We must die a little to feel a lot... there is a certain pain in birth, as there is in death...
The two are inevitable.. life and death shall meet...
This is a story filled with heartbreak, and healing.. I believe your silence speaks louder than words...
Beautifully penned, Sis!~xoxo~
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11 Years Ago
As unpredictable as I am, I came out of the shower, and oversaw your beautiful words again. Nobody l.. read moreAs unpredictable as I am, I came out of the shower, and oversaw your beautiful words again. Nobody like you understand the essence of my soul. THANK YOU!
Not even a man! Every man! :) It's sheer madness, the speed of reviewing, not to land the true feelings, traversing popularity, above what really matters .... that's what sisters are for. And be aware, I do all for my true friends, (you know they know). I am ever grateful of your patience, and Spanish blood line, who sees art to art Sis. If one is born, we all die a little, transient and fleeting life is.
I am one of the few who is always aware of, death, so I do not fear death. In fact, I will not regret, if it's my time. (this is not in depressed sense). As everyone interprets, more, as the light I've seen it before, and with him, sister with him ... :) he he... this was a death wedding ;) I celebrate xx
11 Years Ago
I know where your heart is, Sis...there is a rebirth!...
It is felt throughout this piece...th.. read moreI know where your heart is, Sis...there is a rebirth!...
It is felt throughout this piece...there is a beauty in death... painful as it may be...
I do see the merging of both...
You are a brilliant Poetess... write until there is no more ink.... Love you!~xoxo~
11 Years Ago
I shall... sigh, I shall, however I'm over tired, and hurt, I am a slave of the pen, until I truly d.. read moreI shall... sigh, I shall, however I'm over tired, and hurt, I am a slave of the pen, until I truly die. Love you too xx :) and may it not be on here, I shall post you forever! ;) sweetest!
11 Years Ago
P.S. I never saw you as a fearful woman... You are very strong... you emanate strength in your poetr.. read moreP.S. I never saw you as a fearful woman... You are very strong... you emanate strength in your poetry...That's why you inspire me!! xxxx
11 Years Ago
But what I lack you have, and what you lack I have lol, we fullfil eachother... When I start to writ.. read moreBut what I lack you have, and what you lack I have lol, we fullfil eachother... When I start to write erotic, my muses will be like: WTF????? and when you write classic yours are like HUH???? WHAT"s wrong with her LOL ;) Love you for that Sis, you're my fuel, light my all :)xxxx
11 Years Ago
Ha ha!! I love it!... you are too funny Eli... :D
So true... they are stunned! It's okay to ch.. read moreHa ha!! I love it!... you are too funny Eli... :D
So true... they are stunned! It's okay to change it up a bit. (he he)
Otherwise, it wouldn't be fun! XXXXX ;D
11 Years Ago
Yep agree, I should post some Erotic soon, on here LOL, ha! for I have many :D ;) well you know alre.. read moreYep agree, I should post some Erotic soon, on here LOL, ha! for I have many :D ;) well you know already lol... I know Sis, when you do Classics, I'm a little in love always with your writing!!!!!!!! for you rock at that too, (not many know), but I do. Love you hun!
11 Years Ago
awww Thanks Sis!...well your erotic even makes ME blush! LOL ;D
You shouldn't keep that to you.. read moreawww Thanks Sis!...well your erotic even makes ME blush! LOL ;D
You shouldn't keep that to yourself.... it's too hot girl! ;)
11 Years Ago
He he... sigh.... ;) you know what I am up to in the future, and I shall let you be the first to kno.. read moreHe he... sigh.... ;) you know what I am up to in the future, and I shall let you be the first to know........... xxxxx sweety and soulsis!
11 Years Ago
I know... and I can't wait! lol ;D
don't keep us waiting too long... xxxxxx
11 Years Ago
I won't love... I am balacing things out, and I know I never give up, on you guys, not ever on my se.. read moreI won't love... I am balacing things out, and I know I never give up, on you guys, not ever on my self either.... I shall come back stronger, soon :) xxxxxxxxxxxx I LOVE YOU ROBBIE!
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I know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force. read moreI know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force.
Love you too, Sis!!~xoxoxoxox~ :)
Nothing makes me dream of it too, (baby steps) LOL... sigh... I'm true to my heart, and the things, .. read moreNothing makes me dream of it too, (baby steps) LOL... sigh... I'm true to my heart, and the things, I've faced, loved, and lost.
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It doesn't happen overnight... but you are the best at whatever you put your heart into.. (((hugs)))
11 Years Ago
I know sweetie, thanks, such a heart of me to you again.... I know I walked in my hole hiking carre.. read moreI know sweetie, thanks, such a heart of me to you again.... I know I walked in my hole hiking carreer, I think 4 times to Rome, from my home, and Rome wasn't build in 1 day ;) I have patience, with myself, as I have with my dearest people, we have our own time Sis, always! :) love you xxxxxx
Your silence mingles well with the woodland creatures chirping their welcome to a crisp Autumn morning here in the mountains of NC...
Better than coffee I think.
Yes, you have a few grammar errors, but the happy transformation was not lost or deminished at all in the translation.
Lovely to read your thoughts this morning EL.
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11 Years Ago
Thank you so much David, always, for the great reviews. Feel free to help me with the grammar, alway.. read moreThank you so much David, always, for the great reviews. Feel free to help me with the grammar, always, (if you feel the need). Thanks for the read, hope all is well with you, my friend :)
really true love is like rebirth of the heart...learning to love again is not easy...
and when we get a chance to do it..we need to take it...
nicely penned, Elisa.
it's been that way for me now...after so many failed attempts, my heart was like a plant that had withered and was on the brink of death..
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Exactly dear friend, ah, thank you so ever much always, for being a true part of my tiny life :) read moreExactly dear friend, ah, thank you so ever much always, for being a true part of my tiny life :)
I so appreciate it you are faithful to me, and ever come back... I shall do too, I told Pryde, Robbie and all tonight, I'm just a slow-turtle, just bear with me... :) I feel you friend, I failed a thousand times in love, and love failed me, but there shall be true love one day.... :) I send you at least my sparkles and tears of true friendship so the plant that's you shall grow, in something beautiful (it already is) but for the feeling ;-) xx
11 Years Ago
Here in total embrace what I said (sorry WC glitches the whole night my friend: Exactly dear friend,.. read moreHere in total embrace what I said (sorry WC glitches the whole night my friend: Exactly dear friend, ah, thank you so ever much always, for being a true part of my tiny life :) I so appreciate it you are faithful to me, and ever come back... I shall do too, I told Pryde, Robbie and all tonight, I'm just a slow-turtle, just bear with me, and we should do and always follow what's on our tiny hearts, even when it's useless, it brings art, and art, shall live, as we don't but we will finally, and jacob, my friend, I shall ever sparkle some water out of tears of purity to you, so yourself, or the plant may grow, until it's done....) I promise that. Be back soon for you my dear friend. :)
There also seems to be a rebirth of style in this one, or maybe it is the change in font, but there is a sparser nature to your verse, or so it seems. I think it suited this poem well. If writing is like dancing than this was a tango.
Thank you for saying that dear Pryde, sssht, I was an old dancer, and a Tango would fit, a Rumba too.. read moreThank you for saying that dear Pryde, sssht, I was an old dancer, and a Tango would fit, a Rumba too, or a slow European Watlz, It was a dance macabre, (death one). my font changed by the air of change, and the spontaneous rebirth I felt. I will be back for you precious woman. Bear with this slow-turtle ;) xx
11 Years Ago
Smile.......
11 Years Ago
Muwah! thankies for the extra time dear xx smiling too!
You are so beautifully emotive, Elisa...Art is what you are...you live and breathe through your words...the presentation...the emotions of heart rendered in loneliness...your expressions are like a Rembrandt painting in a museum, to be admired for hours. Nicely done. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
I think a loner as me, is a fighter, and free. :) thank you for your beautiful tenderness my dear fr.. read moreI think a loner as me, is a fighter, and free. :) thank you for your beautiful tenderness my dear friend. Sigh, now you are getting me weak.... ;) love to you and yours deary!
11 Years Ago
You are never alone, I send my soul to you, kissed by an Angel. ;)
You are very welcome.. read moreYou are never alone, I send my soul to you, kissed by an Angel. ;)
You are very welcome, Elisa...avec beaucoup de plaisir mon amie. :)
11 Years Ago
Merci bien mon cherie.... c'est tres noble de toi.... :) You're never alone too, for we (my true fri.. read moreMerci bien mon cherie.... c'est tres noble de toi.... :) You're never alone too, for we (my true friends and I, and exes LOL are always together alone ;) ).... from there the heart beats, and we sketch, love on paper. Rendez-vous demain, après mon retour de la mer .... ;) bisous!
11 Years Ago
Je t'en prie, Mademoiselle. Ja'i apprecie. ;)
Aww, you know how to contact me...on my b.. read moreJe t'en prie, Mademoiselle. Ja'i apprecie. ;)
Aww, you know how to contact me...on my bat phone lol ;)
Ooh La La, Oui, Mademoiselle. :)
11 Years Ago
Hahahaha Ev, let's do a dance! of friendship right now, sweets, You lead! I follow! ;) just before I.. read moreHahahaha Ev, let's do a dance! of friendship right now, sweets, You lead! I follow! ;) just before I jump in my car.... so we felt we are alive!!!
11 Years Ago
Oh, I can dance...you want to merengue the night away, we can do that. ;)
11 Years Ago
Merengue sounds delightful, I'm very good at merengue... :D
11 Years Ago
Oooo, I would Love to see you, do that. ;)
I has to learn from one of my exes...but it'.. read moreOooo, I would Love to see you, do that. ;)
I has to learn from one of my exes...but it's fun, the music is fun...we can do hip hop...we can just lounge, to chill music...I'm flexible. :)
11 Years Ago
Hip Hop fast, and slow is just amazing... can do both LOL :D even popping, ha, you wouldn't believe... read moreHip Hop fast, and slow is just amazing... can do both LOL :D even popping, ha, you wouldn't believe... I'm very elastic LOL oh you're flexible too, well, than we have an "Elastic - Double "
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Oh, I'm not as limber anymore lol...I use to break dance growing up, so yeah, I can dance...but now,.. read moreOh, I'm not as limber anymore lol...I use to break dance growing up, so yeah, I can dance...but now, it's more chill...a slow dance? ;)
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Hey, you're still, LOL, oldie... ;) I'm old too.... let's keep that vibe alive. A slow foxtrot? ha! .. read moreHey, you're still, LOL, oldie... ;) I'm old too.... let's keep that vibe alive. A slow foxtrot? ha! okay, could be mixed with Rumba LOL
11 Years Ago
Oh those I would have to learn lol...I'm just admitting what I know and can do in my limited ways..... read moreOh those I would have to learn lol...I'm just admitting what I know and can do in my limited ways...salsa merengue, um, hip hop, we can mosh to rock lol jk :)
11 Years Ago
Salsa Merengue, we as Spanish do often...
Just tell me what you want to dance, and we do! ha!.. read moreSalsa Merengue, we as Spanish do often...
Just tell me what you want to dance, and we do! ha! I'm all-round :D older and fatter, but I will still rock ;)
11 Years Ago
Awww I don't judge you by weight...I've dated all types and shapes of ladies, my fave is the thick o.. read moreAwww I don't judge you by weight...I've dated all types and shapes of ladies, my fave is the thick ones. ;)
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Even if you did, lol, I didn't care :D I'm really a person who loves, and lives from the inside love.. read moreEven if you did, lol, I didn't care :D I'm really a person who loves, and lives from the inside love.
I'm fatter, like I was a dancer before, I'm not fat, at all, just cozy ;) love-handles you know :D haha... bourgondic good! LOL
11 Years Ago
Mmmm thick is nice, buts that's me. :)
11 Years Ago
It's me too, I can only have respect for men like you, you know one of the "Vatos locos" loved the ".. read moreIt's me too, I can only have respect for men like you, you know one of the "Vatos locos" loved the "culo gordo" the most ha! :D ;)
11 Years Ago
oh I'm giggling now! lol
11 Years Ago
They say here, more cushion for the pushin lol
I don't go for supermodels or models, I'.. read moreThey say here, more cushion for the pushin lol
I don't go for supermodels or models, I've dated some but they are boring...always looking at the mirror...shoot I should write about that tryst lol
11 Years Ago
that's just wrong! lol....but yes, women should have curves... and Eli is a Goddess. ;)
11 Years Ago
Ha Sis, Oh you know the Eli, but faithful :) to uhm... ;) and a life-enjoyer!!! I just love food!!.. read moreHa Sis, Oh you know the Eli, but faithful :) to uhm... ;) and a life-enjoyer!!! I just love food!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! let's make some lumpia's all together! :D en mi casa.... taco's borrito's fegita's all possible...
11 Years Ago
I love curves. FYI, EV Loves Curves. :)
11 Years Ago
Robbie, you're the goddes love, you have no idea how beautiful you are xo
11 Years Ago
Well you're in luck Ev... there's curves at Eli's place... and you're making the lumpia! ;)
11 Years Ago
Ev, I love your words, and for loving the curves, that's just so good!!!! you can shake hands with o.. read moreEv, I love your words, and for loving the curves, that's just so good!!!! you can shake hands with one vatos locos... ha!
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I'll make the mojitos! ;D
11 Years Ago
Answer the phone, Robbie...I'm calling the Goddess.
11 Years Ago
HAHAHA, Robbie don't answer BIATCH!!!! LOL ;) oh I'm giggling, it's a Sis thingy Ev ;) you will unde.. read moreHAHAHA, Robbie don't answer BIATCH!!!! LOL ;) oh I'm giggling, it's a Sis thingy Ev ;) you will understand :P I shall make Mojitos, para ti linda.....
11 Years Ago
Dame une besos, ahora!
11 Years Ago
Ha ha! I never answer my phone! Just ask P and Traci! LMAO!! Muahahahahahahahaha! ;D
11 Years Ago
Eli you crack me up!! Bwahahahahahaha! are we drunk yet?? O.O
11 Years Ago
Last call for Alcohol!
11 Years Ago
Damn my PC IS PHAT, it doesn't run so fast :D it's slow urgh, pardon me!!!!!!!! Muhahahahaha P and T.. read moreDamn my PC IS PHAT, it doesn't run so fast :D it's slow urgh, pardon me!!!!!!!! Muhahahahaha P and T, are the bomb!!!!!! they are like the vatos locos feminas! ;) Besitos para ti amores!!!! I had too much champagne, this eve Sis, I was tipsy, but then, the hot shower broke my pleasure LOL
11 Years Ago
It's been slow for me too. :(
11 Years Ago
Nite nite and let the bed bugs bite you in the @ss, JK lol
11 Years Ago
Wow! So glad you didn't break out the Spanish Eli! Whew!...I can barely keep up! lol
Champagne.. read moreWow! So glad you didn't break out the Spanish Eli! Whew!...I can barely keep up! lol
Champagne is nice, and so is vodka! ;)
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oh of course! ;)
11 Years Ago
Good night Ev... sweet dreams Casanova. xxxx
11 Years Ago
Have her cook, Spanish Paella, Robbie!
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I will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev, read moreI will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev,
@Robstar :D I can't either, I should be in the car, by now LOL, I'm just driving on WC, but not on the road ha..... Vodka, for Timo yep, thanks Sis ♥ Love yah! in Russian: Я люблю тебя ... "Я = Ja = I, люблю, Love, тебя you! ya lyublyu tebya sestra! (sis)
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I will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev, @R.. read moreI will give it a shot.... ;) of gin, or rum, it will run in no time watch it............ :D @ Ev, @Robstar :D I can't either, I should be in the car, by now LOL, I'm just driving on WC, but not on the road ha..... Vodka, for Timo yep, thanks Sis ♥.. Я люблю тебя means that I love you in Russian Robbie :D
I'll toast to that and to Timo ... I love you too!
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Thanks for the love Sis... he will appreciate it!!!! my darling! Keep you in touch ;) I'm off now, .. read moreThanks for the love Sis... he will appreciate it!!!! my darling! Keep you in touch ;) I'm off now, need to go! chat soon Sis xoxoxo :)
All that has ended will one day start anew and all that is new will someday end, that is the cycle of all. My friend, your smile is felt in this as are your remembered tears. For each Rose bloom that falls to the ground in a shower of petals shall re-bloom another, more beautiful in its place.
Very nicely done. Hope this finds you smiling.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
It did my dearest friend, and ever patient one! :) I appreciate my real friends on here... After all.. read moreIt did my dearest friend, and ever patient one! :) I appreciate my real friends on here... After all, I've told you, I should be dancing, like the old dancer in me... celebrate, the pain, the hurt... Be back to my roots. And you're a wonderful audiance my friend, you will find out when I'm back. :) ((Smiles)) from Arnhem to Texas ;)
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Spanish/Italian/Russian thinking... Audience ofcourse ... I meant :)
We must die a little to feel a lot... there is a certain pain in birth, as there is in death...
The two are inevitable.. life and death shall meet...
This is a story filled with heartbreak, and healing.. I believe your silence speaks louder than words...
Beautifully penned, Sis!~xoxo~
Posted 11 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
As unpredictable as I am, I came out of the shower, and oversaw your beautiful words again. Nobody l.. read moreAs unpredictable as I am, I came out of the shower, and oversaw your beautiful words again. Nobody like you understand the essence of my soul. THANK YOU!
Not even a man! Every man! :) It's sheer madness, the speed of reviewing, not to land the true feelings, traversing popularity, above what really matters .... that's what sisters are for. And be aware, I do all for my true friends, (you know they know). I am ever grateful of your patience, and Spanish blood line, who sees art to art Sis. If one is born, we all die a little, transient and fleeting life is.
I am one of the few who is always aware of, death, so I do not fear death. In fact, I will not regret, if it's my time. (this is not in depressed sense). As everyone interprets, more, as the light I've seen it before, and with him, sister with him ... :) he he... this was a death wedding ;) I celebrate xx
11 Years Ago
I know where your heart is, Sis...there is a rebirth!...
It is felt throughout this piece...th.. read moreI know where your heart is, Sis...there is a rebirth!...
It is felt throughout this piece...there is a beauty in death... painful as it may be...
I do see the merging of both...
You are a brilliant Poetess... write until there is no more ink.... Love you!~xoxo~
11 Years Ago
I shall... sigh, I shall, however I'm over tired, and hurt, I am a slave of the pen, until I truly d.. read moreI shall... sigh, I shall, however I'm over tired, and hurt, I am a slave of the pen, until I truly die. Love you too xx :) and may it not be on here, I shall post you forever! ;) sweetest!
11 Years Ago
P.S. I never saw you as a fearful woman... You are very strong... you emanate strength in your poetr.. read moreP.S. I never saw you as a fearful woman... You are very strong... you emanate strength in your poetry...That's why you inspire me!! xxxx
11 Years Ago
But what I lack you have, and what you lack I have lol, we fullfil eachother... When I start to writ.. read moreBut what I lack you have, and what you lack I have lol, we fullfil eachother... When I start to write erotic, my muses will be like: WTF????? and when you write classic yours are like HUH???? WHAT"s wrong with her LOL ;) Love you for that Sis, you're my fuel, light my all :)xxxx
11 Years Ago
Ha ha!! I love it!... you are too funny Eli... :D
So true... they are stunned! It's okay to ch.. read moreHa ha!! I love it!... you are too funny Eli... :D
So true... they are stunned! It's okay to change it up a bit. (he he)
Otherwise, it wouldn't be fun! XXXXX ;D
11 Years Ago
Yep agree, I should post some Erotic soon, on here LOL, ha! for I have many :D ;) well you know alre.. read moreYep agree, I should post some Erotic soon, on here LOL, ha! for I have many :D ;) well you know already lol... I know Sis, when you do Classics, I'm a little in love always with your writing!!!!!!!! for you rock at that too, (not many know), but I do. Love you hun!
11 Years Ago
awww Thanks Sis!...well your erotic even makes ME blush! LOL ;D
You shouldn't keep that to you.. read moreawww Thanks Sis!...well your erotic even makes ME blush! LOL ;D
You shouldn't keep that to yourself.... it's too hot girl! ;)
11 Years Ago
He he... sigh.... ;) you know what I am up to in the future, and I shall let you be the first to kno.. read moreHe he... sigh.... ;) you know what I am up to in the future, and I shall let you be the first to know........... xxxxx sweety and soulsis!
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I know... and I can't wait! lol ;D
don't keep us waiting too long... xxxxxx
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I won't love... I am balacing things out, and I know I never give up, on you guys, not ever on my se.. read moreI won't love... I am balacing things out, and I know I never give up, on you guys, not ever on my self either.... I shall come back stronger, soon :) xxxxxxxxxxxx I LOVE YOU ROBBIE!
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I know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force. read moreI know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force.
Love you too, Sis!!~xoxoxoxox~ :)
Nothing makes me dream of it too, (baby steps) LOL... sigh... I'm true to my heart, and the things, .. read moreNothing makes me dream of it too, (baby steps) LOL... sigh... I'm true to my heart, and the things, I've faced, loved, and lost.
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It doesn't happen overnight... but you are the best at whatever you put your heart into.. (((hugs)))
11 Years Ago
I know sweetie, thanks, such a heart of me to you again.... I know I walked in my hole hiking carre.. read moreI know sweetie, thanks, such a heart of me to you again.... I know I walked in my hole hiking carreer, I think 4 times to Rome, from my home, and Rome wasn't build in 1 day ;) I have patience, with myself, as I have with my dearest people, we have our own time Sis, always! :) love you xxxxxx