~ The Cottage Garden

~ The Cottage Garden, Traveling, Cottage, E.L. Elisa Laura, September inspirations, Nature, Green, Rest...

~ The Cottage Garden 

 

Here in my Cottage, 

On  September mornings,

The squirrels are searching

       For fallen acorns from the trees,

       There is a mystic beauty that

       Shines so softly through the green,

There is a mist that swirls the rain,

From out of the undergrowth,

There is no time with me around

       I smell the fresh clean air,

       Where I come to rest, and sleep,

       There is no pain, stress or fear,

       Within this area, where I hear the lyre,

Long corn fields surround me

Like arms of the forgotten fields,

Days, and nights so quiet,

Love travels with me, 

For the richer yields

     There where I find peace of mind,

     There where absence is kind

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

09/14/2013   

 

Author's Note

A write from out of my beautiful Cottage, here in the North,
I'm having a wonderful time, in all rest, and nature...
There is more to come, within the time... Enjoy, xx



Photo made by me.
September 2013

Reviews

[David Scott]

I enjoyed the flow of this poem Eli. Very relaxed and open feeling. If I read it or loud , my voice lifts... Wonderful tie in with the rhyming lines as well.
The poem feels like a lucky accident of a perfect moment. Organic emotion captured and fed to the soul with you lovely assembling of words into thoughts and reflections.
Thank you for sharing your little hideaway with us.

This was my cottage garden, of the cottage I stayed in a while back, alone to write. I played piano, and came to rest, it was beautiful. You're so welcome, it's my pleasure always, beautiful words, from you my dear friend, thanks for the support on this one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reading this poem took me there and gave me the same peace...

nicely described to get us to the spot.

must be so serene.

Thank you dearly my sweet friend. When you come by, the sun always shines.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a passage into your heavenly wonderland...and I cherished every line, for you have a gift of transcending peace and light into your art...

Although we cannot be there, you still manage to bring the spirit of your special place to us... for that we are blessed to have envisioned the atmosphere of Pure Joy...Bliss...

This is breathtaking... serenity at it's finest!...lovely pic Sis~xoxo~:)

Oh love, when I was there, I had goosebumps, when you came by, just could watch your review for a minute, and then I didn't had reach, wow, Sis... you always nail it on the head. I so so missed you! reality is kicking my a*s again, and I need a new travel LOL.... ;) you know what I mean :) love you and thank you for all you do! my fuel! xxxxxxxx

[Everett DeValle]

Wonderful, Elisa...I lived vicariously through your poem...I love nature...excellently described.

Thank you so much sweet friend, your friendship is golden xx

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome, Elisa...I adore you. :)

And I adore you Ev, hugs...

[Tania]

i loved it ! it was magical and very creative

Thank you so much xx

[Pryde Foltz]

A moment of Zen. Thank you, Elisa. You shared that cottage with us all.

Thank you sweetheart. When you are here, I'm always happy! I shall return the favor soon! can't wait... xo

[Lydia Shutter]

You have magically transported us to such a serene place with your stunning imagery, Elisa! I could see the squirrels scurrying around for the acorns and see the corn plants swaying in the breeze. May you enjoy every moment in this Utopian surrounding. Thank you for sharing it with us. Lydi**

Dank je wel lieverd, voor je mooie woorden, als jij langskomt, schijnt de zon... :) Ik ben snel terug, hoop volgende week! xxx en knuffels!

[Lydia Shutter]

Geniet van de warmte van de zon en de schoonheid van de tuinen. Heb een veilige reis naar huis. Knuffels, Lydi**

Het is hier prachtig, Ik zal je meer foto's sturen, in de prive mail, ook van het huis... ik heb nog nooit zo'n mooi begin van de herfst ervaren... Heel veel liefs, en tot snel knuffels Eli xo :)

[Joe Palmer]

This is so elegantly beautiful. Really enjoyed it!

Thank you so much Joe, for your time, and nice words on my little poem. :) truly appreciated.