~ To Daydream

~ To Daydream, Elisa Laura, Free Style Poetry, Fantasy, Love, My Second World, New Worlds

~ To Daydream

 

 

It seems to be my second world,

Only I can enter,

 

And maybe you will too;

Yes, it’s hard to trace,

 

At least I see four different

Dilapidated chambers each time,

 

I close my eyes, and there is maybe more

To sketch, and catch…

 

I live in different worlds,

In different places,

 

And I cross over at them 

At day, or night…

There is always a new little

 

World behind my eyelids

I catch up on, I embrace.

 

And I still hope

To find you there;

 

However a mind and

Especially a mind like mine,

 

Can be so terribly

In denial to that.

 

So it makes me blind,

All blind to find,

And that makes me a searcher.

 

However I saw all,

There is a rule to nature

In my tiny brain,

That flies temporary,

Around them who reflect me,

 

This gravity of love

Is what is normal,

It makes my wings to fight,

But also down to earth…

 

But I lived it, and when

It should be gone by light,

It returns for it is profound love,

And it’s not manipulated.

 

It must be European love...

Almost too heavy to carry-

 

And that without,

I even dreamt for it,

 

I wished for it to be as

Normal, and as light,

To take it forever with me;

 

But alas, it rests on my back,

Like a heavy sin;

Though I am strong enough to carry it;

To suffer it, and to listen to it,

 

So after all I come to

The conclusion;

 

It is so beautiful,

To just feel-

The weight of love,

 

So I can see you

Through a single touch…

When I turn around,

Even if it’s for a second

I do not care,

 

Love is flickering in my mind,

It always does, It’s a bond love

And I have.

 

And then it becomes the blind spot

 

The ever returning blind spot

Of transient beauty;

I know, I’ve entered

The real dream world

By then;

 

Where weight, transforms to light…

 

~ Elisa Laura

09/07/2013

Author's Note

Thank you for reading,

I'm happy to be able, to post now and then a poem from out of my holidays,
I totally understand, when you don't review, for I can't always return the favor,
But you my precious friend, or new visitor,
Thanks for reading and being here, is just enough for me.

Enjoy... xx with love,
Eli

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

This transcendent realm, this universe outside the universe, where love is gravity, and the sun, and the moon, pulling and shining and controlling the tides that lap the waters of life against the shores of our existence. This world, this paradise of profundity, you must protect it, yes, but do not deny the splendour to all souls. We must share our love, for if we do not, what is it worth? Excellent poem, Elisa :)

Thank you dearly sweetie for this brilliant review.... I wonder often, is it you? I have much to speak in reality to? ;) I think you know the answer.... :) we must.... we are magnetic!

[sharonlee]

Such rich poignant longing and beauty in each line... swept me away... how well I know this wandering into translucent worlds that often seem more real than the world beyond the window. Beautifully rendered.

Heavy sigh, sweet friend, I know you do, and can... that makes me smile, it's a world of our own... thank you so very much! I love your words always xx

[sharonlee]

I always feel your poetic thoughts Elisa ♥

I know you do... words are not even needed ;-) ♥ I do yours too! x

[sharonlee]

Sharing builds bridges for others to cross into new worlds ♥

So so true... I'm smiling, there is a open channel, when I write, and I feel that one with you always too! ♥

[Rossen]

the most beautiful poems leave me too stunned to review
100/100

Thank you for being speachless, Rossen, I appreciate you my friend. :)

[MOON]

" To sleep perchance to dream" , lovely the places we go ... Lovely as usual.

Moon, Ek hou van jou lieverd, kus na jou land... Ek is gou terug vir jou geskrifte xx

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh the places we can go in our dreams,The dragons we can slay.Absolutely lovely:P

Thank you so much VidyaVista dear :D you make me smile, and I appreciate your words xoxo :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I feel so royal with this name you have given me lol.You can't ever take it back it's mine I say haha.You are welcome my dear friend:D

Haha lol, I think that's right, It's a true Queenie or Princess kind of name. :D haha "DEAL"! and I love it!!

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol.........:)

[Troy Henson]

As dreamers of life we often find ourselves trapped. Your words in this are inspirational and heart felt to us all as writers.

Pen on my friend.
Regards
Troy

Thank you so much for your encouriging review, my friend. I shall pen on :) Eli x

[NeiL ArandA]

Elisa please allow me for a moment to enter this " another world " of yours that I so often traverse as a child, in my naive and feeble mind...and even until now .It has become my escape. My secret hiding place when life reality is way too painful or way too overwhelming for me to accept. Somehow in this other world failures becomes a possibility. And we so often time travel back in the far away corners of our memory lane. Where " What If and Regrets " sometimes intersect . To rewrite history of what we could have been and what we should have done and what we could have become. Don't we all mourned for a love that never transpired. And love that was forever lost in a whirlwind of happenstance...
This piece reminds of a famous classic movie played by Christopher Reeves " Somewhere In Time " ...

Thank you for your beautiful words in this review Neil, I so appreciate it what you got (personally for and to you) out of it... thank you, really. Your words are full of empathy. I appreciate you my sweet friend xoxo :)

P.s and I allow you... you're welcome anytime in my Second World.

[NeiL ArandA]

I'm a regular guest there ...You're always welcome

I have let made a key for you. :) Mi mondo e su mondo ;) thanks again :)

[Abeer until dawn]

How Beautiful .. I've read it and re read it numerous times, i just adore it !
It takes me to another dimension where it's easy to drop all that relates to the heaviness of reality ... although it's not easy to meet your bare soul at that level and portrait it very well, your words made it easy to feel, imagine and explore the very best moment you choose to capture ...

I love this creative piece,

What a wonderful words, and you describe it pretty well... I'm very thankful you came by on this one. It was a raw piece.

[joshua deathdealer]

Wow. I am floored with this gracious poem. So beautiful and truthful about this burden we as dreamers and artist bear. To be honest I don't know if I have ever read anything that comes this close to the core of the matter as your words do here. Painting yourself in the lines.. in the depths. And during these moments we truly see one another as we are and where. No matter how fleeting we hold dearly to this. BEAUTIFUL!!!!!! xo

Oh Joshua, I'm stunned by the depth of your words.... you have worded just here what I couldn't.... sigh :) thank you with whole my heart xx

[joshua deathdealer]

Rereading...can't sleep blah

I wished for it to be as
Normal, and as light,
To take it forever with me;

But alas, it rests on my back,
Like a heavy sin;
Though I am strong enough to carry it;
To suffer it, and to listen to it,

So after all I come to
The conclusion;

It is so beautiful,
To just feel-
The weight of love,

Dear Elisa. I am so glad your back...I have starved for these words..

Oooh I don't know what to say, thank you for the love and friendship dear, many hugs, for another wonderful comment coming from you xoxo