~ In Love

~ In Love, E.L. Writes from my travel, (all alone)... Portugal, love, aware, here, now, me...

      

~ In Love

 

 

Every night, I look again

       Into the freckled sky,

             I think I shall never heal;

      Of being in love so deeply,

Surrounded by your love,

      And the sparkles of mist

            You spray softly on my skin,

      Yet, I remember; I was only

And alone, dreaming

      The sky high, in Portugal,

             And I must move on. Yes.

      Even though I will come

Back to you every night,

      So we can sleep together.

             As we do dream together

A skyline of our own...

 

             09/04/2013

           ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

I'm traveling, writing, living and loving... :)
Be back soon on full signal... wifi, reach, and reviews, catching up,
In between my holliday's.
Enjoy! xx

Reviews

[Jack...]

I am in awe of your talent. Your words bloom on the page like morning glories at dawn's first light. Your fingertips are love and they spread deep affection to all who read. Each verse is as a soft woolen blanket wrapping me tighty and keeping me warm. More beautiful a poem would be hard to find. Loved this.

Thank you my friend, this one, was one from out of beautiful Portugal.... :) you always make my day brighter Jack, thanks so much...

[icelandicblue]

This is so beautiful and sad. To visit only the one we love in our sleep. Your poetry is always so perfectly breathless and that last stanza put a tear in my eye. Sigh

Thank you so much Anne, I'm glad you enjoyed this travel write of me.... (hugs)

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is purely beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it.

Thank you very much... another exciting road trip it was.... of me :D

[alterego]

This is very romantic and full of love. Sometimes, every little bit counts when we fall in love. Even absence. You have the heart of a real poet.

Thank you kindly for your wonderful comment, alterego... I think you have one too! :)

[Antoñyo]

Quite the scenic read, this one...I thoroughly enjoyed it,

thanks for the share

Thank you for your time, and review Antonyo, truly appreciated... I've been off for long, but planning to be back soon... ;) I'll be back for your art.

[Antoñyo]

Not a prob, take your time!

♥ thank you for the extra time! ;)

[Androglossia]

Awww, I see myself on this poem. It's like listening to my own heartbeat. This is very romantic yet heart wrenching piece. My fave from you, lovely one.

Sweetie, I so missed you, thanks a bunch from here, safe home but not happy at all. I try to listen to my next heart-beat-trip. It's heart wrenching, to be never happy at one place. Lovely one, be back soon for your pieces of art, ♥

[Lover Of Words]

Wow Elisa. This is something else. You have pulled me In yet again. Not only is this amazing but you have seemed to pull at my own heart strings and emotional breaks within in the world of what we call first love. I love ur words my dear.

Thanks so much lovely one, I wrote this one, from my first travel, not so long ago, to Portugal, I went to Porto, and Braga.. :) drove it.... from the Netherlands, :) just a test I'm still alive, and I made it. ;) I'm so happy I'm alive and kicking, I can't think of being depressive, and giving up, you know, when I'm fighting a disease too, but I love life, there is so much still to love and live.... Portugal is amazing, when you once have the time to visit that country you should................ xxxxxxxxx

[Lover Of Words]

I most deffently wish to travel too. But my Health is not perfect as I am living with a defect from birth. So traveling out of the country can be quite troublesome. But I love this peice

My health isn't either, Oh love, I wishing you well, in all my prayers, even as an atheist.
:) I'm believing in that, what's right, from the heart, :) and I'm here on this moment, right to you.

I hope you recover soon, I truly hope it's nothing serious, and it will pass, if not, I'm wishing you most strength, and healing whispers, along my Northern way, and when I'm back, I'll mail you.

Love you Kels, keep on being strong, I know you're... ♥

[Lover Of Words]

My life long mission is always to live and love with all my soul. I will be just fine.

I think you're more strong than me sometimes..... xx

[Lover Of Words]

Oh love you are just as strong. Trust me I've had my hardships these last few weeks.

[J. J. Nightingale]

A skyline of our own..... Takes my breath away..

This reads like one of my dreams ... soft.. lovely ..

Beautiful, with heart, and longIng ..

Jasmine Xx ♥♥♥♥♥

Indeed... when we travel, the sky is ours... the stars I count each and every night, and think of my sweet friends. Love to you my dear, can't wait to read you when I'm home sweet home... (Hugs) xxx ♥

[J. J. Nightingale]

xxxxx ♥♥♥♥♥

[Balkaran Sidhu]

oh this is beautiful..the longing...nd nice pic...fits with the poem :)

Thank you very much for this nice review! :)

[Pax]

Love such as these.... I'll always knew that you'll be on the right place big sis... no matter where you are, the love of that special someone remains a home in your heart... a blooming piece!

Thank you so much sweety x