~ To Daydream

~ To Daydream, Elisa Laura, Free Style Poetry, Fantasy, Love, My Second World, New Worlds

~ To Daydream

 

 

It seems to be my second world,

Only I can enter,

 

And maybe you will too;

Yes, it’s hard to trace,

 

At least I see four different

Dilapidated chambers each time,

 

I close my eyes, and there is maybe more

To sketch, and catch…

 

I live in different worlds,

In different places,

 

And I cross over at them 

At day, or night…

There is always a new little

 

World behind my eyelids

I catch up on, I embrace.

 

And I still hope

To find you there;

 

However a mind and

Especially a mind like mine,

 

Can be so terribly

In denial to that.

 

So it makes me blind,

All blind to find,

And that makes me a searcher.

 

However I saw all,

There is a rule to nature

In my tiny brain,

That flies temporary,

Around them who reflect me,

 

This gravity of love

Is what is normal,

It makes my wings to fight,

But also down to earth…

 

But I lived it, and when

It should be gone by light,

It returns for it is profound love,

And it’s not manipulated.

 

It must be European love...

Almost too heavy to carry-

 

And that without,

I even dreamt for it,

 

I wished for it to be as

Normal, and as light,

To take it forever with me;

 

But alas, it rests on my back,

Like a heavy sin;

Though I am strong enough to carry it;

To suffer it, and to listen to it,

 

So after all I come to

The conclusion;

 

It is so beautiful,

To just feel-

The weight of love,

 

So I can see you

Through a single touch…

When I turn around,

Even if it’s for a second

I do not care,

 

Love is flickering in my mind,

It always does, It’s a bond love

And I have.

 

And then it becomes the blind spot

 

The ever returning blind spot

Of transient beauty;

I know, I’ve entered

The real dream world

By then;

 

Where weight, transforms to light…

 

~ Elisa Laura

09/07/2013

Author's Note

Thank you for reading,

I'm happy to be able, to post now and then a poem from out of my holidays,
I totally understand, when you don't review, for I can't always return the favor,
But you my precious friend, or new visitor,
Thanks for reading and being here, is just enough for me.

Enjoy... xx with love,
Eli

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

This transcendent realm, this universe outside the universe, where love is gravity, and the sun, and the moon, pulling and shining and controlling the tides that lap the waters of life against the shores of our existence. This world, this paradise of profundity, you must protect it, yes, but do not deny the splendour to all souls. We must share our love, for if we do not, what is it worth? Excellent poem, Elisa :)

Thank you dearly sweetie for this brilliant review.... I wonder often, is it you? I have much to speak in reality to? ;) I think you know the answer.... :) we must.... we are magnetic!

[Half Dream]

"It is so beautiful,
To just feel-
The weight of love,"

Oh my,such a beautiful line! A brilliant write. I don't think that word is even enough.. Thank you for enlightening my soul with your words. :)

Merhaba Herseyim, thank you so much for being here, your words mean the world to me.... :) truly .... hope your afternoon is awesome overthere.... xx

[Half Dream]

Haha! Merhaba, It's an honor sweetheart. I am doing great sweetie. *hugggggggs*

:D Merhaba & Gunaydin :D (here) lol..... so so glad you do hun! wishing you ever so great and happy !!!! Optum!!!! xx

[David Scott]

Now I must object a little... ;)
"European love"? Hmmm?
I think you will find it is similar all over the world and in every age and culture.
Still, it feels nice to think we feel something completely special to our own time and place.
I will continue to day dream along with you dear Eli.
A lovely state of mind indeed!

LOL, that sounds maybe a little as if I was generalizing, but, belief me, Europeans, are living (in general) NOT ALL.... ;) heavier, on many ways, see it as a compliment to you guys.... :) I don't think it's special, as I said, in the poem; "I wished for it to be as
Normal, and as light," lol ;) YOU my friend, please do... :) this was a poem, I'll tell you, I saw/felt before I went to my cottage, I told you about. And the view from out of my cottage window, as this window in the picture, were somehow, very close to eachother, (so there I did my future too), as you do often lol xx thanks so much dear David.

[RienKelsoCinema]

Love free-form. It did feel very exciting but mello at the same time. I like range of emotions you used, I kind of got that you were kind of sad, then mad, then relieved. I don't know if that's what you were thinking but that's what I got. In the beginning I felt some sort of claustrophobic tendencies in the choice of words, maybe as a means of escape. But then near the end when you have the feeling of relief, maybe it is you finally happy to be free and liberated with falling in love. Or then again, I could entirely wrong. Haha!

And that's the brain of a fantastic friend, and cinema-maker :D you instantly recognize the way you people think it's beautiful. Thanks for this most detailed review, I love the way you have discribed it..... ;) really, and that this came out of you out of my write.... thanks bud.

[writing mojo]

if this is free verse, it's dept is soul cost payed in such word transactions,
a dept to which skin has but the understanding of touch and never feeling....amazing piece

Thank you my friend for your beautiful words on this one... :)

[Jack...]

This is beautiful my dear friend. "it is so beautiful, to just feel - the weight of love." Simply gorgeous.

Thanks my sweet friend xoxo :) just let it be.... "right there" yes, sometimes.... thanks for being my unconditional support, I feel guilty I haven't returned anything yet, but I'm reading you, and when better, a bit, I will. :)

[Horizon K.]

... Where weight transforms to light... I love that closing... And those final lines... love, the ever returning blind spot, the real dream world... Yes, no matter where our fantasies take us into our skies, profound love and the truth of us that it carries will always be there, the anchor, yet it is light enough to allow us to be the dreamers we are... Beautiful poem, this daydream of yours sis...
xoxo
Horizon

You're my true blood you know that? you always understand me as true family. :) Love you Sis. We are such dreamers, people often do not understand brains like ours... ;) Your presence make me so happy, I need it before my hospital appointments... thank you so much! :) xx

[Horizon K.]

We are true family Elisa... The experiences and feelings we share... and history... I would not be surprised if our trees did indeed cross...But we are such dreamers, I am dreaming very very big today, and having dreams for you too, that everything goes well for you. Love you dearly my Sis!!
Big hugs!!! xoxo

We are love, we are.... we have the same blood-line, and history, it's amazing how much we are connected, to that part.... I had a dream lately, (have 7 at night) if not more, and I saw you, smiling, across the sakura tree. I know we will meet one day! ( a traveler as me, is never finished ), I will see the world... in all layers. Love you so much dear, it went well today, just very tired after all they did to me.... but had a good sleep :) I had to think a bit of myself :( first, and when my strength is back I will be a 200% online again... Hope all is well with you too, mail me on my private mail always ok? if I'm slow as a turtle, I will read you there... Love you sweetie xxx happy sleep, and bright morning after (when you read this) xxxxxxxxx

[anxia]

This is very beautiful. I love day dreaming and can connect with these lines. 'At day, or night…
There is always a new little' SO true. I loved those lines very much.

Thank you again very much for your support sweet anxia, I won't forget, things are bad right now in my tiny life, but as soon as I have time, and good health, I shall come back for you and the others.... x

[anxia]

You are welcome Elisa. Aww, its totally okay. You take care of your health. Stay strong. And god bless you.

[PurpleQuartz]

The imagination you used in this piece is so bewitching!! You have written of daydreams and different worlds with a great depth and understanding.

Thank you always and ever my sweetie. Your words I treasure always with me, and I'm truly sorry for not being so much online... there's a lot going on, I'm there for you, just wait me...

[SHEEMA HUQ]

What a lady of leisure, with fervent pleasures, to dedicate time to daydream in adult life.....and I like the subtle analysis in your lines, very nice writing :)

Sheema thank you dear. Really. I'm a dreamer, day and night, and from I was little, I shall never heal of being in my second world, and maybe further.... so lovely (((YOU)))

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Delightful free style poem! I always like to let myself daydream with you, our worlds between reality and fantasy is really so rich on symbols and many doors to be opened...I feel attracted by these obscure images, who can have many possible lives, and the travel starts just You/ me close your/ my eyes..Your traveling inside mind is so connected with love and light..no matter through which ways it goes...That how we are so connected too! :)

:: nour ::
:: September-013 ::

Thank you dear, again, this was a very special one, I did wrote from out of all rest, and pre-visions I had for where I would landed up, the next week.... and it was a cottage I did expected in my travel to the highly north. And the pic I choosed here, was close to the first vision, the real pictures of my cottage I shall share with you soon... for you will see simularities in the details, always. Sis your words, are close, to me, as close as you are to me... 09/17 was the date I sended you something ;-) We are ever so connected, I'm curious how long it takes from Nortern Europe to Bulgaria... (with the post).... HUGS!!!! love you ♥

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, I`m so happy for that! and I`m impatient to receive it! :) Be sure it will take long time...here we are like in Africa :) (and waiting for your lovely photos!)

The last time I sended a post-card to the Ukrain, and to Russia, it arrived in 1 week... I'm curious too :D love and hug, till soon xx