~ To Daydream

~ To Daydream, Elisa Laura, Free Style Poetry, Fantasy, Love, My Second World, New Worlds

~ To Daydream

 

 

It seems to be my second world,

Only I can enter,

 

And maybe you will too;

Yes, it’s hard to trace,

 

At least I see four different

Dilapidated chambers each time,

 

I close my eyes, and there is maybe more

To sketch, and catch…

 

I live in different worlds,

In different places,

 

And I cross over at them 

At day, or night…

There is always a new little

 

World behind my eyelids

I catch up on, I embrace.

 

And I still hope

To find you there;

 

However a mind and

Especially a mind like mine,

 

Can be so terribly

In denial to that.

 

So it makes me blind,

All blind to find,

And that makes me a searcher.

 

However I saw all,

There is a rule to nature

In my tiny brain,

That flies temporary,

Around them who reflect me,

 

This gravity of love

Is what is normal,

It makes my wings to fight,

But also down to earth…

 

But I lived it, and when

It should be gone by light,

It returns for it is profound love,

And it’s not manipulated.

 

It must be European love...

Almost too heavy to carry-

 

And that without,

I even dreamt for it,

 

I wished for it to be as

Normal, and as light,

To take it forever with me;

 

But alas, it rests on my back,

Like a heavy sin;

Though I am strong enough to carry it;

To suffer it, and to listen to it,

 

So after all I come to

The conclusion;

 

It is so beautiful,

To just feel-

The weight of love,

 

So I can see you

Through a single touch…

When I turn around,

Even if it’s for a second

I do not care,

 

Love is flickering in my mind,

It always does, It’s a bond love

And I have.

 

And then it becomes the blind spot

 

The ever returning blind spot

Of transient beauty;

I know, I’ve entered

The real dream world

By then;

 

Where weight, transforms to light…

 

~ Elisa Laura

09/07/2013

Author's Note

Thank you for reading,

I'm happy to be able, to post now and then a poem from out of my holidays,
I totally understand, when you don't review, for I can't always return the favor,
But you my precious friend, or new visitor,
Thanks for reading and being here, is just enough for me.

Enjoy... xx with love,
Eli

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

This transcendent realm, this universe outside the universe, where love is gravity, and the sun, and the moon, pulling and shining and controlling the tides that lap the waters of life against the shores of our existence. This world, this paradise of profundity, you must protect it, yes, but do not deny the splendour to all souls. We must share our love, for if we do not, what is it worth? Excellent poem, Elisa :)

Thank you dearly sweetie for this brilliant review.... I wonder often, is it you? I have much to speak in reality to? ;) I think you know the answer.... :) we must.... we are magnetic!

[J. J. Nightingale]

I've sat on mountain tops
Slept in valleys low
I've flown across the widest sea
But the old home place.. was my best dream..

The weight of Love .. Good line !!

Beautiful ... Jasmine xoxo ♥♥♥

Oh Jazzy, what a beautiful review darling. Thank you so much ♥ xoxo :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Little Dove .. ♥

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"just to feel the weight of love" like that line.

yes, love comes to us, often in daydreams, and with them we can travel as far as we want to...and we can trust.

nicely done..

jacob

Exactly dear friend, you got this poem, very good! Be back soon for you!

[Boranus]

i like your stanzas very neat and orderly.
I like the "world behind my eyelids" , it's true

"where weight transforms into light" , very poignant, I understand it clearly.
i like your writing a lot, I get it, I get you

Wow, and that means the world to me, for not very many do.... ;) thanks for your time, and review Boranus! truly appreciated!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a stunning way to explain your daydreams and to talk about the weight of love. Love can carry many great emotions and it can make us feel an array of emotions.

Thank you so much lovely one... it's true. It's all true, what you say here. I can't agree more... sigh!

[Poetic Beauty]

Daydreams are a way for us to cope with the unpleasantries of life. Its a momentary escape from the madness.

So true... I daydream from when I'm little, my parents thought it was a phase then ;) but I never stopped... and I shall daydream forever I think. I'm ever grateful to you my friend, I try to catch up, in between my travels, but I can't promise.. hope to be here fully within two weeks. Much love... keep on writing your beautiful poetry!

[Poetic Beauty]

I still daydream myself. That is where my writing ideas come from. One day I am going to sit down and finish editing the 100,000 word book I have written. I have a already started the second book as well. I am terrible at editing and it frustrates me. I now have a basic college English reference guide book to help me. Yay

Haha same here, oh I have still so much editing to do, over the more than 1000 poems in total, if not more I've written. I lost counting... and just now I tried to do some poems, I have on WC, but WC is slow, and not working well, (at my part of the world), glitches... and then I do it on another moment... I get you on that, time is the issue with me... oh how good! :) can't you pass it over to me? lol it's always good to talk to you PB :D

[Poetic Beauty]

My boyfriend found it for free on craiglist and brought it home for me.

[Everett DeValle]

I know at times, I'm not the best reviewer because I feel the poems...this is spectacular poetry, Elisa...the emotions you conveyed from your amorous heart...the European feel of it all...nicely done. :)

Thank you... so much Ev... :) just for you to be here, is enough dear friend.

[Everett DeValle]

Awe, you are very welcome, Elisa...I enjoy reading your work. :)

That warms my little heart :)

[Everett DeValle]

I'm glad I can warm it. :)

I'm so glad we are good friends! :) you always do! x

[Everett DeValle]

It warms my heart reading your poems, Elisa. :)