~ To Daydream

~ To Daydream, Elisa Laura, Free Style Poetry, Fantasy, Love, My Second World, New Worlds

~ To Daydream

 

 

It seems to be my second world,

Only I can enter,

 

And maybe you will too;

Yes, it’s hard to trace,

 

At least I see four different

Dilapidated chambers each time,

 

I close my eyes, and there is maybe more

To sketch, and catch…

 

I live in different worlds,

In different places,

 

And I cross over at them 

At day, or night…

There is always a new little

 

World behind my eyelids

I catch up on, I embrace.

 

And I still hope

To find you there;

 

However a mind and

Especially a mind like mine,

 

Can be so terribly

In denial to that.

 

So it makes me blind,

All blind to find,

And that makes me a searcher.

 

However I saw all,

There is a rule to nature

In my tiny brain,

That flies temporary,

Around them who reflect me,

 

This gravity of love

Is what is normal,

It makes my wings to fight,

But also down to earth…

 

But I lived it, and when

It should be gone by light,

It returns for it is profound love,

And it’s not manipulated.

 

It must be European love...

Almost too heavy to carry-

 

And that without,

I even dreamt for it,

 

I wished for it to be as

Normal, and as light,

To take it forever with me;

 

But alas, it rests on my back,

Like a heavy sin;

Though I am strong enough to carry it;

To suffer it, and to listen to it,

 

So after all I come to

The conclusion;

 

It is so beautiful,

To just feel-

The weight of love,

 

So I can see you

Through a single touch…

When I turn around,

Even if it’s for a second

I do not care,

 

Love is flickering in my mind,

It always does, It’s a bond love

And I have.

 

And then it becomes the blind spot

 

The ever returning blind spot

Of transient beauty;

I know, I’ve entered

The real dream world

By then;

 

Where weight, transforms to light…

 

~ Elisa Laura

09/07/2013

Author's Note

Thank you for reading,

I'm happy to be able, to post now and then a poem from out of my holidays,
I totally understand, when you don't review, for I can't always return the favor,
But you my precious friend, or new visitor,
Thanks for reading and being here, is just enough for me.

Enjoy... xx with love,
Eli

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

This transcendent realm, this universe outside the universe, where love is gravity, and the sun, and the moon, pulling and shining and controlling the tides that lap the waters of life against the shores of our existence. This world, this paradise of profundity, you must protect it, yes, but do not deny the splendour to all souls. We must share our love, for if we do not, what is it worth? Excellent poem, Elisa :)

Thank you dearly sweetie for this brilliant review.... I wonder often, is it you? I have much to speak in reality to? ;) I think you know the answer.... :) we must.... we are magnetic!

[Lover Of Words]

Elisa. My dear
I have read many of your writes but this one is quite special and has alot of depth in this one. Complex but still understandable and real within your words. This one Is one of my favorites of yours. You have a way of pulling the reader in and giving us all goosebumps. This is out reaching the rest as I read it. Applause to you my dear for yet another breathtaking way with words. Love it.

I'm so grateful to you, from out of my cottage right now, I can't thank you enough... i'm high in the North, and I miss home, same time I don't miss it... it will be forever a miss, within a travelers heart... (never happy at one place LOL). but hey, you Kels, are, such a clever young woman, you feel, see rich beyond many from your age, and I so love you my friend, for who you are, and what you say, and notice. I can't thank you enough. Love Elis xxx miss you sweetie

[Lover Of Words]

And I love you for whom you are as well my dear. Thanks for helping me see the light within your magical words. Kels. Loves you with all my heart. You are magical woman in may wats

So are you to me, deary. Kelsey, my young and most talented muse on WC. :) Keep on writing, you're wise, clever, and beyond your age......... love you hun! x

[Lover Of Words]

I promise I will continue my work.

I can't wait, read all of you so far, and made my reviews, in spe-already, then I always come back at least 5 times, to re-read, feel, see, sniff, and love... :) so my comments can change, ya know, with me nothing is superficial, for I hate reviewers like that... it can be lived deeper always... if not, it's lived deep too, but simple, for it can be a treasure too, (learning to accept simple) more. (I'm also only human hehehe).. love and till soon sweetheart. Sleep well, it's late at yours, I've had too much afternoon naps, so I'm ok. ;) but must go now, I have a great day in the planning, in the sun of this beautiful fall here..... love and hugs, pop in soon I hope, I will log off now, xxx

[Lover Of Words]

Yes it is time to hit the shut eye for me. Love your sportive words

Sleep so ever sweet love, you need it, I'm around always, if not now, I'm tomorrow, and always, after... x love and goodnight cuddles!

[Lover Of Words]

Hope your day is just as beautiful as you are

[Balkaran Sidhu]

well structured poem...beautiful poem...interesting girl that u portrayed in d poem

Thank you so much my friend :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Hi Sis, how are you, hope you like my abstract interpretation of your poem, hugs.

The character in the poem describes that is not easy for her to let persons into her life as she is very picky to who she invests her valuable time with, If they are able to share her same dreams she is willing to open her door.

Is described how she is careful with her valuable creativity because most persons souls lack ingenuity and fail to travel to different worlds through daydreaming.

Morning Sis, thanks for your abstract interpretation, I always enjoy your interessant interpretations... Hugs, all is well, I'm still traveling... Tis beautiful over here... Till soon

[Sasha]

Wow ..

Beautiful !

Keep writing !

Thank you so much again sweet Sasha, be back soon for you!

[Sasha]

your welcome ! :)

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Another wondrous portrait you paint in your angst and passion. This piece travels through me...very emotional and mesmerizing. Excellante!

Sigh, thank you so much my beautiful friend... I love to take you with me, through my travels, and mind travels... :) be back soon for your artworks, after my road trip xx :)

[Chris]

Here it's a Monday morn... a light rain mist, cool breath of fall sunrise. and soft thoughts following yours. You take care Eli, be safe.

Chris

Thank you dear Chris, here the Sky is grey, some sun wants to peek through, it's 60.8 F and 16 C. many birds along the road, it's beautiful! A real September feeling... and driving more up North. Thank you Chris, you too! have a wonderful week. - E.

[Plume de flamme]

What a fabulous poem. Really a splendid write. I'll be back for more.

Well thank you, for your words, take your time, I'm traveling the next two weeks, so I'll be around later, fully again, your visit means enough... And your word choice sounds random and familiar.

[Plume de flamme]

Wink and a nudge.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The weight of love may be heavy, but worth the strife if only for a moment of pure bliss, pure light...
This is so exquisite.... so enchanting! Your words are luminescent, full of hope to see the light of love again... Breathtaking write, Sis! Divine!~xoxo~:)

"So I can see you

Through a single touch…

When I turn around,

Even if it’s for a second

I do not care,



Love is flickering in my mind,

It always does, It’s a bond love

And I have.



And then it becomes the blind spot



The ever returning blind spot

Of transient beauty;

I know, I’ve entered

The real dream world

By then;



Where weight, transforms to light…"~ I love the way this whispers softly to my soul... xx

Thank you so much, for saying this Sis.... this was a very deep one, a personal write... you quote the lines, here perfectly. I mean with those, I had my eyes closed, and only sketched... later, I saw the words out of my own drawing :) Thank you so much for being here, I can't wait to delve into your latest ones! I am so proud of you love! xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

No hurry, and certainly no worries, Sis... take your time and relax!
I come here to enjoy your work of art... and will continue to... Love you!~xoxo~:)

That means the world to me, and that's unconditionally love and sisterhood.
You're a true gem love. xoxo :) will send you postcards!!! :) from where I am!

[Pryde Foltz]

Ah....yeah!!! Superb, Elisa. Really this one of my favourite love poems ever. You tell not tale of lace a roses but longing, compulsion with the hope of getting it right. Love is a heavy thing to carry but running from it not really an option.

At least I see four different
Dilapidated chambers each time,

These two lines set the standard and it is maintain from there.

Thank you so much dear, your words mean a lot to me! I'm happy you enjoyed this one. xx

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, I believe love is always flickering in your mind. You have a romantic soul, Elisa! Your words are lyrical and lovely. Your imagination must be a lovely place to wander. Thank you for allowing us to peek in on your images. There's no place like home, though, is there? When one realizes that, once has found serenity! My friend, the melody you chose to accompany your words is a haunting one. The entire package is a winner! Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you dearly sweet Lydi, when you come by, you always make me happy and smiling! :) heel veel knuffels!! xoxox