post you forever! ;) sweetest!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

P.S. I never saw you as a fearful woman... You are very strong... you emanate strength in your poetry...That's why you inspire me!! xxxx

But what I lack you have, and what you lack I have lol, we fullfil eachother... When I start to write erotic, my muses will be like: WTF????? and when you write classic yours are like HUH???? WHAT"s wrong with her LOL ;) Love you for that Sis, you're my fuel, light my all :)xxxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ha ha!! I love it!... you are too funny Eli... :D
So true... they are stunned! It's okay to change it up a bit. (he he)
Otherwise, it wouldn't be fun! XXXXX ;D

Yep agree, I should post some Erotic soon, on here LOL, ha! for I have many :D ;) well you know already lol... I know Sis, when you do Classics, I'm a little in love always with your writing!!!!!!!! for you rock at that too, (not many know), but I do. Love you hun!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awww Thanks Sis!...well your erotic even makes ME blush! LOL ;D
You shouldn't keep that to yourself.... it's too hot girl! ;)

He he... sigh.... ;) you know what I am up to in the future, and I shall let you be the first to know........... xxxxx sweety and soulsis!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know... and I can't wait! lol ;D
don't keep us waiting too long... xxxxxx

I won't love... I am balacing things out, and I know I never give up, on you guys, not ever on my self either.... I shall come back stronger, soon :) xxxxxxxxxxxx I LOVE YOU ROBBIE!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force. read moreI know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force.
Love you too, Sis!!~xoxoxoxox~ :)

Nothing makes me dream of it too, (baby steps) LOL... sigh... I'm true to my heart, and the things, I've faced, loved, and lost.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It doesn't happen overnight... but you are the best at whatever you put your heart into.. (((hugs)))

I know sweetie, thanks, such a heart of me to you again.... I know I walked in my hole hiking carreer, I think 4 times to Rome, from my home, and Rome wasn't build in 1 day ;) I have patience, with myself, as I have with my dearest people, we have our own time Sis, always! :) love you xxxxxx

[David Scott]

Your silence mingles well with the woodland creatures chirping their welcome to a crisp Autumn morning here in the mountains of NC...
Better than coffee I think.
Yes, you have a few grammar errors, but the happy transformation was not lost or deminished at all in the translation.
Lovely to read your thoughts this morning EL.

Thank you so much David, always, for the great reviews. Feel free to help me with the grammar, always, (if you feel the need). Thanks for the read, hope all is well with you, my friend :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really true love is like rebirth of the heart...learning to love again is not easy...

and when we get a chance to do it..we need to take it...

nicely penned, Elisa.

it's been that way for me now...after so many failed attempts, my heart was like a plant that had withered and was on the brink of death..

jacob

Exactly dear friend, ah, thank you so ever much always, for being a true part of my tiny life :)
read moreExactly dear friend, ah, thank you so ever much always, for being a true part of my tiny life :)
I so appreciate it you are faithful to me, and ever come back... I shall do too, I told Pryde, Robbie and all tonight, I'm just a slow-turtle, just bear with me... :) I feel you friend, I failed a thousand times in love, and love failed me, but there shall be true love one day.... :) I send you at least my sparkles and tears of true friendship so the plant that's you shall grow, in something beautiful (it already is) but for the feeling ;-) xx

Here in total embrace what I said (sorry WC glitches the whole night my friend: Exactly dear friend, ah, thank you so ever much always, for being a true part of my tiny life :) I so appreciate it you are faithful to me, and ever come back... I shall do too, I told Pryde, Robbie and all tonight, I'm just a slow-turtle, just bear with me, and we should do and always follow what's on our tiny hearts, even when it's useless, it brings art, and art, shall live, as we don't but we will finally, and jacob, my friend, I shall ever sparkle some water out of tears of purity to you, so yourself, or the plant may grow, until it's done....) I promise that. Be back soon for you my dear friend. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

There also seems to be a rebirth of style in this one, or maybe it is the change in font, but there is a sparser nature to your verse, or so it seems. I think it suited this poem well. If writing is like dancing than this was a tango.

Thank you for saying that dear Pryde, sssht, I was an old dancer, and a Tango would fit, a Rumba too, or a slow European Watlz, It was a dance macabre, (death one). my font changed by the air of change, and the spontaneous rebirth I felt. I will be back for you precious woman. Bear with this slow-turtle ;) xx

[Pryde Foltz]

Smile.......

Muwah! thankies for the extra time dear xx smiling too!

[Everett DeValle]

You are so beautifully emotive, Elisa...Art is what you are...you live and breathe through your words...the presentation...the emotions of heart rendered in loneliness...your expressions are like a Rembrandt painting in a museum, to be admired for hours. Nicely done. :)

I think a loner as me, is a fighter, and free. :) thank you for your beautiful tenderness my dear friend. Sigh, now you are getting me weak.... ;) love to you and yours deary!

[Everett DeValle]

You are never alone, I send my soul to you, kissed by an Angel. ;)

You are very welcome, Elisa...avec beaucoup de plaisir mon amie. :)

Merci bien mon cherie.... c'est tres noble de toi.... :) You're never alone too, for we (my true friends and I, and exes LOL are always together alone ;) ).... from there the heart beats, and we sketch, love on paper. Rendez-vous demain, après mon retour de la mer .... ;) bisous!

[Everett DeValle]

Je t'en prie, Mademoiselle. Ja'i apprecie. ;)

Aww, you know how to contact me...on my bat phone lol ;)

Ooh La La, Oui, Mademoiselle. :)

Hahahaha Ev, let's do a dance! of friendship right now, sweets, You lead! I follow! ;) just before I jump in my car.... so we felt we are alive!!!

[Everett DeValle]

Oh, I can dance...you want to merengue the night away, we can do that. ;)

Merengue sounds delightful, I'm very good at merengue... :D

[Everett DeValle]

Oooo, I would Love to see you, do that. ;)

I has to learn from one of my exes...but it's fun, the music is fun...we can do hip hop...we can just lounge, to chill music...I'm flexible. :)

Hip Hop fast, and slow is just amazing... can do both LOL :D even popping, ha, you wouldn't believe... I'm very elastic LOL oh you're flexible too, well, than we have an "Elastic - Double "

[Everett DeValle]

Oh, I'm not as limber anymore lol...I use to break dance growing up, so yeah, I can dance...but now, it's more chill...a slow dance? ;)

Hey, you're still, LOL, oldie... ;) I'm old too.... let's keep that vibe alive. A slow foxtrot? ha! okay, could be mixed with Rumba LOL

[Everett DeValle]

Oh those I would have to learn lol...I'm just admitting what I know and can do in my limited ways...salsa merengue, um, hip hop, we can mosh to rock lol jk :)

Salsa Merengue, we as Spanish do often...
Just tell me what you want to dance, and we do! ha! I'm all-round :D older and fatter, but I will still rock ;)

[Everett DeValle]

Awww I don't judge you by weight...I've dated all types and shapes of ladies, my fave is the thick ones. ;)

Even if you did, lol, I didn't care :D I'm really a person who loves, and lives from the inside love.
I'm fatter, like I was a dancer before, I'm not fat, at all, just cozy ;) love-handles you know :D haha... bourgondic good! LOL

[Everett DeValle]

Mmmm thick is nice, buts that's me. :)

It's me too, I can only have respect for men like you, you know one of the "Vatos locos" loved the "culo gordo" the most ha! :D ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

oh I'm giggling now! lol

[Everett DeValle]

They say here, more cushion for the pushin lol

I don't go for supermodels or models, I've dated some but they are boring...always looking at the mirror...shoot I should write about that tryst lol

[Robbie~xoxo~]

that's just wrong! lol....but yes, women should have curves... and Eli is a Goddess. ;)

Ha Sis, Oh you know the Eli, but faithful :) to uhm... ;) and a life-enjoyer!!! I just love food!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! let's make some lumpia's all together! :D en mi casa.... taco's borrito's fegita's all possible...

[Everett DeValle]

I love curves. FYI, EV Loves Curves. :)

Robbie, you're the goddes love, you have no idea how beautiful you are xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Well you're in luck Ev... there's curves at Eli's place... and you're making the lumpia! ;)

Ev, I love your words, and for loving the curves, that's just so good!!!! you can shake hands with one vatos locos... ha!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'll make the mojitos! ;D

[Everett DeValle]

Answer the phone, Robbie...I'm calling the Goddess.

HAHAHA, Robbie don't answer BIATCH!!!! LOL ;) oh I'm giggling, it's a Sis thingy Ev ;) you will understand :P I shall make Mojitos, para ti linda.....

[Everett DeValle]

Dame une besos, ahora!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ha ha! I never answer my phone! Just ask P and Traci! LMAO!! Muahahahahahahahaha! ;D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Eli you crack me up!! Bwahahahahahaha! are we drunk yet?? O.O

[Everett DeValle]

Last call for Alcohol!

Damn my PC IS PHAT, it doesn't run so fast :D it's slow urgh, pardon me!!!!!!!! Muhahahahaha P and T, are the bomb!!!!!! they are like the vatos locos feminas! ;) Besitos para ti amores!!!! I had too much champagne, this eve Sis, I was tipsy, but then, the hot shower broke my pleasure LOL

[Everett DeValle]

It's been slow for me too. :(

[Everett DeValle]

Nite nite and let the bed bugs bite you in the @ss, JK lol

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Wow! So glad you didn't break out the Spanish Eli! Whew!...I can barely keep up! lol
Champagne is nice, and so is vodka! ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

oh of course! ;)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Good night Ev... sweet dreams Casanova. xxxx

[Everett DeValle]

Have her cook, Spanish Paella, Robbie!

I will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev, read moreI will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev,
@Robstar :D I can't either, I should be in the car, by now LOL, I'm just driving on WC, but not on the road ha..... Vodka, for Timo yep, thanks Sis ♥ Love yah! in Russian: Я люблю тебя ... "Я = Ja = I, люблю, Love, тебя you! ya lyublyu tebya sestra! (sis)

I will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev, @Robstar :D I can't either, I should be in the car, by now LOL, I'm just driving on WC, but not on the road ha..... Vodka, for Timo yep, thanks Sis ♥.. Я люблю тебя means that I love you in Russian Robbie :D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ohhhhh that sounds Delish!!! I'm hungry now! :D

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'll toast to that and to Timo ... I love you too!

Thanks for the love Sis... he will appreciate it!!!! my darling! Keep you in touch ;) I'm off now, need to go! chat soon Sis xoxoxo :)

[Jack...]

All that has ended will one day start anew and all that is new will someday end, that is the cycle of all. My friend, your smile is felt in this as are your remembered tears. For each Rose bloom that falls to the ground in a shower of petals shall re-bloom another, more beautiful in its place.

Very nicely done. Hope this finds you smiling.

It did my dearest friend, and ever patient one! :) I appreciate my real friends on here... After all, I've told you, I should be dancing, like the old dancer in me... celebrate, the pain, the hurt... Be back to my roots. And you're a wonderful audiance my friend, you will find out when I'm back. :) ((Smiles)) from Arnhem to Texas ;)

Spanish/Italian/Russian thinking... Audience ofcourse ... I meant :)