~ I know we love Green

~ I know we love Green E.L. Elisa Laura, the state of being total off the world, of feeling love, and being sick... of love, sick and tired of being sick and tired....

~ I know we love Green

 

Through my window pane, this morning,

I saw a little bird resting on the

Branch of my giant

Oak Tree in front of my house;

 

It must have been you, resting

From a long trip, gasping for some air,

Talking to the morning magpies,

And reaching for me as my day clock

Has passed for days, into nightly slumbers;

 

Half fuzzy I wake, and see you there,

Reaching me, but my head is too numb;

Too tired, of all I’ve been through,

I can’t even turn from right to left,

So I speak to you in my dreams…

 

-          ~  Elisa Laura

Author's Note

Oh yeh, feel free... I do not care, if I get reviews or not really...
Just enjoy xx I'll be back when I feel so.

Reviews

[Matt Sayer]

Following out of sight, flitting in at the edges of perception, the Cheshire cat disappearing among the trees and materialising when the chaos plaguing Alice is most thick. Is that Fate I see in the distance? Or is it the echoes of the past come back to visit?
Such a personal and poignant poem, Elisa. Incredible. :) xx

Goodmorning from a windy Netherlands, sweetie... thank you so much. You feel my heart... it seems you have your hands on my heartstrings, and play me sweet music.

Goodmorning from a windy Netherlands, sweetie... thank you so much. You feel my heart... it seems you have your hands on my heartstrings, and play me sweet music.

there is more, but you got it all safe, and privately xx ;)

[Matt Sayer]

lol Gremlins again :) xxx

LOL, I think I want to Gizmo you right now! haha xxxx ;)

[MOON]

Beautifully described, go well Elisa and get better hon!

Thank you hon, I try my best to be back as soon as I can fully, :) writing, and posting in the meantime... thanks for being there for me sweet friend.

[Poetic Beauty]

This is so sad. It is hard to express that kind of loss and pain felt deep inside. The wanting to hold that person close again; feeling physically ill from hurt. Then at the same time frustrated that you feel that way. The music goes very well with this piece. The details are amazing. You can picture this woman standing weak tear streaked face staring out the world that doesn't matter.

My dear, ah! I've missed you, thank you for commenting so lovely on this one... you always have such a knack for feeling emotions, and to give a heartwarming review. I was off / on for 3 weeks, I think, suffering again with my disease wich came hardly back, after actually feeling pretty good for quite some time, this was a write that hit me before I collapsed again... I always write all on my notepad, and thought, why not to share a "really raw one" for it's the truth... sometimes before you go off, you see the most beautiful things... (as if it should be forever like that) experience... you know? :) i'm revovering, and this was the first night, to catch up again, I'm coming soon over for you, as always dear, thanks xx

[Poetic Beauty]

Sorry you weren't feeling/doing well. Hopefully that is past now. The raw poems are the ones that have great emotions and true sentiments tied to them. Writer on lady write on

Thank you for saying so, that's so sweet and encouriging of you. Sometimes, we have to accept, it is how it is... and not fake anything. :) love to you dear!

[Poetic Beauty]

I truly believe that many writers suffer from some form of depression panic or anxiety disorder or other afflictions. I think it is that we feel too much and that is how we can express with words so others feel them too.

Oh yes, for sure, it's true... mine is an bad auto-immune disease, wich makes me not function, in my head, (dizzyness) walking like a drunk, collapsing, and it for sure can give depression too after all the side effects... you don't trust your body anymore, and you're scared on every piece of the street, that it can happen again. But that also gives much inspiration to move on, and to be strong. :) The seizures came back lately so it made me anxious, but then, I never give up, and keep on smiling. :) you're such a sweetheart, thanks. x

[Poetic Beauty]

You are more than welcome. Being strong is all we have sometimes. It is good to see you on here and hold that head high. Hopefully they will find a treatment that works for you soon.

Still in all research, since 2010, hope that too... I so miss the old me, sometimes, but it will come, I'm sure :) tomorrow, I will be back for you, I saw you online sometimes when I was ill, and did read you in the meantime, you always write with such devotion, and passion, can't wait. xx dear friend!

[Poetic Beauty]

Reading helps escape the present if but for only a moment. Have fun and you are welcome to read anything you like. Lots to pick from. I have been on here for four or five years now.

[Lydia Shutter]

Magically dreamy and melancholy.....the longing for someone important to you is intense in this one. The imagery is superb. The song you chose to accompany your words is haunting. An absolutely wonderful package here. I read it several times to drink in all the nuances between the lines. Knuffels, Lydi**

Dank je wel so much my sweet friend, for being here, this was a write I did out of being half unconcious... I think we speak most true then, after all... :) I'm so glad you did listened to the song, for me all is music and poetry, and it's merged into eachother, as a new born baby. :) I can't thank you enough, I'm slow on reviewing, catching up tonight, I come by for you!!! :D Knuffels my dear! xxx

[Everett DeValle]

It was me, Elisa...lol jk

I love this...in it's dreamy way...like you were in bed lathargic just looking outside the window, some times inspiration to writing hits in moments like that...nicely scribed. :)

LOL Ev, thank you so much dear, it could be ;-) if you did your research you know the hummingbird only lives in the USA ;-) lol he had a long trip, no JK... it's just a metaphor :) indeed, I layed in bed, and did this write in less than 3 minutes. It came out of my toes. (sometimes you have those moments, of only feeling, and not thinking)... Thank you so much my dearest! xx

[Everett DeValle]

Lol I like hummingbirds...sadly, I shot one with a BB gun when I was a kid. :(

I had to bury it...I felt bad in way, yet I shot one fast bird lol jk

I hope you are feeling better...and that you recover well, Elisa. :)

Aww, you did? well I killed one in my car lately : ( it was a dove... it flew just infront of the motor.... I cried the whole day, I was broken. Sigh... I do feel much better, not there yet, but I have found my fuzzy mind back ;-) so, slowly catching up on the toilet here.. :D you're sweet Ev, thanks for all!

[Everett DeValle]

Lol that's a typical cancer woman for ya...I ran over a cat once, and I felt...well, I didn't think about for a second, I was late for work lol aaaah I'm messing


I hope you feel better, I came by to cheer you up, Elisa. :)

The stupid but true fact is, when it happens, you can't stop, for being such a mess for your crowd behind you... but * big urghs * I'm such a sensitive a*s sometimes... yep, cancer... :D it can mess with your mind ;-) You are the best, you always cheer me up!!! can't thank you enough my bestie xoxo :)

[Everett DeValle]

I Love cancer women...loving and loyal yet really Really emotional and very very moody when not pleased lol

Awe, I'm glad I cheered you up, Elisa. :)

All true, I can't denial... I'm very sweet, but don't bite me, with injustice, or anything... for I can be bitchy hahaha... it's the little lynx in me. I must say, I'm changed, during my health, I accept things more now, and I'm ever patient. LOL, but when I can't go to a music concert, (for example when it's cancelled), I can piss off everyone that day!! hahaha... lol always Ev, hope you have a great eve... I slowly come by for more, I feel like a turtle... lol

[Everett DeValle]

I know this from cancer women lol...I don't think I've dated a cancer woman in a while lol
read moreI know this from cancer women lol...I don't think I've dated a cancer woman in a while lol

But they sure are good lovers...I thought I told you this my first GF was a cancer woman...she was heavy into alt rock back in the 90's...she got me into it...alternative music is and always be a part of me because of her. ;)

Haha... Oh, my, I just can tell you I match well with piecis, sagattarius, and some aries... (spanish ones for sure lol)... my sign needs a strong man, with dare, and spontaneous actions, who is tender, and not a b*****d lol... ah shoot, I can't read more here the glitches of WC are not allowing me, (maybe it's for the best :P) jk...

[Everett DeValle]

Pisces or Scorpio, or me a Capricorn lol jk

I get along with Pisces Scorpio or cancer...I know them to well lol...In that story I wrote it was Pisces and Gemini lol I should of wrote as astrological signs lol

Sagittarius are hit or miss for me, so is Aries...but I do enjoy a Leo Woman, they just get weird though lol...my favorites are Pisces, Gemini, Taurus, Cancer, Virgo and scorpios lol just in a compatible way but I've gotten along well with the other signs but not as well as the signs I mentioned. :)

[Everett DeValle]

Actually a Taurus is a very good match for you. :)

Haha, lol... ah see? all water ones... :) I doub Scorpio... though, I'm not a hero in these things... I just went back to my ex-es... here. I was almost Gemini, born on 22th of June, if I was born one day earlier I was Gemini... I'm a summerchild. But wear a moon sign, it's very complicated to hang out with me lol.... be aware :P so cool you tell me about lol, that's what friends do :)

You think the Taurus is? not too much firework? it can kill too, that's why all Taurusses are ex lol...

[Everett DeValle]

Gemini smh...and Pisces smh lol or Scorpio lol

I wish you a speedy recovery, Elisa, God speed. :)

[Everett DeValle]

Oh I'm going by what I've learned...you know learned all this astrological sign stuff by one of my exes lol aaaah cray cray

They say Taurus is one of mine but it's been hit or miss with me with them too, really.

To be totally honest, I think I can't match with any sign, for I'm a loner.... when it comes to the end. :) I love to be free, and on my own. However I yearn then again for some romance... hehe... I'm a weird creature. I've accepted it. :P how cool you learned that all!!! pass it over to me!

[Everett DeValle]

That's true, it really comes down to who get along with...I was talking romantically and sexually for me...I do use astrology for characteristic traits...but one if my exes was deep into it...she was a Scorpio lol nah but scorpios are good people, my best friend is one...but then again we compete hard when it comes to sports lol

Haha.... it depends, I agree... the person not depends only on a zodiac sign, for it can have so many more special caracter properties, but then it's fun to see how it can be true in some reason on what we both have experienced... lol

[Everett DeValle]

True, really, there's no sure thing...I can only speak from experience...the ones that do gravitate towards me is the signs I've mentioned. Leo and caps would be an honorable mention. :)

I belief that for sure with you!!! for you need a little bite, and a stubborn woman too, to fight for! :) I think you will be the best for her. Always so good to talk with you Ev. xo

[Everett DeValle]

Thank you baby girl! :)

De nada mi amigo y mi "Toreador" de corazon... :)

[Everett DeValle]

Lol actually you would love California...it's a Spanish speaking state...I do have respect for my Mexican folks. :)

Si si I would love.... so much, the mexican influences there, and "L.A. and S.F." who can be both can be spoken out in Spanish aswell in English, ah! makes my heart beat faster :) I do have too ya know, my vatos locos pic... ;-)

[Everett DeValle]

Lol definitely in LA and SF...I better let you go soon, I have to go do fantasy football draft! I'm pumped!

LOL haha ok ok.... :) I go in a while too... tired... more reviews tomorrow, lol, you didn't gave me the break to do others, but I don't blame you :D it was amazing to catch up! so others may wait... all is relaxed :D have a lovely rest of the eve!!!! Te quiero amigo!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Your words are eloquently written, Sis...a flowing stream of conscience thoughts...

I felt as if I were floating down a tranquil river of your dream...

This is so lovely in it's purity... very moving and heartfelt..Love it! ~xoxo~

Thank you so much sweet Sis, always.... I'm glad you saw all positivism in it... (it's your own strong personallity)... Love you xoxo :)

[KeeD]

Sublime, calming and yet so gripping. Like a breath of fresh air... this poem tells of beauty of days passed by. Beautiful picture, words and music. A complete Elisa presentation. If I ever did take a poetry/literature writing class I'd like to learn from somewhere like you, who can provide inspiration, invoke creation and just add a touch of magic, i'm pretty sure it can't be taught but if it could you'd definitely be the teacher i'd want.

Thank you so much sweetheart, Fewww, I feel honored with your words, really. Didn't saw that coming ;-) Thank you for seeing so much beauty in it my friend. I'm so glad you liked this one. xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

"It must have been you, resting
From a long trip, gasping for some air,
Talking to the morning magpies,
And reaching for me as my day clock
Has passed for days, into nightly slumbers;"

What a lovely interpretation you've made, Elisa...to write with such bounty of devotion, and have it read with all the loftiness of a dream!

Kelly
x

Thank you so much my sweet friend, for saying all this... your review makes me happy, and I'm working hard to come back soon... love Eli x

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm sending hugs...be well, my dear friend! (((((((((( Elisa ))))))))))

[Aethereal]

What you have beautifully described here is an event that happens all the time whereby our dreams merge with visions of those things which are calling us to awaken such as a song bird outside of our bedroom window.

Thank you Cloudy.... :) I'm a dreamer... Like u

[kublakhan27]

A rich blend of ideal beauty and resigned reality...you've had to wade between these two states all too often dear sis...every time I read one of poems of yours, I instinctively wonder what you're up to at the moment and hoping you're alright...a profoundly personal and reflective piece...well done my dear, love and hugs as always :) xoxo

Thank you bro... You always dig deeper, I like that about you... Hugs and love xx

[kublakhan27]

Always a pleasure my dear friend...I hope all is well with you, I'll be in touch with you soon *love and hugs* xo

Thank you again, I owe you a lot of reviews, and I will. Take your time my friend, no rush... I'm not around much either. But I will be here for you always. x

[kublakhan27]

Take your time as well my friend ;) I know we're always there for each other as well...love and hugs xo

[Joyce S. Greene]

Very lovely, Elisa. The tranfiguration of the lover to dream bird and back again is very moving - I felt her longng for connection but unable to see him clearly except in a dream. Loved the poem and the graphic.

Thank you so much Joyce...