~ And when all is Silent

~ And when all is Silent, Elisa Laura, When heartbreak, transforms to Beauty. Europe, Classical, Mystery, Panta Rhei, Fate.

~ And when all is Silent

 

 

There trustfully enter,

Soft musical notes

Inside my mind,

From you for me to find;

 

You bring me further,

To other worlds,

Places, and, by then;

I need nothing more.

For I’m Zen.

 

You're holding hands,

And are swinging around me,

Like a carousel of love --

 

That smile on your face, is one

Of priceless beauty,

Beyond the attractive force

Of love, so -- invisible art to

My core.

 

Not even the smile

You wore, I saw you with

In my dreams,

But you looked different,

This time, with more heart beams...

 

I tear off my mourning veil,

And kiss your lips;

Fiery women hands,

Around your cheeks…

 

My nose smells your new skin;

My lips are kissing your face,

And we merge like the essentials of

Panta Rhei …

 

No more tears, of pain,

I shall combat! for what I’ve lost;

I will donate them, like;

Water to the Earth,

Let them sweetly fall,

On the ground beneath my feet

For growth to come,

 

There will be new born flows,

Of fresh wind, and water;

Where the resurrected

Fluidly may dance,

 

All shall be moving, and living,

Within the strength of true love,

Into new tiny creations, of

Life, to live for,

 

As in my new born heart.

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading, you just being here is enough for me,
But all critisism and reviews are always welcome. Enjoy, xx

~ When heartbreak, transforms to Beauty...

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

We must die a little to feel a lot... there is a certain pain in birth, as there is in death...
The two are inevitable.. life and death shall meet...
This is a story filled with heartbreak, and healing.. I believe your silence speaks louder than words...

Beautifully penned, Sis!~xoxo~

As unpredictable as I am, I came out of the shower, and oversaw your beautiful words again. Nobody like you understand the essence of my soul. THANK YOU!
Not even a man! Every man! :) It's sheer madness, the speed of reviewing, not to land the true feelings, traversing popularity, above what really matters .... that's what sisters are for. And be aware, I do all for my true friends, (you know they know). I am ever grateful of your patience, and Spanish blood line, who sees art to art Sis. If one is born, we all die a little, transient and fleeting life is.

I am one of the few who is always aware of, death, so I do not fear death. In fact, I will not regret, if it's my time. (this is not in depressed sense). As everyone interprets, more, as the light I've seen it before, and with him, sister with him ... :) he he... this was a death wedding ;) I celebrate xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know where your heart is, Sis...there is a rebirth!...
It is felt throughout this piece...there is a beauty in death... painful as it may be...
I do see the merging of both...

You are a brilliant Poetess... write until there is no more ink.... Love you!~xoxo~

I shall... sigh, I shall, however I'm over tired, and hurt, I am a slave of the pen, until I truly die. Love you too xx :) and may it not be on here, I shall post you forever! ;) sweetest!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

P.S. I never saw you as a fearful woman... You are very strong... you emanate strength in your poetry...That's why you inspire me!! xxxx

But what I lack you have, and what you lack I have lol, we fullfil eachother... When I start to write erotic, my muses will be like: WTF????? and when you write classic yours are like HUH???? WHAT"s wrong with her LOL ;) Love you for that Sis, you're my fuel, light my all :)xxxx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ha ha!! I love it!... you are too funny Eli... :D
So true... they are stunned! It's okay to change it up a bit. (he he)
Otherwise, it wouldn't be fun! XXXXX ;D

Yep agree, I should post some Erotic soon, on here LOL, ha! for I have many :D ;) well you know already lol... I know Sis, when you do Classics, I'm a little in love always with your writing!!!!!!!! for you rock at that too, (not many know), but I do. Love you hun!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

awww Thanks Sis!...well your erotic even makes ME blush! LOL ;D
You shouldn't keep that to yourself.... it's too hot girl! ;)

He he... sigh.... ;) you know what I am up to in the future, and I shall let you be the first to know........... xxxxx sweety and soulsis!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know... and I can't wait! lol ;D
don't keep us waiting too long... xxxxxx

I won't love... I am balacing things out, and I know I never give up, on you guys, not ever on my self either.... I shall come back stronger, soon :) xxxxxxxxxxxx I LOVE YOU ROBBIE!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force. read moreI know you will... you always do!
Nothing makes me happier than you coming back full force.
Love you too, Sis!!~xoxoxoxox~ :)

Nothing makes me dream of it too, (baby steps) LOL... sigh... I'm true to my heart, and the things, I've faced, loved, and lost.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It doesn't happen overnight... but you are the best at whatever you put your heart into.. (((hugs)))

I know sweetie, thanks, such a heart of me to you again.... I know I walked in my hole hiking carreer, I think 4 times to Rome, from my home, and Rome wasn't build in 1 day ;) I have patience, with myself, as I have with my dearest people, we have our own time Sis, always! :) love you xxxxxx

[Samuel Jack]

As always I enjoyed the dream aspects of your poem a lot.

I felt this piece has a different flow to your later poems.

Like the lines "of love so - invisible art to my core" I found the English in this line a bit awkward, also in the line "no more tears of pain, I shall combat!" I found the use of English here awkward, but my point is that I liked it.

Those awkward bits broke up the flow in a way that reminds me of Jazz music.

Dank u wel Elisa, your poems are always a dreamy treat.

Thank you so much again, I will work on those when I can.... Great you are so honest always :) see you soon.

[Kenaz]

I like this piece very much. My favorite part was 8th stanza "I will donate them, like water to the Earth". Such fire in your words. Simply beautiful my friend.

As for the critical review:
"I don't need nothing more"-is a double negative my friend. In English it is frowned upon. Just get rid of "don't" or "nothing" :)

"You're holding both my hands"-just invert the "my" and "both"

"If a carousel of love"-did you mean "in a carousel of love"?

Thank you very much my dear, for finding this one, somehow beautiful.... :) and many thanks too for the grammatical help, you're so right, on all... I didn't saw it, I shall change it after soccer tonight, and be back too for yours, with all pleasure... your help and review is appreciated.

On the last one, no more like: Like a carousel of love, but differently from out of Dutch it's hard to explain you that in English...

[Kenaz]

So you mean like "As if a carousel of love"? On a side note...you play soccer or watch it?

Yes, I think I meant that!!!! I watch soccer, I played it when I was a teen.... lol but shhhh don't tell that to everyone ;)

[Kenaz]

Haha, in America having soccer as your favorite sport is almost blasphemy...

Who sais it's my favorite sport? ;) an assumption, lol, anyhow, have to watch this match... enjoy your American football my friend.... ;) x

[Kenaz]

You misunderstand me :D Soccer is my favorite sport!

[Lover Of Words]

Your words are truely magnificent... simple yet so deep! Like an piece of art that brings things to life, yet leaves us wondering.... Simply tremendous

Thank you for your kind words Kelsey! :)

[Lover Of Words]

Simply deserved for an amazing writer like yourself

That's too much to me Kels lol.... I'm just me ;) but thanks a lot... (((HUGS)))

[Lover Of Words]

I know your just YOU but your still amazing in your own brightly light way... :)

You're a sweetie thankies :) so are you! take good care of yourself! xo

[Lover Of Words]

Doing my best dear living each day the best i can

You're doing so well.... (same here), hang in there sweet friend! x

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you same to you lovely one

[writing mojo]

this is the process of shedding one's former self for something anew, hearts don't break they quake the very foundation within systems and supports...that hold long enough until you have the strength again to absorb them through change ...great piece

Ah yes, they quake, well said! :) seeing Dali again there ;) Wow, so well said, you're brilliant lol

[Pax]

When I read this, its like a renewed feelings. Love - heartbreak - healing - moving on - in love again - ...the cycle goes in circles, cause it all comes back to being in love again, second time, third time, or being in love over and over to the same person... its an amusing piece, purely expressed with love so deep you flourish big sis,...

Oh love your review, you see so much in it... this is a dearly European "Death wedding" :) celebration, when some are gone, is the way, I love to live, not in sadness... :) You have a beautiful mind my Brother, how could it be otherwise? you're my brother lol :D thank you sooooooo much. I love you got the joy, and celebration out of it. xoxox :)

[Pax]

hugs, thank you, and you as well, you have such beautiful way in expressing your mind about love... and that's the right attitude to celebrate when someone is gone, because not all is gone, his/her memories lives on in everyone's heart... and you are most welcome big sis, always a pleasure to read your verses...

So beautifully said sweetie, yes, we live them still..... :) love and hugs, come by soon for more xx, so happy you enjoyed this one, :) be good, strong, and we are always together!

[Frieda P]

This is mesmerizing my sweet Eli, the hauntingly beautiful music is a perfect accent your lovely poetry, reminds me of a quote...feel better soon cara. xox

“He who does not understand your silence will probably not understand your words.”
― Elbert Hubbard

Grazie dal cuore mia cara.... si giusto! :D you're right, luv, that quote nails it on the head.... sometimes you can't anymore, you need a break, you're a beautiful person inside out Frieda. And after this week I try to be back... hospital visits, and some rest after, then I need to get inspierd again (I hope)... :) Love you darling, thanks for your unconditional support x

P.s. You and me know how Southern European weddings are ;-) he he... ♫♥

[Frieda P]

You are too kind bella, take your time, we will be waiting with open arms.
Always my sweet sister, avete tutto il mio cuore, I hope that's right. ;-) Baci! xo

That's more than right for me love, it's from il cuore, so what I can say more? bless you love. Mille baci xx

[joshua deathdealer]

Like a phoenix we rise from the ashes that is left behind. This is beautiful. xx

Thanks luv, really! :) I knew you as a few would understand the "The wedding of the dead" ;) xx till soon, I'm powering my strengths :)

[Deuces]

I've missed your writing. Reading your hypnotic words while listening to Mary J. Blige's "Love No Limit" is quite the trip!

The blood in your veins is always connected to your pen. Loved the way this ended with renewal. Awesome.

Thank you dear, I've missed you too :( I shall explain all soon.... promise! so good to have you by again, :)

[Lydia Shutter]

To love again is to be reborn....every relationship allows us to show sides of ourselves we were not even aware of....till the right person drew out certain emotions. The world is reborn after winter leaves....so will you be reborn when the darkness lifts and the beauty surrounds you again. Beautifully written poetry, Elisa. Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you so much my dearest. I treasure your valued thoughts, with me every day! :) They bring me happiness.... xxx & Knuffels my friend :)