~ And On The Final Day

~ And On The Final Day, Travelers Romance, Love, Poetry Free Style, E.L. Elisa Laura Perfume

~ And On The Final Day

 

 

There was a table for two,

   On the end of the train carriage,

       I smelled your perfume as light as the wind;

It felt more familiar than ever,

    It was like I made love to you from afar,

         By the pure smell of your skin;

And the smell merged with

     Robust heart notes mixed with a fresh

          Touch of citrus and lavender,

Soft as the wind, to spoil my nose,

      And then you grabbed my hand,

            You rough firm handshake, was your character,

One could blindly recognize you with;

      And so I turned around, and

             Swallowed in tenderness, of love

Red cheeks, as fresh  as wild roses,

       With some dew on it…

              No, it was you, I didn’t dream it,

And the sparkles in your eyes,

         Were as if I read the most beautiful novel,

                While I stared at you...

A novel, I almost finished; but kept on

          Reading and repeating,

                 So the last chapter would never end,

It just needed to be there... for eternity;

          Over and over again, in the train scene;

                  Where they finally met, on their way

To the heart of Barcelona…

 

           ~ Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Thank you for reading xx

Sorry always for the many "edits" I am Dutch.
Just remember it, I catch up errors, all the time,
And I'm my own worst enemy ;-)
Not editing ever to be in the live feed....
I'm rather invisible ;-)

Reviews

[Pax]

How romantic, those moments, the first meeting of soulmates, the wonderful feeling it brought to the two lonely soul's journey, the noticeable bond between lovers - oh those feelings... i felt it here... a captivating scene you had brought us into this expressive piece... I really do like it...

Thank you for being a passenger on the love train too xx

[Solilokiss]

And the sparkles in your eyes were as if I'd read the most beautiful novel, never wanting it to end. How lovely that sounds. How romantic you write, dear Elisa. Very well done. Looking forward to reading you more!

Thank you very much, for the lovely review my friend :)

[Arcus]

Absolutely inspiring, and enthralling. I fell in love just reading this. Splendid work. This piece shines so vibrantly of absolute passion and affection. :)

Thank you so so much for being here, dear one! :) always a pleasure to read your thoughts. and I'm truly glad this one could inspire you... it's a dream I long for.... I wrote it out. Much kind greetings your way, and as I have to go now, to my tasks, I shall be back later to give you all you deserve with your art. Thank you once again. Elis x

[Arcus]

You are most welcome, dear friend! :)

[Tom]

Such a romantic ballad with the perfect ending, as the train chuffs into the sunset!

Sweetly divine !

Thank you so much Tom, I appreciate you and the visit!!

[Bob Sherunkle]

That was beautiful.I would like to be able to write on these subjects,but I think i'm too bitter! It was wonderful.

Thank you very much Bob, p.s. bitter can bring beautiful art too :) I'll be back for your works :) I'm glad you enjoyed... thanks for coming by.

[Bob Sherunkle]

Thank you..bitter brings you down though! Really enjoyed this piece.

Yes, it does... the thing is to balance, and pick out the perfect feelings of them both... thanks so much again.

[Manuel Samo]

I'm enthralled. Inundated by a bizarre but pleasant feeling. It most definitely is the love and affection this piece brings along. Good work

Thank you very much Manuel, I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.

[Manuel Samo]

Pleasure is mine

I come by for you soon! :)

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Beautiful work,Elisa(as always). There is nothing like that first encounter of magic when your heart is pumping and your soul is glowing for someone else. You have painted that beautifully here:))))))


Cord

Thank you so much my handsome friend. :) you know, life is just like a painting... you put all you can into it, but it can be rigid, and just hanging on the wall forever for someone to find it... ;)
I'm so glad and happy with your words, my precious friend. Love to you bud, and I'm a wreck now, but I'll be soon back, strong and kicking, ;) with handsome words LOL I hope haha....

Eli xo

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Feel better, darling :)))

For you I will... :))) x

[Everett DeValle]

Romance...I love it, Elisa...the imagery was vivid that I felt transported in view of this romance...a lovely write worth reading over and over again. ;)

Thank you so much my dear friend, I can't thank you enough, for all you do for me... sigh. I'm a wreck at the moment, (it's the truth), and I'm petrified to say anything or do on WC :( I hope I find my true self back soon... you cracking me up though love. Thankies. always, you're the best...

[Everett DeValle]

You are very welcome, Elisa.

Why? Just be you...you can't please everyone...the greatest prison you'll likely would live in is the fear of what others think of you. ;)

You are the best of the best, Elisa...my Dutch treat. :)

Sigh, yep, I think you're right :) soooooooooooo right!!!! I'm not living in a prison, and when I did, it was surrounded with only Asian bamboo, and I would fight through. :) and you're too my dear. My Cali sweety! :)

[Everett DeValle]

Lol awww, be blessed, Elisa. :)

You too dear friend... blessed be~ :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

You engage the heart of your reader like no other, Elisa. This is immeasurable to define...
so enticingly romantic and pulsing with charm.



My best,
Kelly
x

So do you love, always when I enter your realm of poetry! miss and love you! hugs!x

[David Scott]

You are far from invisible...
I like the picture. It was a beginning that had a pre ordained end... just a little way down the tracks.

Thank you dear! really.