~ In Love

~ In Love, E.L. Writes from my travel, (all alone)... Portugal, love, aware, here, now, me...

      

~ In Love

 

 

Every night, I look again

       Into the freckled sky,

             I think I shall never heal;

      Of being in love so deeply,

Surrounded by your love,

      And the sparkles of mist

            You spray softly on my skin,

      Yet, I remember; I was only

And alone, dreaming

      The sky high, in Portugal,

             And I must move on. Yes.

      Even though I will come

Back to you every night,

      So we can sleep together.

             As we do dream together

A skyline of our own...

 

             09/04/2013

           ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm traveling, writing, living and loving... :)
Be back soon on full signal... wifi, reach, and reviews, catching up,
In between my holliday's.
Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Jack...]

I am in awe of your talent. Your words bloom on the page like morning glories at dawn's first light. Your fingertips are love and they spread deep affection to all who read. Each verse is as a soft woolen blanket wrapping me tighty and keeping me warm. More beautiful a poem would be hard to find. Loved this.

Thank you my friend, this one, was one from out of beautiful Portugal.... :) you always make my day brighter Jack, thanks so much...

[Lydia Shutter]

Outstandingly romantic, Elisa! Filled with longing and desire. Your love poems are a cut above the rest. I am blown away by the emotion! Again, a beautiful melody to accompany your words...and a lovely photo as well. Knuffels, Lydi**

Thank you so much again my friend... I'm so glad I could take you with me for a while to Portugal here xoxoxo knuffels!

[Joe]

Ahh Eli! xo
Beautiful Lines:

"I will come
Back to you every night,
So we can sleep together.
As we do dream together
A skyline of our own..." / Ahh So Heartfelt And Sad (sigh) x 100000000!

Lovely Ink! xo

Thank you so much Gabe! I'm so glad you enjoyed this one! xoxo :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

A vacation was very good for your muse, Elise. This is such a lovely, soulful poem. A true gem. Dream on and when you awaken, pen your dreams to share with the rest of us.

Thank you very much my dear friend.... for your lovely comment! can't wait to be back for your writes! x

[emman]

A very good poem with a very romantic music..Love is in the air..very nice poem.. :) (y)

Thank you Emman! :) good to see you around again! will be back soon! :)

[emman]

Very much welcome Elisa..been months or year I guess?hmmm

Yes, I think too, I didn't saw you in a while, I'm off and on too, my real life is busy always. Now I have holidays, so will be back after them! :) good to catch up!

[Rikkevi Rue]

only the moment can really speak...of the experience...when i held in my arms the joy of myself completed...the joy that soars forever into the highest sky...and there is only the mist...and the morning sun...and the joy...and you

Thank you so much Rikkevi, for your beautiful words, good to see you again! I will be back soon, after my holidays. :)

[Rikkevi Rue]

I think I was drunk when I wrote that! LOL, but what I was really trying to say is that you so artfully capture the aesthetics of love and the emotions that go with it that the only real comment one can utter about it is to reciprocate. At any rate you have caught the delicate butterfly of romance without damaging its wings...and that is a definite skill!

No worries he he... LOL :) thank you for this other beautiful one. You always have a way with words my friend. I feel honored by your words...

[Rikkevi Rue]

well you are welcome and it is always a pleasure my dear ;-0

[Kelly Scheppers]

I envy you, your travels...to write with such passion and emotion while on holiday. You are sorely missed in my part of the world!

Be well, my good friend!

Kelly
xo

Thank you so much Kelly, always.... keep an eye on your post box in real - life ;-)

[Everett DeValle]

I just love how you speak in your voice, Elisa...it truly is so cute...I love the warm intimacy of thoughts in this poem...the tenderness that you felt...the love that you share with you and yours...really beautiful...nicely done.

Thank you lovely one! :) I finally can connect a bit... urgh... hope my connection stays. When I finish my holidays, I'll be there for you!

[Everett DeValle]

Oh no worries, Elisa...I review at my leisure...nevertheless, your gratitude is always appreciated. :)

That's what I so love about you! :) you are so Dutch lol... love, live and let love and live....

[Everett DeValle]

Lol it's probably the Cali coastline :)

The Fog...sea salt misting in the air. :)

Def! yep!.... :D long live the freedom, and to feel the vibe of real life! ah~ I'm too long online already on here xD time to log off soon ;-) jk always so good to catch up Ev! xo

[Everett DeValle]

It's been hot though...heat wave...the mountains went through wild fire...I love hiking the mountains....just to be one with nature and get away from urban blight. :)

I saw it in the news, I even heard it on my car radio... underway. ;) me too, mountains we don't have here in the Netherlands, but I love the French Spanish Pyrenees, and the the Alps, of Swiss and Austria, the Apennines in Italy... hiked them all :D this time not though, went to Braga, and Porto. :D

[Everett DeValle]

Nice...that sounds fun in Europe...oh man, I was stuck in traffic one time during a wild fire...it was scary...because you don't know where the direction of flames are headed...planes dumping water...luckily I had a Gatorade bottle to piss into...I had to pee lol ;)

[h d e rushin]

i played this lovely song over and over. Thank you for this lovely poem EL. You are my favorite.
dana

You're my favorite too sweetest friend! xx thank you, so glad you enjoyed both of them! xx

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is mesmerizing Sis!...only you can write with your surreal touch!
There is sheer delight in letting love into your heart and soul... the dream is that much sweeter once you let it go softly into the night sky....

Forever, to rekindle again....Lovely Masterpiece... Magnifique!!!~xoxo~:)

Enjoy your time away... miss you, love! XXX

Thank you so much Sis! :) :) for all you are and do for me, even on my page... I so missed you! you're right, into the night sky with those fantastic dreams love... ha! :D xxxxxxx

[David Scott]

Oh if only... yet maybe dreams can be that real?
I could get lost along the warm shores of the Mediterranean...
Your poetry holds the breath today for me.
Thank you for this lovely dreaming.

Thank you so so much David, so glad you enjoyed this one!